[Yu-Gi-Oh! GX/5D's] Charmers Legend (PG-16)

[C.F.Yuji]

Welcome, Just so you all know, This is my first Yu-Gi-Oh! Fanfiction, so if I get something wrong, please tell me so I can fix it.

 

The reason I wrote this.......well, I LOVE the Charmers XD, But they barely have any support so that's why I made some more cards for them in the story XD, Oh yeah, As the title says, This is GX, but it also has 5D's cards (Mainly the Synchro's and stuff like that, I won't use the Five Dragons though, As there are supposed to be one of each and I'll keep them with Yusei and the others...).

 

At the end of each Chapter I'll list the made up card's used in the Chapter,

 

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Disclaimer: Don't own Yu-Gi-Oh!/GX/5D's, never have never will, Only the cards and Video games XD, If I did, Well..........you'd know what would happen, Main Character+Charmers XD.

 

 

Domino City, 7:00 AM.

 

 

It was early in the morning of Domino City, The City was just waking up so the residents of Domino City could head off to work or any other place they had to go, There was one house in particular that this story focused on, The house of a 16 year old Teenager with dark blue hair that started to Spike straight up on the left side of his head before starting to spike to the right as it went along the top of his head, He had a case of Heterochromia as his eyes were multi-colored, One eye being red and the other brown,

 

“Jeez, I really hate waking up early” He spoke as he stood from his bed, He walked over to his closet, Grabbed a set of clothes, Then proceeded to walk to his bathroom and take a shower, Afterwords he put on a white tank-top under a green jacket with black pants, He grabbed his Duel Disk, Slipped in his deck, And grabbed his backpack,

 

“Breakfast first, Duel Academy second” He walked out of his room and into the kitchen, Setting his bag down he sat at the table,.

 

“Morning, Yu-kun” Spoke a woman with long blue hair to her back and brown eyes, She currently wore a white apron over her pink nightgown, She set a plate of Pancakes on the table, returning to the cabinets and sink to get him some Syrup, Fork and a Knife.

 

“Kaa-san, Quit calling me ‘Yu-kun’, Just Yuji!, Unless you want me to start calling you by your real name, Momo, from now on instead of ‘Kaa-san’” The woman now known as Momo just giggled down at her son.

 

“Sorry, Yuji, So, When do you have to leave?”

 

“The boat leaves around 10:00 I think, I can make it there on foot in about a hour and a half or so, I need to keep exercising, To work off this delicious food ya make, Itadakimasu!” He drooled over the food and started to eat it like a Lion on it’s freshly killed prey.

 

“Alright, Alright, Just eat up and make sure you’re not forgetting anything” At that he slapped his forehead, making the Syrup from the fork hit his face.

 

“Dammit” He grabbed a paper towel and wiped it off, It took another 2 Minutes before the plate was devoid of any food.

 

“Thanks for the breakfast, Kaa-san, I gotta get something then I’ll be leaving” She nodded as he ran back to his room, Digging through his closet and pulling out a Suitcase, He then turned towards a doll in a case on his dresser.

 

“How could I forget you, Hitou?” The doll in question had purple hair to it’s back and had pony-tails on the sides of it’s head, The ponytails were decorated with flowers and purple crystals in them, The doll wore a black dress with a white one under it, It had the Kanji for “Doll” on it’s back, It had a green eye-patch with a Flower symbol on it’s eye-patch over her right eye, it had a eye-patch cause Yuji has yet to find another suitable eye, It’s visible left eye was golden and slitted.

 

“You’re such a wimp” Came a female voice Yuji knew all to well, He turned to see a floating girl that looked around the age of 11-14 with flaming red hair to her shoulders and red eyes, She had on a brown coat, She wore a white button up shirt that was half-way unbuttoned, She wore a black tube top that covered her almost exposed chest, She also wore a black leather-looking skirt and held a wand in her left hand with a burning fireball at the top of it, A orange fox, Fox Fire, floated next to the girl.

 

“Playing with dolls, Come on!” The girl just grinned at him,

 

“Oh hush, Hiita-san, I get enough from Dharc-san with him saying I should just ‘Throw it away and be done with it’” Hiita merely rolled her eyes, Yuji, As long as he could remember, Had been able to see Duel Spirits since he was 10, Though none of them aside from his Favorite set of cards, The ‘Charmer’ series, Would actually interact with him.

 

“Anyway, We’ll all talk on the boat, As for now, I gotta get going” With that, Hiita shook her head and faded away, He grabbed the case Hitou was in, And put it in his suitcase, He took off, out of his room and towards the boat to Duel Academy.

 

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Boat to Duel Academy, 1 Hour, 10 minutes Later

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Yuji leaned against the railing of the Boat, Watching the ocean below as the Boat itself headed towards Duel Academy, He had his own room in the Boat, so he knew Hitou, Along with his deck, Was safe as the door was locked and he had the key, The silence he was enjoying was soon broken when Hiita showed up.

 

“How much longer till Duel Academy?, I want you to duel so I can kick some ass”

 

“Hiita, You cuss way to much” Came another girl’s voice, One with Blue hair to her back and blue eyes, She wore a similar coat to Hiita’s, She had on a green shirt though and a blue skirt, She had a blue wand, A small blueish/greenish lizard, Gigobyte, floated next to her.

 

“At least I ain’t a goody-goody two shoes like you, Eria!”

 

“Least I ain’t a ill-tempered brat!” The two glared death at the other as they argued, Another girl, One with Green Hair in a pony-tail on the back of her head and green eyes, Came up, She had a brown coat like the other two and wore a white plain t-shirt under it and had on a green skirt, holding a silver wand with a dragon head at the top and a green crystal just under the dragon’s mouth, A small green dragon, Petit Dragon, floated next to her.

 

“C-Can you two please stop arguing?” The two turned to glare at her,

 

“Stay out of this, Wynn!” The girl flinched at the level of their voices and hid behind Yuji,

 

“Alright, That’s enough you immature brats!” This was a guys voice, He had black hair and black eyes, His coat was similar to the others, But not at the same time, He wore blackish/brownish baggy shorts with leg bindings on his legs, he had on a choker around his neck and his Wand was black, There was a small eye with wings, Meta Bat, floating next to him, The boy smacked both Hiita and Eria across the head.

 

“The hell gives, Dharc?!” He smirked at them.

 

“No wait, Continue your senseless arguing so I can smack you two around some more!”

 

“THAT’S ENOUGH!” Yuji snapped, The Charmers looked back at their partner,

 

“Enough fighting, Your all acting immature except for poor frightened Wynn-san here, Wait, Where’s Aussa-san and Lyna-san?”

 

“Aussa’s reading somewhere and I dunno where Lyna is” He shrugged and look towards the not to far off Duel Academy,

 

“Just try not to make such a ruckus at Duel Academy, There might be someone else there who can see you”

 

“Whatever” His eyebrow twitched at Hiita’s words, She always could easily get on his nerves.

 

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Duel Academy

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Yuji stepped off the boat with his bag slung over his shoulder and his Suitcase in his other hand, His duel disk on his right arm, He grinned while making his way towards the Academy.

 

“I hope there are strong duelists here” Yuji had already had his Entrance Exam the day before, His family was rich, So they paid for him to have his Entrance Exam the day before, He had passed with flying colors and was admitted into Ra Yellow.

 

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Couple Hours Later

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Yuji yawned as he walked around the island, He now wore his Ra Yellow vest but it was left open to show his shirt, He was looking over the island so he could be familiar with it so he couldn’t get lost, His suitcase and bag was already in his room, And now the only thing he carried was his Duel Disk with his deck in it.

 

“Hey, You!” He turned and saw a man around 15 years of age if he could guess, He wore the outfit of a Obelisk Blue,

 

“Yeah?”

 

“Come on, Duel me, I need someone to take my anger out on” Yuji smirked at the man,

 

“Very well then, You are?”

 

“Kanzai Winston”

 

“Utsukushii Yuji, Nice to meet ya, let's make it quick and start with 4000” With that, The two duelists’ Duel Disk lit up and activated, The two drew their 5 Cards as their Life Points increased to 4000.

 

“Since you challenged me, I think I’ll go first” Yuji drew his Sixth card, He looked them over and smiled a bit,

 

“Ok, For my first turn, I’ll Set 1 monster, Then set three cards face-down and end my turn”

 

“About time” Winston drew his Sixth card,

 

“Now, I think I’ll activate my trap” one of Yuji’s face-downs flipped, showing DNA Transplant,

 

“As long as this is on the field, I can choose a Attribute, and all monsters will be that Attribute, and I choose Earth” Winston rolled his eyes.

 

“Whatever, Now I Summon my Vorse Raider in Attack mode!” (1900/1200),

 

“Now, Attack his face-down!” Yuji wagged his finger back and forth.

 

“I activate my face-down Waboku trap card, My monster ain’t destroyed, But it’s flipped, Plus you activated her effect” The face-down card was shown to be Aussa the Earth Charmer, with her Familiar, Archfiend Marmot of Nefariousness, Next to her.

 

“You see, When she’s flipped face-up, I get control of one of your Earth monsters” Aussa lifted her wand, It glowed as Vorse Raider vanished and appeared on Yuji’s field,

 

“Dammit, I set a card and end my turn”

 

“Good, My move, Draw” He looked at the card, Then grinned,

 

“I summon my Charmers Guardian monster card in Attack mode” (1500/1200) A girl with long white hair to her back and blue-eyes appeared, She had two criss-crossing headband’s on her head, She wore a blue dress that split when it got to her waist, She wore a blue skirt under the dress and black gloves that started at her elbows and ended at her wrists, She wore thigh high black socks with knee high black boots, She held a sword in one hand with a sheath in the other.

 

“I knew you’d summon a monster, Activate Torrential Tribute Trap Card!”

 

“I think not” He flipped up his face-down trap,

 

“Dark Bribe, You may get to draw a card, But you’re trap is negated and destroyed” Winston growled as the trap was destroyed, Yuji switched Aussa to Attack Mode.

 

“Now, Vorse Raider, Attack!” The beast lunged into the sky and slashed down on Winston, Dropping his Life Points to 2100.

 

“Charmers Guardian, Your up!” The girl vanished and appeared behind Winston and slashed him diagonally, His Life Points were now 600.

 

“Aussa, Go!” The girls wand glowed and rocks shot up from the ground and flew towards Winston, Dropping him to his last 100 Life Points,

 

“Now, Before I end my turn, I’ll send Aussa and your Vorse Raider to the grave to Special Summon Familiar-Possessed - Aussa from my deck” (1850/1500) A more older, Teenaged version of Aussa appeared, with a more feral looking Archfiend Marmot of Nefariousness next to her.

 

“Lastly I’ll activate my Charmers Sanctuary Field Spell card” With that, The Field Spell slot opened as he placed the card on it and it shut, The ground shook as they appeared to be inside a large black building, There were six visible doors, There were flames decorated around one door, Clouds around another, Water on another, Earth around one, Skulls on one of the doors and a Halo on the last.

 

“I set a card face-down and end my turn, Your move” Winston growled as he drew his card, He smirked,

 

“I play Monster Reborn to bring my Vorse Raider back, Next, I summon my Dark Tinker Tuner monster!” (1000/1300)

 

“Now, I’ll Tune my Dark Tinker with my Vorse Raider, To Synchro Summon Goyo Guardian!” Yuji narrowed his eyes at the Synchro Monster, He remembered that card all to well.

 

“Now, Attack his Familiar-Possessed - Aussa!”

 

“ ‘fraid not, Charmers Guardian switches your Attack to her”

 

“Fine, I’ll destroy her instead!” Yuji smirked,

 

“I reveal my face-down Quick-Play Spell Card, Charmers Unite” The card was flipped up and on it was a picture of the 4 Original Charmers,

 

“When my Life Points are higher then yours, I can increase all of my Monsters that have Aussa, Dharc, Eria, Hiita, Lyna, Wynn, Or just plain Charmer in their names Attack by 1000" Charmers Guardian’s Attack rose to 2500,

 

“So?, Goyo can still destroy it!”

 

“Nope, I guess you forgot my Field Spell, All cards of the Charmers Archetype gain 500 Attack and Defense Points, My guardian included” Her Attack was now 3000,

 

“Guardian, Show him a real Warrior and End This!” She nodded while looking back at her master Before turning to Goyo Guardian, She knocked the weapon he threw at her away, Before dashing over to him and slicing him in half, Reducing Winston’s Life Points to 0, The Holograms disappeared as Winston fell to his knee’s.

 

“Dammit!” He slammed his fist into the ground,

 

“Good Duel man, But it seems my Charmers have come out on top once more” Yuji turned and decided to go back to the Academy as his stomach now growled for food.

 

“Man, Dueling sure does work up a Apatite” a annoyed Hiita appeared beside him,

 

“Anything makes you hungry” Hiita spoke, Floating backwards with her hands behind her head,

 

“Oh hush, Hiita-san” He smiled at Hiita as she disappeared as he reached his dorms, Meanwhile in the Shadows a dark figure smirked a evil smirk.

 

“Heh, Yuji, You shall suffer the same fate as your sibling” The figure seemed to disappear, Laughing to itself all the while, Yuji meanwhile, Was too busy to even notice, let alone detect, The presence of the figure.

 

 

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And that’s where the Chapter end’s for now,

 

Made-Up cards used:

 

Name: Charmers Guardian.

Attribute: EARTH.

Level: 4.

Type: Warrior.

Effect: If your opponent attacks a card you control with “Aussa” “Dharc” “Eria” “Hiita” “Lyna” or “Wynn” in it’s name, Switch the Attack Target to this card.

ATK/DEF: 1500 ATK, 1200 DEF.

 

Name: Charmers Sanctuary.

Spell Type: Field Spell.

Effect: Increase the ATK and DEF of all “Charmer” Archetype* Monsters by 500.

 

Name: Charmers Unite.

Type: Quick-Play Spell,.

Effect: After Activation, Select and activate one following effects based on the players Life Points, Life Points:

If your Life Points are higher then your opponents: Increase the ATK and DEF of all cards with “Aussa” “Dharc” “Eria” “Hiita” “Lyna” “Wynn” or “Charmer” in it’s name by 1000.

If your Life Points are lower then your opponents: You can pay half your Life Points to destroy all cards on the field, If this effect was activated during your opponents turn, Your opponent cannot Normal Summon, Set or Special Summon for the remainder of the turn.

 

*I put Charmer Archetype so in can effect all of the Charmer monsters, Instead of just the one’s with “Charmer” in their name, and cause I wrote this late at night and I’m too lazy to fix it up XD.

[Phantom Roxas]

I'm going to be honest, but this was terrible. Absolutely none of the characters interested me, the Familiars seemed to serve no purpose, the story was rushed way too much, quite a few things were not explained, Yuji - who's name is hardly creative - could have just used Dharc instead of Aussa and DNA Transplant, you capitalized at extremely random places, and commas were used terribly.

[ObsoleteAcc]

i actually thought it was pretty good, sure it had some basic grammar errors, but the story was more yugioh-ish then other fanfics ive seen. it could use a bit of work, but it was pretty well written and very nicely described.

[C.F.Yuji]

I'm going to be honest' date=' but this was terrible. Absolutely none of the characters interested me, the Familiars seemed to serve no purpose, the story was rushed way too much, quite a few things were not explained, Yuji - who's name is hardly creative - could have just used Dharc instead of Aussa and DNA Transplant, you capitalized at extremely random places, and commas were used terribly.

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lol, Aren't cards you draw from the deck supposed to be random? XD, Plus he didn't know what the opponent would play, as the reason for DNA Transplant, and I know I capitalize at random places, but it (and the comma thing) is a bad habit of mine >_>...

 

And what's wrong with Yuji's name?, I like it (plus it was the only name I thought of at the time XD) so I picked it....

 

i actually thought it was pretty good' date=' sure it had some basic grammar errors, but the story was more yugioh-ish then other fanfics ive seen. it could use a bit of work, but it was pretty well written and very nicely described.

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lol, Thanks, dunno why people actually complain at the Bad Grammar thing, cause they themselves had it at some point as well I bet XD.

[Phantom Roxas]

You're justified about DNA Transplant then. Yuji's name sounds way to similar to Yugi IMO. I admit I used to have bad grammar, but I don't think my problem was random capitalization and putting commas in all the wrong places.

[C.F.Yuji]

lol, I'm just saying DNA Surgery is good to have in any Charmer deck, I have it in all the Charmer decks I can make on any Yu-Gi-Oh! Game...

 

Besides, Yuji's name is also the name of the main male character on Shakugan no Shana, not just similar to Yugi.

 

Eh, I'll try to tone down on the random capitalization, can't say the same for commas as I've never been one to use them that much so it'll be hard for me to find the right places they need to go...

[C.F.Yuji]

Bump, as the next Chapter has arrived, Though no dueling in this one, Next one will have dueling...

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2]

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Ra Yellow Dorm

 

“Mm, Not as fancy as home, But I don’t mind” Yuji was quite surprised at how big the Dorms were, He expected it to be much smaller, but he was satisfied, now, Yuji was never the spoiled one, that was his younger sister, but he didn’t exactly like living in small places.

 

“Ah, You must be the rich man I’ve heard about” Yuji turned and saw a fellow Ra yellow with black hair that was neatly arranged, with a large portion flushed back and slightly to his left, featuring different layers where the sloping changes direction, and black eyes, He wore the standard Ra Yellow vest and gray pants.

 

“Misawa Daichi, pleased to meet you” The man now known as Misawa raised his hand, offering a handshake which Yuji gladly returned.

 

“Utsukushii Yuji, same, So......when’s dinner time around here?, I’m starved” Misawa just smiled a bit, his attitude reminding him slightly of Judai.

 

“About 20 minutes from now, say, have you heard of a student named Yuki Judai?” Yuji scratched the back of his head in thought.

 

“Yeah, I heard bits and pieces of the guy, like how he took down Chronos’ Ancient Gear Golem with something called ‘Elemental Hero Flame Wingman’ or something” Misawa just chuckled.

 

“Well, I have the strange feeling that you two will get along if the two of you ever cross paths, Oh yes, is it true from the rumors that I’ve heard that you use a Charmer deck?”

 

“Do dogs chase cats?, Yeah, I do”

 

“Just wondering” with that, Misawa walked away, leaving a confused Yuji to wait for dinner for at least 20 minutes.

 

After Dinner, Yuji’s Room

 

“Ah, now that was a meal!” Yuji licked his lips with a amused smile on his face, rubbing his full stomach.

 

“You always get to eat” this was a new voice, The voice of a girl with slightly spiked, short white hair with a Ahoge, she had white eyes, and wore a black tank top with white around the chest, she also wore black shorts and black thigh-high socks, her coat had a greenish color to it, she had bandages around her left (our right) arm, she had a broken cuff on her hand, similar to Dharc's, she also wore a glove on her right hand, her partner was Happy Lover.

 

“Your duel spirits, Lyna, you don’t eat, not in this world anyway” he gave a annoyed look over at the 6th and final Charmer, the girl merely gave him a pouting look.

 

“Hey, don’t give me that look, it’s not my fault you’re a duel spirit” with that, she faded away right as he reached his room, He turned the knob and found it unlocked, curious, he entered the room.

 

“Yo, you must be my roommate” this was the voice of a man with brown hair and brown eyes, he wasn’t currently wearing his Ra Yellow vest, showing that he now wore a white tank-top and black shorts, he was laying on his bed watching TV.

 

“I was wondering why the door was unlocked” Yuji shrugged and made his way to his bed, why he had a Bunk-Bed was a mystery,

 

“I’m Bougu Yuuki by the way” the man sat up from where he was laying, Yuji could catch a slight glimpse of what appeared to be scars near the mans shoulders.

 

“Utsukushii Yuji”

 

“Utsukushii?, You mean from the rich Utsukushii family?, Man, are you lucky!” Yuji just shrugged, he didn’t really care that he was rich or not, as long as he could duel and continue using his favorite cards, he didn’t care.

 

“So, what kind of deck you use?”

 

“It’s more of a deck based around the Charmers, yours?” Yuji pulled out a laptop from his backpack.

 

“Charmers huh?, well, I use a deck based around an Archetype called “Vampire World”, is also has the Dark Armed Dragon in it, Just encase I should happen to need it” Yuji turned to look at him.

 

“Dark Armed Dragon huh?, where I come from, that card is pretty overused, but I don’t see it being overused here at Duel Academy” Yuji turned back to his laptop, he decided to check his E-Mail, when he did, he sweat dropped, one of the E-Mails read:

 

“Dear Yuji.

 

Just so you know, your younger sister left for Duel Academy a few hours after you did, she should be there tomorrow morning, we arranged for her to be in the Ra Yellow dorms so you can keep a eye on her, just make sure she doesn’t cause too much trouble and get detention or something, anyway, good luck at Duel Academy.

 

Father”

 

“For the love of....” Yuji sighed and shook his head, it’s not that he didn’t like his sister, no, in fact, the two got along better then any normal siblings, it’s just the fact that they would be staying in the same dorm, and, unlike himself, his sister was pretty much spoiled as hell.

 

“Hm?, What’s wrong?”

 

“It’s just my younger sister, Hana, is coming to Duel Academy”

 

“You don’t like her or something?”

 

“Nah, I love my little sister, It’s just, well, We’re rich, right?, I’m not the spoiled one, she is” Yuuki made a ‘oh’ noise and nodded his head.

 

“I see, well there’s got to be a spoiled one in just about every rich bunch, ne?” Yuji laughed a bit and nodded.

 

“Well, I’m going to bed, Night” Yuuki plopped down on his back and turned to face away from Yuji, Deciding it was a good time, he decided to sleep as well.

 

“What the HELL are you guys doing?” he noticed the 3 of the Charmer spirits floating up to the top bunk.

 

“What does it look like?” He gave a annoyed look to Hiita.

 

“Your duel spirits, You don’t NEED to sleep in a bed!, and how is it that you can’t eat here, but you can magically change into sleep clothes?!” him and Hiita were having a glare-off as the two traded annoyed/hated looks, Eria and Lyna shook their heads in embarrassment, Yuji was the first to turn away, he kicked off his shoes and took off his vest, setting it on the ground before laying back on the bed.

 

Next Morning

 

Yuji was having a peaceful and relaxing sleep, one of the best he had in a long time until....

 

“WAKE THE HELL UP!” Hiita had awoken him, although Duel Spirits couldn’t interact with the living world that much, they certainly could interact with the ones who could see them, this was confirmed when Hiita slapped Yuji’s face, instantly waking him up.

 

“Dammit!, I was enjoying that sleep!” it was then that Dharc decided to appear.

 

“A relaxing sleep, or a perverted dream?” Dharc smirked in amusement at Yuji’s look of shock and embarrassment.

 

“I-I was not!, I don’t have perverted dreams!”

 

“Everyone does eventually” Dharc shrugged.

 

“Oh, and you have a guest” Dharc pointed his thumb towards the door, which was now being knocked upon, Yuji groaned and stood.

 

“I’m coming!” he slowly made his way to the door, he hated mornings. When he opened the door, There stood a girl who couldn’t be older then 14 with curly blond hair to her shoulders and light green eyes, she wore a black shirt under a red Japanese kimono-top that was blue near the end which was at her thighs, the sleeves ended just above her elbows, It had a white sash holding it together.

 

She wore a black skirt that was a little longer then the Academy skirts, lastly she had on slightly puffy detached sleeves that went from her wrists to just below her elbows, she had a Duel Disk on her right arm and a back pack slung over her shoulder with a suit case next to her.

 

“Thinking you could ditch me eh, Nii-san?” the younger girl just smiled up at her older brother.

 

“If I wanted to ditch you, I’d go somewhere other then Duel Academy” he laughed a bit while grabbing her suitcase and carrying it over to his side of the room.

 

“Jeez, Sis, how much stuff did you pack in here?” the girl shrugged and walked with him over to the bed.

 

“So, you want the top bunk, like usual?”

 

“Yep” He chuckled a bit, before turning to face his sister.

 

“Well, let’s go, as much as I hate it, we got class to get to” Hana groaned in agony, if there was one thing she hated, it was the fact that she had to be taught something she already knew how to do.

 

Class Room

 

“Now class, we will be reviewing the summoning of Synchro Monsters” Chronos scanned the class room, then he spotted Yuji, ah what fun it would be to make fun of the newbie.

 

“Yuji!, explain the summoning conditions of the Synchro Monster ‘Blackwing Armor Master’ and how you go about summoning Synchro Monsters!” Yuji sighed and stood from his seat.

 

“To Synchro Summon Blackwing Armor Master, you must send one Blackwing Tuner monster along with one or more non-Tuner monsters to your graveyard” He cleared his throat before speaking again.

 

“To Synchro Summon, you must send one Tuner Monster and one or more monsters from your side of the field to the graveyard, the cards you sent to the graveyard’s level combined must be equal to the Synchro Monster you are planning on Synchro Summoning” He caught his breath.

 

“Usually, Synchro Monsters aren’t hard to summon, But, there are some Synchro Monsters that have certain summoning conditions, Like Blackwing Armor Master for example, needs a Blackwing monster that’s a Tuner, and other Synchro’s will sometimes require more then just one other monster for it’s summon, Like ‘1 Tuner plus 2 or more non-tuner monsters’” Yuji sighed and sat back down.

 

“Um, well, that is correct” Chronos was shocked, he didn’t think a newbie like him could get it right, what really got his was his little extra explanation on certain Synchro Monsters.

 

“Anyway, Hana!, I want you to come down here and guess the name of the Synchro Monster I am holding and tell me it’s effect” Hana sighed and made her way down to the front of her class, hating how she had to do it herself. Chronos pulled out a familiar Synchro monster, She saw that the card was ‘Hyper Psychic Blaster’, She turned to face the class.

 

“The card is Hyper Psychic Blaster, It’s effect is as follows:

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Psychic-Type Monsters

During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, gain Life Points equal to the difference at the end of the Damage Step.” Now Chronos was really surprised, Hana turned and smirked at him.

 

“Why would I not know?, this bad boy is basically the key card of my whole deck” with that, she went back to her seat, leaving a shocked Chronos.

 

After School

 

Yuji groaned and walked out of the Academy, his sister right next to him, that little exercise in Gym took it’s toll on him, now Yuji was never out of shape, it’s the fact that he HATED running, and that little Marathon in Gym Class didn’t help one bit.

 

“Hey!, Wait up!” Yuji came to a halt and turned to see a kid with brown hair and brown eyes running towards him, He was a Slifer, but Yuji didn’t care about rank so he wasn’t going to make fun of him.

 

“And you would be?”

 

“Judai, Yuki Judai!, Nice to meet ya!” Yuji nodded his head.

 

“I loved the way you practically showed Chronos you know more then he does, The look on his face was hilarious!” Yuji laughed a bit himself.

 

“Yeah, But Hana deserves the credit, He practically got outsmarted by a young girl!” Hana took offense to that and slammed her foot on Yuji’s, making the young man cry out in pain,

 

“Dammit, Hana!”.

 

“Well you insulted me, Yuji-nii” Judai looked at the two one by one.

 

“Your siblings huh?, Hey, Yuji, wanna duel sometime?, I’d love to see how my Heroes would face off against your Charmers!” Yuji looked over at him in shock.

 

“Heh, Misawa told me” Yuji made a mental note to strangle Misawa later.

 

“Sure, we’ll duel in say....two hours?, I’ll meet you at the Slifer Dorms” Judai nodded.

 

“See ya then, oh man, I gotta find Sho and let him know about the duel!” With that, Judai ran off, Yuji sighed and shook his head.

 

“Your really gonna duel him, huh?”

 

“Duh, against him, I might have to unveil my secret weapon” Yuji grinned in amusement, Hana sighed and shook her head, her brothers ‘Secret Weapon’ wasn’t really that much of a secret as he used it on her, as well as a few others, quite a few times, but oh well, she’d enjoy the duel nonetheless.

 

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Oh yeah, as you can see, I'm using the Japanese names for the Characters XD, So for those who don't know:

 

Yuki Judai=Jaden Yuki.

Sho=Syrus Truesdale.

Misawa Daichi=Bastion Misawa.

Chronos=Crowler.

[krspaceT1]

Don't worry No1, I was swarmed like this too, just try to explain there flaws away, and if all else fails, report em (Insert evil Laugh)

[C.F.Yuji]

XD, I know, we all have flaws that get worked out eventually......*looks at the fics himself*.....Man, I need to update them, to remove Hikari for Lyna XD.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Before posting your fanfic here' date=' copy and paste it into Microsoft Word and press F7.

[/quote']I'd ask questions about how Duel Monsters can feasibly enter Duels with normal humans, except the answer is probably in there somewhere, buried under the awful grammar.

[C.F.Yuji]

Ya know, if ya start to read it, find out ya don't like it, then you don't HAVE to read every single bit of it, no one is forcing you to, let alone say it's awful, I know I'm not a Book-Writer level writer, but still =P.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Well, like I said, you probably have a good story in there that just can't be discerned through the syntax.

 

In particular, it's very hard to tell who's speaking when. Be careful with your speaker tags; they can make or break the action.

[spoiler=Exempli gratia]

“As long as this is on the field, I can choose a Attribute, and all monsters will be that Attribute, and I choose Earth” Winston rolled his eyes.

 

“Whatever, Now I Summon my Vorse Raider in Attack mode!” (1900/1200),

 

“Now, Attack his face-down!” Yuji wagged his finger back and forth.

 

“I activate my face-down Waboku trap card, My monster ain’t destroyed, But it’s flipped, Plus you activated her effect” The face-down card was shown to be Aussa the Earth Charmer, with her Familiar, Archfiend Marmot of Nefariousness, Next to her.

 

 

When I first read this, I assumed Yuji was doing the attacking, so I thought it was a little odd to see his opponent pulling out a little-used monster he'd just been conversing with. Try and put the speaker's actions and words on the same line.

[spoiler=Id est]

"As long as this is on the field," Yuji explained, "I can choose an attribute, and all monsters on the field will be that attribute. I choose Earth."

 

Winston rolled his eyes. "Whatever. Now, I Summon my Vorse Raider in Attack Mode!" (1900/1200) "Attack his face-down!"

 

Yuji wagged his finger back and forth. "I activate my Trap Card, Waboku. My monster ain't destroyed, but it is flipped, so you activated her effect." The face-down card revealed itself to be Aussa the Earth Charmer, along with her familiar, the Archfiend Marmot of Nefariousness.

See what a difference little changes make? All I did was fix the conventions and rearrange the descriptive sentences, and suddenly the story is a lot more legible. The Charmers, especially, are shaping up to be a nice harem, whether for Yuji or Dharc; be sure you're careful with your speaker tags with them.

[C.F.Yuji]

Oh, that, yeah, I kinda forget to say who's speaking and when, Mainly cause I think if I put "(Insert name here) Said/Spoke" to many times, it makes it look a little bad, but I'll take what ya said into what I post :P.

 

[spoiler=Chapter 3]

 

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Ra Yellow Dorm. Yuji’s Room

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Yuji sighed a bit. Looking through his deck. He didn’t know what to expect from Yuki Judai. He heard his Elemental Hero monsters were strong. Well, they’re Fusion forms anyway, He was confident that the Charmers Familiar-Possessed forms could take on the non-Fusion Elemental Heroes. But the Fusion Forms would be a problem. Especially with this “Skyscraper” field spell.

 

“Yo, What you up to?” Yuji smiled back at the voice of his first room mate. Yuuki.

 

“Looking through my deck. Judai wants to duel me” Yuji answered, Yuuki’s eyes widened a bit.

 

“Yuki Judai?, man, your gonna need some luck to beat him. He hasn’t lost ever since he lost to Edo Phoenix”

 

“You mean the Destiny Hero guy?” Yuji asked, Yuuki nodded.

 

“Don’t underestimate Nii-san. He hasn’t lost in three years. No way someone with some comic book super heroes is gonna beat him!” Yuuki looked at the top bunk to see Hana laying upside-down with her head hanging off the bed.

 

“Ha!, Comic Book super heroes. That’s a laugh!” Yuuki laughed a bit. Wiping away a tear from his eye before speaking.

 

“Seriously though, don’t underestimate him. He even beat those legendary Sacred Beast cards. And I heard those things were supposed to be invincible” Yuuki said, Yuji shrugged.

 

“Nothing’s invincible. Trust me”

 

“Yeah!, No one can beat Nii-san!, he actually thinks out his moves instead of rushing into battle!” Yuji laughed a bit. Hana jumped down from the top bunk. Landing gracefully on her feet.

 

“You seem confident in your brothers abilities. How’s this then, While Yuji and Judai duel. How about me and you duel while right next to them?” Hana smirked in amusement at Yuuki's challenge.

 

“You?, versus me?, Big mistake!, I accept!”

 

“Well then, Guess I better prepare my deck” With that, Yuuki grabbed his deck and walked outside. Hana growled a bit and went to get her deck.

 

“You let your temper get the better of you” came a female voice, Hana turned to see a girl with long black hair and yellow eyes. She wore a blue jump-suit esque outfit with no sleeves. And the shorts stopping just below her thighs. She had some kind of black symbol on the chest of her outfit. She had a metal arm and leg and metal plating on her head.

 

“Oh, Shut up!, Lifetrancer!” The girl merely laughed down at her. Hana too could see spirits. But unlike her brother. Who could see any kind of spirit. She was limited to the spirits, namely the spirits of her own deck and her brothers deck.

 

“Stop it, Stop it, Stop it!, Quit laughing!” all of this just caused the Lifetrancer to laugh more.

 

“Alright, Lifetrancer, let her prepare her deck” This was another female voice, She had long purple hair to her thighs and gold eyes. She had a eye on her forehead, and one on each cheek, Her outfit consisted of a green dress and black shorts. She had a eye on the center of her chest and on the sleeves of her dress. She had metal on her shoulders, around the eye on her forehead, and a little on each arm and leg.

 

“Oh quit ruining my fun, All-Seeing” the two duel-spirits laughed a bit as they faded away and Hana got her deck.

 

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Two hours later. Outside

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“So, You ready to duel, Judai?” Yuji asked, standing about 12 feet away.

 

“Ain’t I always?!”

 

“Hey!, wait!” They turned to see Hana and Yuuki running towards them.

 

“Don’t..........start without.....us!” Yuuki panted a bit.

 

“So, your gonna duel next to us?” Hana nodded at Yuji's question and stood next to her brother, and Yuuki next to Judai.

 

“Sweet!, Two duels at once!” Judai grinned from ear to ear. This was one thing he didn’t mind happening.

 

“This shall be a ‘two-way N duel’, We all take turns, as we can keep up with what’s going on, We all won’t be dueling each other. Still though, Hana shall go first, then Yuuki, then me, Then Judai” Yuji sighed.

 

"Alright” Yuji began.

 

“Let’s Duel!” They all spoke, Their life points increasing to 8000.

 

“I’ll go first!” Hana spoke, Drawing her sixth card. She looked over her hand and nodded a bit.

 

“I activate the Spell card Emergency Teleport!, this lets me Special Summon 1 level 3 or lower Psychic-Type monster from my hand or deck” She searched her deck and picked a card.

 

“I pick Psychic Commander!” (1400 ATK) A man in a floating tank appeared, Looking as if he was saluting something or someone.

 

“Now I’ll summon my Mind Protector in Defense Mode!, Afterwords I’ll tune the two together to Synchro Summon my All-Seeing Android!” (2400 ATK) the female that appeared earlier while talking to Hana appeared on the field.

 

“Nice first move” Yuji grinned over at his sister.

 

“Heh, T-Thanks, Anyway I set two cards and end my turn!” with that, two face-downs appeared near her feet.

 

“Alright. My move” Yuuki drew his sixth card.

 

“I activate the Spell Card Cost Down, this lets me discard a card to drop all Monsters in my hands level by 2" he discarded a Monster.

 

“Now I summon my Vampire World: Ayla, Blood Spreader in Attack mode” (2400 ATK) a girl appeared, She had glowing red eyes and brown hair pulled into two pony-tails on the sides of her head. She wore a white shirt under a yellow vest with a blue tie. She had on a bloody blue skirt that went down to her knees and she had blood on her hands.

 

“Oh yes, I activate the effect of my Vampire World: Senzo, Lone Fighter in my Graveyard, If I control another Vampire World monster, I can Special Summon him from my Graveyard” (1900 ATK) This time it was a man with short brown hair and red eyes that appeared, he had a smirk on his face, he wore a solid black shirt and pants. He had blood on his hands on near his mouth.

 

“Lastly, Ayla’s effect activates, If I control one other Vampire World monster other then herself, All non ‘Vampire World’ monsters loose 400 ATK and DEF” Yuuki grinned a bit as Hana’s All-Seeing went down to 2000 ATK.

 

“Lastly I lay one card face-down and end my turn” Yuuki ended, Yuji nodded and drew his sixth card, He looked over his hand.

 

‘Hm, I got what I need to summon her, But I need to wait’ Yuji sighed a bit.

 

“For my first turn I’ll summon my Familiar-Possessed - Dharc in ATK mode” (1850 ATK) The older, teenage-looking Dharc appeared, with a fiercer looking Meda bat next to him, Dharc looked over at Judai.

 

“THIS is our opponent?” He spoke, pointing over at Judai.

 

“Work with me here, Dharc-san” Yuji sighed and laid three cards face-down.

 

“My move!” Judai drew his sixth card. Grinning he picked a card.

 

“I summon my Elemental Hero Bubbleman in Attack mode!” with that, said hero appeared. Dharc chuckled, then laughed.

 

“Oh come on!, You’ve gotta be shitten’ me!. Look at him!” Judai frowned a bit.

 

“Not cool, Anyway cause of his ability. If I summon him and I control no other cards, I get to draw two more cards!” He drew the two.

 

“Oh your in trouble now!, I activate Polymerization!” Yuji narrowed his eyes, He knew this was coming.

 

“I fuse Elemental Heroes Bubbleman and Clayman to form Elemental Hero Mudball Man!, In Defense Mode!” (3000 DEF) this time, Dharc’s eyebrow twitched in annoyance.

 

“Now your just mocking us” Dharc spoke in clear annoyance, Judai rolled his eyes.

 

“Whatever, I lay two cards face-down and end my turn!” Hana sighed and drew.

 

“Alrighty then, I summon a second Psychic Commander!” (1400 ATK, now 1000 ATK)

 

“Now, All-Seeing, use your ability!” The eyes on her head, cheeks and her own eyes glowed.

 

“Once per turn, I can look at your hand, and deal 300 damage to you for each Monster Card in your hand!” His hand revealed two monsters, He winched as his Life Points dropped to 7400. Hana’s dropped to 7200.

 

“Heh, the price is that I have to pay 800 Life Points. Now then, Battle!, All-Seeing!, attack Ayla!” Yuuki looked a bit confused.

 

“Cause of my Psychic Commander, During the damage step, I can pay a maximum of 500 Life Points to drop your monsters ATK by that much, Meaning your Vampire is dropped to 1900!” Yuuki’s eyes widened, He grunted a bit, before revealing his face-down.

 

“I activate Vampiric Brotherhood!, If I control two or more Vampire World monsters, I can negate your attack!” Hana growled under her breath.

 

“Fine then, I move on to Main Phase 2 and Tune my Commander and All-Seeing together to form my ace monster!, HYPER PSYCHIC BLASTER!!” the two monster merged and out came a Psychic in pure white armor holding a gun attached to each hand and a single eye visible. It’s ATK was 3000, but cause of Ayla, it dropped to 2600.

 

“Turn end!” Yuuki grinned a bit and drew.

 

“Nice, OK then” He looked at the card he drew and grinned.

 

“I shall switch Ayla and Senzo to Defense Mode and set a card, I end my turn” (DEF: Ayla: 1400, Senzo: 0)

 

“My draw” Yuji drew, He has to find a way past that Mudball. He grinned at the card he drew, Maybe it’ll help.

 

“I play the Charmers Control Spell Card, after it’s activation, it remains on the field for two turns, Afterwords, it’s destroyed, but until then, All my Charmers gain 500 ATK, and all your monsters loose 500 ATK and DEF, also, I get to draw a card”.

 

“Good move, but Mudball Man is still staying around” It’s DEF decreased to 2500, and Dharc has his power increased to 2350.

 

“Next I summon Lyna the Light Charmer in Attack Mode!” (500 ATK) with that, said Charmer appeared on the field, giving herself a dramatic entrance.

 

“Baka” She heard, she turned and saw Dharc glaring down at her.

 

“Aw, Don’t say that, Dharcy!” She laughed at the angry look on his face.

 

“Guys, Can I keep going?” Yuji asked, The two nodded back at their partner.

 

“Now then, I activate the Charmers Tuning Spell Card, allowing me to make Lyna a Tuner Monster, I tune Lyna and Dharc together, to form Corrupting Dharc!” (2400 ATK, 2900 now) The fully grown, adult looking Dharc appeared..

 

“Now I play my Charmers Sanctity Spell Card, If I control a Charmer monster, we both get to draw till we have Six Cards in our hands” Yuji looked over his new cards and grinned.

 

“I play the Charmers Synchronize Spell Card, if I Synchro Summoned a Charmer Synchro Monster this turn, I can return the material monsters from my graveyard to my deck and Synchro Summon once more!” he returned Familiar-Possessed Dharc and Lyna the Light Charmer.

 

“Now, Come forth!, Shining Lyna!” (2400 ATK, 2900 now) This Lyna looked much older, her adult form, despite this, her outfit remained the same and her hair was still spiked and stayed near her shoulders.

 

“Now, I play the Quick-Play Spell card Charm Light Power. All Special Summoned LIGHT Monsters gain 400 extra ATK this round!” Lyna’s ATK rose to 3300.

 

“Now, Lyna, Attack Mudball Man!” Lyna raised her hands then swung them forward. A beam of light shot down and blasted Mudball Man to pieces.

 

“Now Dharc, your turn!” Dharc smirked and charged a purple blast in his hands and fired it off.

 

“Hold it!, I activate A Hero Emerges!, now you have to select a card in my hand, If it’s a Monster, I can Special Summon it.” Yuji narrowed his eyes and chose the far right.

 

“Sweet!, Now I Special Summon Elemental Hero Neos!” and from the sky, Judai’s ace Monster appeared. Cause of Charm Light Power, his ATK to rose to 2900.

 

“Dharc!, stop Attack!” Dharc narrowed his eyes and the blast vanished.

 

“In that case, I activate the Magical Ritual spell card and offer my two Monsters to Ritual Summon my Kamihime, Charmers Goddess!” (2500 ATK). A girl with white hair wearing a white dress appeared. The top of her dress was criss crossed across her chest.

 

“When she’s summoned, I get to draw two cards but have to loose the top three cards of my deck.” He drew Hiita the Fire Charmer and Wynn the Wind Charmer, the cards he lost was Familiar-Possessed - Eria. Aussa the Earth Charmer, and Charmers Guardian.

 

“Next I play Pot of Avarice to return Shining Lyna, Corrupting Dharc, Familiar-Possessed - Eria, Charmers Guardian and Aussa the Earth Charmer” he put the five cards back, drew two cards, and revealed Eria the Water Charmer and Aussa the Earth Charmer.

 

“Next I use Kamihime’s ability to sacrifice herself to add 1 card from my deck to my hand” he added Polymerization.

 

“Now I activate MY Polymerization, to fuse Eria, Hiita, Wynn and Aussa in my hand to form my key card!, Come!, Sierra the Ultimate Charmer!” (ATK 3000) This girl had flowing purple hair to her back and green eyes. She wore a black dress that was split down the sides of her legs. She wore black gloves to her wrists and thigh-high black boots. She had a purplish dragon floating beside her.

 

“Heh, seems like our Key Cards have come together to fight!” Judai grinned a bit, Yuji did to. This was something he was enjoying.

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Cards:

 

[spoiler=]

All-Seeing Android.

LIGHT. Level 6. Psychic/Synchro/Effect.

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.

Once per turn, you can pay 800 Life Points to look at your opponents hand and deal 300 damage for each card in their hand.

2400 ATK/1500 DEF.

 

Vampire World: Ayla, Blood Spreader.

DARK. Level 6. Zombie/Effect.

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all cards that do not have "Vampire World" in their name loose 400 ATK and DEF. This Effect can only be activated if you control at least 1 other "Vampire World" monster.

2400 ATK/200 DEF.

 

Vampire World: Senzo, Lone Fighter.

DARK. Level 4. Zombie/Effect.

This card can be Special Summoned from your Graveyard if you control 1 other “Vampire World” monster. This card gains 600 ATK if this is the only monster you control.

1900 ATK/0 DEF.

 

Familiar-Possessed - Dharc

DARK. Level 4. Spellcaster/Effect

The same as the other Familiar-Possessed.

1850 ATK/1500 DEF.

 

Vampiric Brotherhood

Trap. Normal Trap

Activate only when you control 2 or more “Vampire World” monsters and your opponent declares an attack. Negate the attack and end the Battle Phase.

 

Charmers Tuning

Spell. Normal Spell.

Select 1 face-up card with “Aussa” “Charmer” “Dharc” “Eria” “Hiita” “Lyna” or “Wynn” in it’s name you control, the selected monster is treated as a Tuner monster while face-up on the field.

 

Charmers Control

Spell Card. Normal Spell

After this cards activation. It remains face-up on the field for 2 turns, afterwords, destroy it. All face-up cards with “Aussa” “Dharc” “Eria” “Hiita” “Lyna” “Kamihime” “Sierra” and “Wynn” in their name gain 500 ATK, all other monsters loose 500 ATK and DEF.

 

Corrupting Dharc

DARK. Level 7. Spellcaster/Synchro/Effect

1 Tuner + 1 card with “Dharc” in it’s name.

Once per turn, you can pay Life Points in multiples of 100 (Max.800) to Special Summon 1 DARK monster from your hand who’s level is equal to the amount of Life Points you paid. The monster Special Summoned by this effect is destroyed if “Corrupting Dharc” is removed from your field.

2400 ATK/1500 DEF.

 

Charmers Sanctity.

Spell. Normal Spell

Activate only when you control 1 or more cards with “Aussa” “Dharc” “Eria” “Hiita” “Lyna” or “Wynn” in their name. You and your opponent draw cards until you both have 6 cards in your hand. Remove this card from play instead of sending it to the Graveyard after activation.

 

Charmers Synchronize

Spell. Normal Spell

Activate only when you have successfully Synchro Summoned a Synchro Monster with “Aussa” “Dharc” “Eria” “Hiita” “Lyna” or “Wynn” in it’s name. Return Synchro Material monsters from your Graveyard to your Deck. Afterwords, Special Summon 1 Synchro Monster with "Aussa" “Dharc” “Eria” “Hiita” “Lyna” or “Wynn” in it's name who’s level is equal to the Synchro Summoned monsters level to your field from your Extra Deck.

 

Shining Lyna

LIGHT. Level 7. Spellcaster/Synchro/Effect

1 Tuner + 1 card with “Lyna” in it’s name.

Same as Corrupting Dharc except with LIGHT Monsters.

2400 ATK/1500 DEF.

 

Charm Light Power

Spell. Quick-Play Spell Card

Effect: All Special Summoned LIGHT Monsters gain 400 ATK until the End Phase.

Notes: Lyna is on the card with her hand coming towards the user with light coming from her hand.

 

Magical Ritual

Spell. Ritual Spell Card

This card is used to Ritual Summon “Kamihime, Charmers Goddess” you must also tribute monsters from your hand or field who’s total level equals 8 or more. You can remove this card from play from your Graveyard to draw 1 card from your Deck.

 

Kamihime, Charmers Goddess.

LIGHT. Level 8. Spellcaster/Ritual/Effect

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell card “Magical Ritual”. When this card is Ritual Summoned, You can draw two cards from your Deck. Afterwords. Send the top three cards of your deck to the Graveyard. Also, Once per turn. You can Tribute 1 Monster you control to add 1 card from your deck to your hand.

2500 ATK/1500 DEF.

 

Sierra the Ultimate Charmer

LIGHT. Level 10. Spellcaster/Fusion/Effect

This card can be Fusion Summoned by Fusing any 4 "Charmer" monsters.

???

3000 ATK/1500 DEF.

 

 

 

Oh yeah, if you can't tell, I was going with the Anime version of Bubbleman's Effect, dunno why aside from it being a move Judai would do at the start of a duel XP.