Riku Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 [align=center]Im Making a Fan Fic kinda called Livior Series. me and my cousin were bored on our Vacation and decided to write a story.[spoiler=Plot]Long ago there was a Planet called Livior. It was a Peaceful Planet. It was inhabited by humans, Angels and even Demons. There once was a lord his name was Chris he was always the best Lord he had a loving Wife Named Bertha and A son named Destery. Well one Stormy day Chris became Utterly Sick. The Next day he was declared dead, and his Wife Bertha was mysteriously assassinated by somebody So Destery had to Rule the Kingdom at a young age. 10 Years later Destery was 17 and he was an Evil Lord. Destery had started a War with the People who tried to fight back. Zeadon, his Friend Wes, and His Friend Becca were all in the war to help Stop Destery. Destery Ended up killing Wes’ and Zeadon’s Parents and left them Parentless at the age of 16 now they are 18 and They Pledge to Kill Destery and Save Livior. [spoiler=Characters] Name: Zeadon.Sex: Male.Age: 17.Weapon: Usually Magic.Element: Darkness.Bio:Zeadon is a fierce Fighter, he isnt weak nor a joke. He tends to be Very Cocky when it comes to fighting and thinks he is all that. Zeadon Parts on a Journey with Mirage and the others to Help save Livior after Destery had Killed his Family Sparing Zeadon's Life.Appearence: Name: Becca.Sex: Female.Age: 17.Weapon: A Scimitar Sword.Element:Wind.Bio: Becca is a good friend of Zeadon and Wes. She uses Wind as an Advantage in fighting for Incresed Speed and Power. Becca has had a crush on Zeadon Since 6th grade. Becca can Tend to be Shy at times.Appearence: Name: Wes.Sex: Male.Age: 16.Weapon: Staff/Magic and a Dagger.Element:Thunder.Bio: Wes has been a good friend of Zeadon and Becca for a long time. Wes had no clue of the war until Destery had killed Zeadon and his Family on the same day. Wes has grown a crush on Becca in the Years of knowing her.Appearence: Name: Mirage.Sex: Male.Age: Never Revealed but looks like in early 20sWeapon: Magic.Element: Fire.Bio: When Livior was in Grave danger in the Feature and the only hopes of saving Livior where destroyed, Mirage had come from the Feature to Make a team with the people who hold a potential to save Livior. Appearence: Name: Derek.Sex: Male.Age: 24.Weapon: Bow and ArrowsElement: Earth.Bio: Derek was always the tough guy until the war started and he was attacked by Motovs Killing his Wife and Kids and Greatly Injuring Derek. Derek join Mirage to Avenge his Family and kill Destery.Appearence: Name: KujaSex: MaleAge: 17½Weapon: A long scytheElement: WaterBio: Kuja was a great water sorcerer in his village, until Destery destroyed it and burned it to the ground. Kuja's sole purpose in life has been to destroy Destery ever since, and with his water talents, he can create barriers, weapons, and other objects made of water. He can also control and create ice and snow.Appearance: NOTE: He is NOT Kuja from FF 9, I just wanted to create a Character based on my Username. (Made by Kuja The Magnificent) [spoiler=Chapters] [spoiler=Chapter I- The Beginning!] In the blinding sunlight Zeadon sat on his porch thinking of what to do about the war and how to avenge his family. “Hey!” Becca said Smiling as she ran up and sat next to Zeadon Smiling and slightly blushing. “How have you been?” Becca asked as she scooted closer to Zeadon. “Oh Hi Becca… I have been good just thinking about stuff.” Zeadon said as he smiled back and looked at Becca. “How have you been, how was your vacation away from all this madness?” Zeadon asked.“I have been real good and the Vacation was awesome! You totally have to come next time! So where is Wes he is usually with you?” Becca asked as she put an arm around Zeadon.Zeadon replied with “He is at his house training, I mean if another one of Destery’s minions are sent out it is better to be prepared then Un-Prepared, ya know?” Zeadon said. “I know what you mean.” Becca Sighed “So well do you have any plans?” Becca asked. Wes suddenly walked up “Hey Guys!” Wes said with joy as usual. “Speak of the Devil” Zeadon laughed “What’s up?” Zeadon asked. “Yeah what sup?” Becca asked. “Nothing just finished training.” Wes Added. “You want me to leave you two alone?”Becca asked. “Please?” Wes asked “Noooo….” Zeadon looked down. “ don’t worry I still love you and I’ll be back ” Becca Whispered kissing Zeadon and walking off. “Do I smell love in the air?” Wes asked as Becca punched Wes in the stomach not to hard but not soft. After about 20 minutes of Wes and Zeadon exchanging words a storm rolled in. “Whoa look at those clouds they don’t look normal they’re purple!” Zeadon said. “Yeah I….” Wes Stopped as he looked over the hill to see an Army of Demroids heading their way. The Army continued to approach then Wes and Zeadon noticed some guy leading the army. “Oh…No…Th…That’s …D…Destery!” Wes Said. “I can take him!” Zeadon remarked as he made Black Aura flow around his hand. “Now…Now…” Destery said to Zeadon as he stopped “Demroids take care of the village I’ll take care of these fools!” Destery said. “Yes Sir” a Demroid said as they began to head to the town burning it and killing innocent people. “How do you like me now!!!?” Destery said as he grabbed his sword. “Now Die!” Destery and Zeadon lunged at each other at the same time. “Liviosa!!” Wes said as he shot a Thunder ball at Destery. “Pathetic!” Destery remarked as he grabbed the thunder ball and hit Zeadon with it. “FURSOA!!!” some guy shouted as Fire began to burn Destery making him back away. “I only know one person who can do that!” Destery shouted. “HURRY IF YOU WANT TO LIVE, GET OVER HERE!!” The man shouted as he grabbed Zeadon and Wes’ shoulders and teleported out from the battle field into a forest about 10 miles away. “Are you guys Wes and Zeadon?” The man asked. “I’m Zeadon… That’s Wes” Zeadon points to Wes. “I really don’t care, I'm Mirage… I'm from the feature I’m here to make a team to destroy Destery and his army. And I'm here to train you Zeadon!” Mirage said “Train me what are you talking about, I'm an expert at fighting!” Zeadon said. “Yeah that’s why you’re our only hope in saving Livior and you die!” Mirage said. “What happens to me?” Wes asked. “You kill yourself to save Zeadon which he dies about three hours after you commit Suicide.” Mirage began to laugh. “WHATS SO FUNNY?!??!” Wes shouted “Just think if you hadn’t killed yourself you’d probably have saved Livior.” Mirage laughed again. “Enough small talk, this is what I need you for. I'm making a team to fight against Destery. The team so far consists of Your Girlfriend Becca. A Guy Named Derek and a guy named Kuja. Now are you in?” Mirage asked holding out a scroll where Wes and Zeadon should sign if they want to join. “I guess I'm in!” Wes Smiled and began to sign the Scroll. “What about you Zeadon?” Wes asked. “Hm…” Zeadon thought. “I guess… just to save Livior! Then after that I’m going to want no part in this!” Zeadon said. “I guess that’s okay… Now Sign!” Mirage said. Zeadon began to Sign the Scroll. “Now what do we do?” Wes asked. “Now we meet with the group and introduce ourselves.” Mirage stated. “Are you guys ready?” Mirage asked. “Yup.” Wes said and walked over to Mirage. “What about you Zeadon?” Mirage asked. “I guess…” Zeadon walked over to Mirage. “Okay let’s go!” Mirage said as he grabbed Zeadon and Wes’ shoulders and teleported to a Remote Island called Sephito which was thousands of miles away from the forest. CHAPTER I WILL BE POSTED ONCE I FINISH TRANSFERING IT TO MY COMPUTER!!! I AM VERY TIRED SO IT MAY HAVE TO BE DONE BY TOMARROW AFTER MY ERRANDS[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 I see you used one of my usual RP characters, Derek, as a main character. You should have asked me first, but it's ok. Great plot! May I suggest a character? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Actully i never read one of your Rp's lol he was based on my friend Derek Braun and possibly you may post it... and i can probally hook it up in Chapter 3 since im halfway finished with 2 in my notebook and i havnt started typing it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Tight chapter!!!Dont stop writing!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Actully i have to for the night im uber tired, i have work and i havnt slept in a day or two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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