Digimon: final clash

[Murch]

[spoiler=prolouge]

Over time there have been many tamers through the digital world, keeping the area safe from those who wish to harm it. Many dark digimon have formed groups to begin a rule over the world, none of which have succeeded. A tamer named kiara, with her partner killer, became a force that fought for balance, instead of light or dark. Many have died in the wake of this team, including killer himself. The reign of yggdrasil over the digital world has ended, and many digimon are afraid that the demon lords will rise again. But even the demon lords are afraid of a new power.

 

 

[spoiler= chapter one]

"The big robot attacked, but my little dinosaur dodged and knocked his block off!" The old lady paused her story, thinking deeply.

"Then what happened gramma?" Three children asked her.

"Well it's all a blur. I remember that wargreymon would take new forms each battle, but that's really it."

"Oh well. Thanks for the story gramma!" said Kiran, one of the children. the three went up to bed

"Do you really like those stories? Gramma probobly just made those up in a few minutes," said Donovan, oldest of the three.

"I know they're not true, but they're great stories! Could you at least TRY to be polite for once?" yelled Kiran, annoyed at his snotty, impolite brother.

Before Donovan could return the insult, Andra screamed at the two to shut up.

"Why should I?" Donovan snapped back. Insted of yelling back, Andra, who was a Black Belt in multiple martial arts, punched him in the stomach and proceded to use some of her best moves.

"GOOD GRAVY!" The old woman screamed, seeing Andra kick Donovan in the head. Donovan coughed blood onto the floor.

"I'm... fine.." Donovan muttered.

After a few hours, Donovan felt better, though his grandmother was sceptical.

"Why did you kick him, Andra?" The lady yelled.

"He kept yelling and being mean and insulting you." Andra said sheepishly.

Suddenly a bright light flooded the room. The three children disappeared in a flash.

"I hope they paid attention to my stories," Kiara said, worried.

 

[Kendo Fish]

NEEDZ MOAR CAPITAL LETTERS!

 

Seriously, you didn't use any. What do you have against them? D:

 

A partner named Killer? What a horrible name. Not even the worse name Killermon? Aren't the partners Digimon? Or is that something in the latest season? *shrug*

 

Also, I like Digimon, but since I'm not in on the plot and such, the Yggdrasil ruling the Digiworld and crap is new to me. But you say it like everyone who is a Digimon fan, regardless of whether they've watched most of the anime or not, automatically knows this.

 

What did Kiara do of note besides kill crap? Describe her adventures a bit moar. Did she kill Evildeathmon or something? Killer HIMSELF died? Describe the event moar so that I don't remain sad. 9: *weird frown*

 

MEH, sorry for all of this nitpicking. But stories should be improved! *smiles and points upward for no apparent reason*

[Murch]

killer is a nickname for a BWAgumon, sorry about the caps, i'll fixem!

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