uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 nice but a bit overpowered otherwise nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tekken Ham Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 Brok-en and u could spellcheck it too. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 a bit overpowered you could cut down the increased ATK to 500 or something4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kutakun Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 bring the gain down to 700 instead of 1000. Grammar check it as well.. Not bad though.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 what about now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kutakun Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 Grammar Check.. lowering it to 500 was a good idea though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 Grammar Check.. lowering it to 500 was a good idea though. and how should the grammar be if i may ask?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kutakun Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 Proper spelling and a knowledge of the English language? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 Proper spelling and a knowledge of the English language? and u didn't even think that English isn't my language...not very smart r u?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kutakun Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 If your going to argue bring it up in PMS.. Read your card and think before you type.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 If your going to argue bring it up in PMS.. Read your card and think before you type.. i made it,don't u think i read it already??except the "Tihis" i don't know what to change Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kutakun Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 "This card 'gain' 500 ATK 'Point'." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 "This card 'gain' 500 ATK 'Point'."Â add 2 S..thats all? if so wouldn't it be alot easier to just say so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kutakun Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 You wouldn't learn much then would you? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Webby69r Posted December 15, 2007 Report Share Posted December 15, 2007 and you said my cards were overpowered!?!?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted December 15, 2007 Report Share Posted December 15, 2007 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted December 15, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2007 and you said my cards were overpowered!?!?! yeah i did cause they r..even more overpowered then this one.. negate all opponents attack is more overpowered than a free direct attack and a monster that gain 500 per turn...and y the hell would u revive a 2 month old tread just to find one of my cards that where overpowered...i have new ones u know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 there are quite a few errors with it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 opponet's needs the ' before the s 9/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 simple spelling mistakes. other than that, good job! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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