~Emo~ Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 [align=center]Based on the game, DOOM. This is intended for ages 15+. [spoiler=Hell: 0] Mars Base……… 2:29 PM………. “This way, this way! Set it down slowly.” the worker motioned the tractor. The tractor drops the crate heavily on the platform. “What did I just say?” . “Just cool it, Marcel.” . “There is precious cargo in there so I will not “cool” it.” . “Jesus…”. Marcel walked away muttering and went to the soda machine. “Never get any good employees. “ he muttered. Marcel walks back to his work position when he is stopped by the current lead scientist, Tiffany La’fen. “Miss, La’fen, what are you doing here, if I may ask.”. “I am just wondering why the hell are all these people in the infirmary? “ . “Well, after the “Incident” we managed to capture one of them. In which we were amazed by its ability, we made the product, but its not doing to well.” “The product was fine a few months ago, what happened?”. “I honestly don’t know. “. “Well you better fix it or I will fire all your asses.” Yes ma’am.”. Mrs. La’fen walked away. Marcel walked back to his post. “Hey, slacker where are you?’ The tractor was empty and the workers were gone. “Were the hell is everybody?” Marcel walks over to the intercom. “All employees report back to your stations immediately!” He waited 17 minutes but no one came. “Damn it.” His radio gets a message. “The ones in the infirmary, they…they…..DAMN IT NO!” “What the hell?” Marcel pulled out his pistol and proceeded to look for the infirmary. “Were is everyone?” Marcel radio turns on and hey hears variations of pistol and machine gun fire as well as screaming. Marcel looks up and the intercom blares out “ Everyone out of the sector, NOW. “ Marcel runs down the hall but trips. When he looks back to see what he tripped on, he see’s his workers body with bloody bite marks all over it. “Goddamn!” Marcel runs down the hall and into the closes room and locks the door.. Marcel then sends out an emergency transmission. “God I hope the receive that.” As soon as he stopped the door blasted open and a skeleton appeared with two rocket launchers on its back. “Dear god…” Marcel shoots it in the head killing it. Marcel then runs toward the nursing room were babies are kept before being sent back to earth. Marcel sat down to rest. “Its happening again, but this time its much different.” Suddenly a weak voice says “Momma.” Marcel turns around and a baby is standing in its crib. “How the hell did you talk?” Marcel looking into the babies eyes and they were red. “Oh god!” The babies jumped out. The baby had the bottom half of an insect and had small wings and pincer like hands. It jumped and knocked Marcel’s gun out of his and. Then another baby jumped on Marcel and bit him. Soon Marcel was swarmed in them and they ripped his throat out and killed him. But not before he locked down the entire sector. But little did they know what they had just done. [spoiler=Hell: 1] Marine Base Headquarters…….. New York City………… “Boys! I have an announcement!” Said the Sarge. “I am picking a team of 12 men to go to the UAC complex on mars with me for a level 5 breach. “ “Holy ****.” said a marine. “You cannot be serious.” said another. “I’ll explain everything to the marines who accompany me. The marines I choose are as followed: Decker, Woods, Simmons, Dean, Richards, Glider, Black, Sebas, Peirce, Burton, Avris , and Rivers.” “I want all of you to meet me in the landing zone in 2 hours. Fall out men!” “This is bull.” Said Rivers. Landing Zone……… All the men arrive and pile in the chopper. Each Soldier grabs their own gun. Decker grabs a P90, Woods and assault rifle, Rivers a shotgun, Simmons, Dean, Richards, and Glider a Assault riffle, Black a chain gun with a small rocket launcher on the side, Sebas a plasma rifle, Peirce two machine pistols, Burton an elephant gun, avis arms a MP5, and sarge wields a BFG 9000. “Listen up men, here is the situation, the UAC complex on mars has had a level 5 breach.” “Ummm, whats that mean sarge?” Says rivers. “It means that something that needs to be contained is up there, and its are job to do it.” The chopper arrives at the Nevada portal and transfer to mars. \ Mars…… UAC….. The Marines arrive to the deserted complex and search around until Decker finds a little girl. “Guys, I found a survivor!” “You did?” said the Sarge. “Whats your name?” the little girl does not answer. “Do you know what happened here? Were did everyone go?” the little girl did not reply. “Grab her and lets go!” Decker tries to grab the girl but she bites his cheek off. “DAMN IT, SARGE.” “GODDMANED! GET HER OFF HIM!” Rivers blows the girls head off with his shotgun. Decker falls on the floor and dies. “look at her body, its melting away.” said rivers. “Rivers, you, Sebas and Avris go to the medical room and get us some supplies,” “Yes sarge!” the three go deeper into the complex until the start finding bodies on the floor. “Sarge, we got bodies, lots of em’.” “Can you identify them?” “No, but I think they are workers, just not important ones.” They continue down the halls until they reach the nursery which is next to the medical room. “mommy” a voice said. “What the hell was that?” sebas said. The look down and see a mutilated body. “Sarge we got another body.” “Can you identify him?” “Ummm, we have a willits, Marcel willits. “MOMMY” “What the HELL?” suddenly demonic baby beasts jump out t them. “What the….?” “Ummm sarge, whe got a problem.” [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 pretty good start, but this fic better not get discontinued like your Vampires vs. Werewolves one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Eh. i'll repost that when i wanna continue it. All I have introduced its the Revant and cherubs so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 nothing new. Those are easy to kill in Doom anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 I mixed it up a bit. Notice I show the Events in DOOM3 and ROE happened, but its an infection this time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 yeah I noticed that. I hope you get Betruger to return or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 I might. And I will explain how the virus works and what demon the captured. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 that's good, as long as it's not C24 like in the film, the film was terrible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Its not. Its still a satanic presence involved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 that's good. Doom doesn't fit with mutagen virus that's man made and all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 I am also only using weapons from DOOM 3 and ROE with a few exceptions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Good, I hope to be seeing the BFG9000 very soon....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 I was gonna make an uber mancubus with BFG's for hands......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 fine, then he can explode for foolishly charging the BFG for too long Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 fine' date=' then he can explode for foolishly charging the BFG for too long[/quote'] Also, I was thinking of adding succubus's. Just 4 fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Hmmm. Don't recall that in Doom 3 or ROE, what are they? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Hmmm. Don't recall that in Doom 3 or ROE' date=' what are they?[/quote'] Gothic women with demonic like wings. That lust for men then kill them but i'll prob not add them because it would be one of those filler moments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 you can use it for the comedy events Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 you can use it for the comedy events I think not because i just got a thought. "Why did you fall for that?" "jabronitits." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 that's only ONE thought. Make more thoughts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 i dunno. Maybe female Z-seC? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 now that I didn't think of. I guess that could work too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 gah. Mods are naive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
super dimentio Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 do you mean black doom from shadow the hedgehog.devil doom from shadow the hedgehog,doom from the fantastic four or doom as in life is over.because i think the last choice sounds fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Glad to see you back, Emo. I hope for the next update to come soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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