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The dots are a bit too round and bold with color.

the circle is a bit dark.

the text for the title is a bit to run together and flat.

the render is a bit too big? but that might not be your fault..

The 5D's logo and title are positioned way to far down.

 

otherwise, pretty good. ;)

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well, i would move the lines a bit farther apart, that would fix the running together problem..

 

for the texture, i would make it a bit more translucent.. then i would try to make it look a tad 3-D.

 

that should fix that Text problem. ;)

 

:O oh snap, im a Legendary member nao..

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