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Max darkness is a genius.

 

Max' date=' please respond to my PMs.

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Thanks.

 

What PMs are these? I've responded to the ones about the register form and the thing in October/November. I didn't respond further because I thought the 'discussion' had ended.

 

Are there others that you want me to reply to?

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thx man=]

 

[spoiler=what are the errors on this card?]

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LORE:A monster that battles this face-down Defense Position monster is destroyed after the end of the Damage Step. You may flip this card face-up during your Main Phase to Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand. This Special Summon is treated as a Normal Summon. As long as this card remains on your side of the field, Warrior-Type monsters do not have to be Special Summoned.

 

 

EDIT:i got help you can rate if you want i guess

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thx man=]

 

[spoiler=what are the errors on this card?]

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LORE:A monster that battles this face-down Defense Position monster is destroyed after the end of the Damage Step. You may flip this card face-up during your Main Phase to Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand. This Special Summon is treated as a Normal Summon. As long as this card remains on your side of the field' date=' Warrior-Type monsters do not have to be Special Summoned.

 

 

EDIT:i got help you can rate if you want i guess

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Overall, very well done. What follows is my OCG Fix, which will use slightly different wording since my OCG is hybrid version.

 

A monster that battles this face-down Defense Position monster is destroyed at the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand in Attack Position. If you do, flip this card face-up. This Special Summon is treated as a Normal Summon. A long as this card remains [You may wish to add 'face-up' or 'face-down' here] on your side of the field, (Then the effect gets confusing; see below).

 

When you say 'Warrior-Type monsters do not have to be Special Summoned'; what are you saying? Are you referring to this card's effect, despite this effect not Special Summoning anything? Or are you referring to card effects such as "Marauding Captain"'s, where a Special Summon is an option? Please elaborate.

 

And what Lrovani said was right, add a space after the comma.

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LORE:A monster that battles this face-down Defense Position monster is destroyed at the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand in Attack Position. If you do, flip this card face-up. This Special Summon is treated as a Normal Summon. A long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, Wariior-Type monsters do not have to be special summoned.

 

 

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So you're doing a new 'pairing up thing'? Cool!

 

May I get a partner? (Or Buddy' date=' whatever lol)

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Wow, you're fast. We're definitely doing that, but need a bit of time for responses. We'll pair the first newbie we get, to you. Hopefully that will be soon.

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