devil.dreamz Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 well this my first time so tell me how i did ok.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Slime Lord Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 First of all, there is no such type as "sprit". Next, make sure you capitilize things like names and the first word of a sentence (yes, in Realistic Cards, spelling and grammar are very important). Also, its a little underpowered. Oh well, I'd rather see an underpowered card than an overpowered one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ncheng1997 Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 ok what he ^ said and 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devil.dreamz Posted November 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 ok ty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ncheng1997 Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 thats a overpowerd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devil.dreamz Posted November 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 it is =$ i did in kno Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devil.dreamz Posted November 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 but atless its have 5 stars -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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