yugiohchampcardmaker Posted November 7, 2007 Report Share Posted November 7, 2007 [attachment=11153] good or bad? need changes? let me know and tell me those changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serrenox Posted November 7, 2007 Report Share Posted November 7, 2007 It needs many changes. Fix the grammar. Read some real cards to figure out some good OCG (Official Card Grammar). You've also posted this in the wrong section. It should be in the "Realistic Card" section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Slime Lord Posted November 7, 2007 Report Share Posted November 7, 2007 Fix the wording. And wrong section, buckwheat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serrenox Posted November 7, 2007 Report Share Posted November 7, 2007 Settle down, he is a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohchampcardmaker Posted November 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2007 ok I did a few more changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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