Skuldur Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Rate, hate, love, CnC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 [align=center]Not bad at all.I think you draw pretty well :P[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 The finger behind all the others shouldn't show so much.Hair seems choppy at some places. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 The finger behind all the others shouldn't show so much. I thought it fit in there pretty well. =o Still' date=' I think the hand is too small.[/b']Hair seems choppy at some places. Yeah, I'm working on improving the hair on my drawings. =( Still, I think this is my best so far. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 It is your best ;DAnd yeah, compared to the head, the hand's too small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ŞťřïЖЄѓ™ Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 This is like, WOW!Nice job, man! I wish I could draw good, but I can't. :( Well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 i have just a few pointers :)(you might already be aware of this)the hand is way, well smallremember that a hand in anime, even in real life is about as big as the face,also the eye would have a more curved down corner(the left part, you understand?)and when drawing hair, you don't need to draw all individual ones more like chunks of themone more thing the chest should be way bigger, because compared to the head, it looks really small(This is all constructive critisim) I hope this helps :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 I didnt feel like reading so if this has already been said ignore it. The hand is too small compared too the head.Too much hair imo Also, i liekd alucard better D::: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Nice.And ya the hand is to small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 I didnt feel like reading so if this has already been said ignore it. The hand is too small compared too the head.Too much hair imo Also' date=' i liekd alucard better D:::[/quote'] I like my original name better. >=O i have just a few pointers :)(you might already be aware of this)the hand is way' date=' well smallremember that a hand in anime, even in real life is about as big as the face,also the eye would have a more curved down corner(the left part, you understand?)and when drawing hair, you don't need to draw all individual ones more like chunks of themone more thing the chest should be way bigger, because compared to the head, it looks really small(This is all constructive critisim) I hope this helps :)[/quote'] The hair is done Shojo Beat style. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Not bad....but a word of advice from a fellow artist. SKETCH everything first. I see ALOT of eraser marks. Make sure you sketch until you've got the final design down pat. THEN darken the lines in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Not bad....but a word of advice from a fellow artist. SKETCH everything first. I see ALOT of eraser marks. Make sure you sketch until you've got the final design down pat. THEN darken the lines in. The pencil I'm using isn't good for sketching. I need to buy a better pencil. =( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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