My first card, Vampire Gentlemen

[Clock]

Yeah, so, this is my first card. I feel the wording may seem a bit odd, though I had no clue how to rephrase it. So, what do you guys think?

 

[shortyranger]

It's a little over power for a level four monster. But good overall 7/10

[The inventor]

Nice card but it is sort of over power a little but hey were here for fun

[VainZiler]

Inventor, dont post your cards in other peoples threads, if ya wanna show off your cards, make your own thread for em.

 

And at the subject on hand, I think the wording could be changed a bit, The whole last sentence of the cards effect makes no sense.

[Purple Dinosaur]

Nice card but too much ATK...Lower it by 200 points each and the card is pretty much balanced! 8.33/10

[Clock]

And at the subject on hand' date=' I think the wording could be changed a bit, The whole last sentence of the cards effect makes no sense.

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Basically, it was supposed to mean your opponent chooses what card type you discard to activate the effect.

 

Anyway, thanks for the feedback guys, I can see you're right about the attack score being a bit too high for the effect.

[celoco28]

I think the cards effect should read something like this:

"Each time this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent, your opponent must declares 1 card type (Monster, Spell, or Trap). Discard 1 card of that type from your Deck and send it to the Graveyard to double the damage during the Damage Step."

And I would only raise the lvl by one and I think that should be perfect.

[Slash]

I think the cards effect should read something like this:

"Each time this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent' date=' your opponent must declare 1 card type (Monster, Spell, or Trap). Discard 1 card of that type from your Deck and send it to the Graveyard to double the damage during the Damage Step."

And I would only raise the lvl by one and I think that should be perfect.

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Yah also think that is how it should read:D

[sythcaris]