R3DN30N Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 V1: V2: Cnc please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 No depth, everything is the exact same distance away, actually the close-up focal kind of looks like he is farther away than the effects behind himNo blending at all, he's simply there.He does not fit in with the background in any shape or formThe lighting is just absolutely dead. The brightest part of the whole thing is right behind where the focal is in total darkness.The background looks like just an ugly mash of brushesFlow is messed up by the clutter. Most things are going correctly to the top left, but then you have all these criss crossing lines and effects that just ruin itRender is extremely low quality and cuts off on the right There's more, but you need to work on these first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 The render is blurry, no depth, barely any flow from my perspective. I find it too bright also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coolmoo Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 No depth' date=' everything is the exact same distance away, actually the close-up focal kind of looks like he is farther away than the effects behind himNo blending at all, he's simply there.He does not fit in with the background in any shape or formThe lighting is just absolutely dead. The brightest part of the whole thing is right behind where the focal is in total darkness.The background looks like just an ugly mash of brushesFlow is messed up by the clutter. Most things are going correctly to the top left, but then you have all these criss crossing lines and effects that just ruin itRender is extremely low quality and cuts off on the right There's more, but you need to work on these first[/quote'] That's right. Eat Him up! But yea, he does make a good point. I can only target the flow and the clutter though. Those 2 are the most you need to work on =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlynagisa_fan Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 No depth' date=' everything is the exact same distance away, actually the close-up focal kind of looks like he is farther away than the effects behind himNo blending at all, he's simply there.He does not fit in with the background in any shape or formThe lighting is just absolutely dead. The brightest part of the whole thing is right behind where the focal is in total darkness.The background looks like just an ugly mash of brushesFlow is messed up by the clutter. Most things are going correctly to the top left, but then you have all these criss crossing lines and effects that just ruin itRender is extremely low quality and cuts off on the right There's more, but you need to work on these first[/quote'] Read some tuts at da tut section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 Looks like a lot of brushing. Work on the basics Problematica mentioned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3DN30N Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 OK here is my redo. Cnc! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PowerlinX Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 It's cool, but it could use some work. It needs more flow More Depth The render is dark when the background is white. Depth is giving the Sig perspective Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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