The beast world set

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These are my beast world set(more to come)

plz rate,and seeing as i dont think they're perfectly balanced i didnt post this in the realistic thread. plz rate

just removed warrior of the beast world for editing

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come on ppl, how come everything i do is ingored..rate!!!(dont comment on the ingored thing)

[Zander_Monster]

If both "Portal into the Darkness" and "King of the Beast World" are on the field, it it a total of 500 or 1000 ATK points?

 

Work on card grammar (capitalisation, clarification, "Warrior of the best World" lol), and I would probably make them all Dark attribute Monsters, or Earth.

 

And bumping after less than an hour is kind of useless. Wait a day or two first.

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If both "Portal into the Darkness" and "King of the Beast World" are on the field' date=' it it a total of 500 or 1000 ATK points?

 

Work on card grammar (capitalisation, clarification, "Warrior of the [i']best[/i] World" lol), and I would probably make them all Dark attribute Monsters, or Earth.

 

And bumping after less than an hour is kind of useless. Wait a day or two first.

yes to the first one

where are the problems

and ok

[Luna Diviner]

preety good cards 8/10

[university222]

not bad i guess 7.6/10

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thx.ill be making more along with editing the one i had taken out