-Stoner-™ Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Here's a new Halo Tag i'm working on. I need suggestions on what to do, since i'm not that great at making Tags. Here's what I have so far: 2 C4D's, 2 Gradient Maps, Render, and a Render that's been Ocean Rippled. Help Please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D. Gray Man Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Its kindaf weird because the render dos,ent fit i just dont know why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Ok.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dotCUBED Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 I like the background so far, you need to work on the foreground composition and depth for now, but I like it so far =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 - Too monotone- Little depth- Focal doesn't fit the rest of the composition- No flow- Poor choice of render Overall, it's just a misdirected attempt at a sig. Try choosing a focal with a natural sense of movement and line to it. Give it some color to highlight important sections, and try to avoid making c4ds the focus of the background. You seem okay, but could be a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Noted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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