Cyber Altair Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 hy i am new and made these. this are my first cards so don't go harsh on me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 Their way overpowered, and horribly worded. I reccomend checking out the "how to write proper card effects" section for some advice on making card effects, as well as brushing up on card grammar. I can help you if you'd like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate arts Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 Don't listen to him, they're great, the first is a bit overpowered, but lot's of real cards are, and soul dragon, well, you don't specify WHERE the monsters have to be, in your deck? in the grave? in your opponents deck...? and so on, but other then that, they're amazing for the first set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 thanks i thought that the first one was too powerful but i thought it was okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 Not to sound mean, but I quote: "if your opponents has a monsters" Come on... And you really need to brush up on your caps and wording. You'd say -Type, not monsters (IE: Zomibe-Type), and a monsters elements is fully capitalized: FIRE, DARK, ect... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 Don't listen to him' date=' they're great, the first is a bit overpowered, but lot's of real cards are, and soul dragon, well, you don't specify WHERE the monsters have to be, in your deck? in the grave? in your opponents deck...? and so on, but other then that, they're amazing for the first set.[/quote']Â No do listen to him...cause the grammar is horrible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The inventor Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 Nice cards, how do you show the cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 the inventor, right you go on a site, i use www.tinypic.com (sorry if thats against the rules posting a site) and u upload your cards, then u cop and paste the link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 i know that my language is not good because english isn't my first language. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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