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I've been working hard on the next chapter, trying to make the detail good, here is a small taste, tell me what ya think ^_^

 

[spoiler=Small Bit]

Shane had never taken the time to really look at the building before. He was surprised by what he saw. The front was gloriously colored with red, blue, white, and yellow flowers planted in many small garden patches. A United States flag was waiving in the wind on a large pole to Shane’s left. To his right was another large pole, with the flag of the State of Washington waiving proudly in the wind. There were venders selling hot dogs, pretzels, and soda. In the front of the building was the ticket booth, which was empty.

Noticing this, Shane looked around, and quickly realized there was not a single person outside. Listening, he could hear the faint sound of cheers inside the building.

 

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I'm tryin. I got 3 pages into it, and I began to worry about how long I had to make it, and then lost my train of thought. I'll get it done. I'll try tonight/tomarrow afternoon. Though, chances are tomarrow night..I got somebody to hang out with...^_^

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Yankee Apprentice

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BUMP

Sorry people, I just now got the time and energy to do this.

So, here ya go, chapter Six ^_^

 

[spoiler=Chapter Six: A Late Loss]

Beep...Beep...Beep...Beep...BEEP

The piercing sound of the alarm clock shattered Shane's pleasant dreams. Slowly, he opened his eyes to see the bright light of the sun shining through his window. His eyes still adjusting to the light, Shane turned the still beeping alarm clock off. Staring at the clock, he could not make out the red numbers in front of him. He rubbed his eyes, and looked at the clock again.

"10:31" the clock read.

As if not bothered by this, Shane laid down again for a moment. Staring at the ceiling, a thought crept into his head. It quickly forced its way to the front of his mind. He immediately checked the time again. A look of shock came over his face.

He quickly got out of bed, and put on some clothes. He did not have time to think about what to wear, he just put on what he found first. Grabbing his Poke'balls before he left the room, he couldn't help but think why his mom didn't wake him up. He made his way down the stairs, trying to make up time, already he knew he was going to skip breakfast.

"Well good morning Shane. Glad you finally got up"

"No time mom, I gotta go, I'm gonna be late."

"Aren't you gonna get some breakfast?"

"No mom, I gotta go!"

Shane ran out the door.

He ran as fast as he could, not paying attention to what was in front of him, occasionally bumping into people, who where less than appreciative of it. Each time, Shane yelled "Sorry ma'am" or "Sorry sir" as he continued to run.

It seemed like it took forever for Shane to finally see the stadium, but finally, ahead in the distance, the giant dome became visible. The dome was in the shape of a giant Poke'ball, the red and white reflecting the sunlight, making it seem brighter, while the black stripe in the center made it more noticeable, as if it needed to be more visible anyway.

Slowly, but surly, he made his way to the grounds. He stopped and took in the beauty of what was around him. Shane had never taken the time to really look at the building before. He was surprised by what he saw. The front was gloriously colored with red, blue, white, and yellow flowers planted in many small garden patches. A United States flag was waiving in the wind on a large pole to Shane’s left. To his right was another large pole, with the flag of the State of Washington waiving proudly in the wind. There were vendors selling hot dogs, pretzels, and soda. In the front of the building was the ticket booth, which was empty.

Noticing this, Shane looked around, and quickly realized there was not a single person outside. Listening, he could hear the faint sound of cheers inside the building. Shane quickly realised that he had to get inside now.

Pushing his way through the revolving door in the front, he finally made his way to the lobby of the stadium. The room was brightly colored with white walls, red carpet with purple lines, and a big chandelier in the center of the room releasing a large amount of light. There where light colored red sofas lining the walls, with big vases with bright green plants in them to each side of the couches. Underneath the chandelier was a big desk with a young lady standing behind it.

"Oh, sorry sir, I didn't notice you there. How may I help you?" the lady asked, surprised to see somebody around at this time.

"Yea, thanks. My name is Shane Dawson, and I was supposed to be battling somebody. Am I already too late?"

"Oh, no, your actually just in time. The battle before yours just finished. Please, go on ahead."

Shane nodded, and advanced toward the stage. As he was about to open the door, the lady interrupted him.

"Sir, you can only have one pokemon in a battle. You must leave one here with me"

Shane looked back, annoyed and embarrassed. He handed the woman the ball containing Misdreavus.

"Ok sir, please go on ahead"

Shane again nodded, and walked toward the door. This time, he was able to reach the door, and open it. Immediately he was blasted by a wave of cheers from the crowd. Shane took a moment to take it all in. The giant crowd all around, and the cameras focusing on him. He almost found it overwhelming.

He was still staring at the crowd when he was grabbed by the arm

"Shane! Where have you been? I almost thought you weren't gonna make it."

He looked down and saw that is was Luna talking to him. The long brown haired girl, dressed in a school girl outfit was staring right at him with her bright brown eyes.

"Well, are you deaf? Were where you?"

"Oh, sorry Luna. I got up late. I tried to get here on time"

"Well, you did..barely. Anyway, it's your turn. I'm expecting to see you in the finals" she said with a smirk

Luna gave Shane a hug, and ran of, yelling "Good luck" to him.

 

Shane walked to the stage, and looked across to see his opponent. There stood the blue haired teenager, Renshi Tsuruchi.

 

With a yawn, Renshi looked back at Shane

"Can we make this quick? I got a date with your girlfriend over there" he said coldly

 

"She's not my gf"

 

"Ya, ya, ya. I guess your right. She's too good for you anyway."

 

Embarrassed, Shane glared at Renshi

"Can we just battle already?"

 

"Sure, it's gonna be fun tearing you apart"

 

The argument was interrupted by a booming voice

 

"Here we go folks! The final battle of the semi-finals! Shane Dawson Vs Renshi Tsuruchi!

competitors...begin your battle!"

 

Shane threw out his pokeball as soon as he heard this. He wanted to get a jump on Renshi.

"Come on Gastly, lets teach this guy a thing or two!"

The pokeball exploded into a bright light that quickly disappeared, leaving only the floating purple ball known as Gastly

It spun around a few times before settling in a spot, staring at Renshi.

Unimpressed, Renshi simply threw his pokeball.

The pokeball lit up the arena for a second time, this time however, a loud bark echoed through the arena. A small black dog with bones on it's back, and a picture of a skull on it's forehead growled at Gastly.

"Ok Houndor, lets make this quick. Lets give him a bite"

Like an obedient pet, the Houndor barked, and rushed toward Gastly. Before Shane could respond, Houndor was already at Gastly. It jumped in the air, opened it's mouth, and closed it on Gastly. However, the dog flew right through Gastly. Over and over again it tried to bit Gastly, each time, it could not get a grip on the ghost.

"Whats wrong Houndor!? Bite it already" Renshi said in an annoyed voice

 

"Yea Hounder, whats wrong? Can't get a grip on my Gastly? Fine. Gastly, give it a lick!"

Gastly turned around and faced Houndor with a big smile, and red eyes. Gaslty let out it's tongue, and struck Houndor with it. It licked it over and over again, each time causing more and more pain to Houndor.

"Houndor, get him off you!" Renshi yelled, realising it was in trouble

 

Houndor tried to get away over and over. Jumping to one side or another, but each time, Gastly was there to attack it. Finally, it tried to jump over Gastly. Gastly floated higher, but not high enough. Houndor got over Gastly, however, it's foot got caught on Gastly's forhead, and Houndor fell to the ground.

Shane looked over to see Renshi's face, expecting him to have a look of worry. He was sadly mistaken. Renshi had a big smirk on his face. Not something Shane ever expected he would see.

 

"Ok Houndor, stay right there, don't make a move"

Houndor stoped moving, just as it was told, though, it had a look of worry on its face.

 

"He's giving us the win Gastly, give him some more!"

Gastly again let out it's tongue, and whipped it toward Houndor.

 

"Houndor, now! Dodge it, and use Bite!"

"Didn't we already get past this? Your dog there can't hit Gastly"

"Are you so sure? Have a look fool"

 

Houndor jumped out of the way of the lick, and rushed toward Gastly with an open mouth, and closed it on Gastly. This time, Gastly was caught in its mouth.

 

Shane face turned into a look of complete surprise.

"H..How?"

 

"Your Gastly can't be 'ghostly' all that time can it? I noticed when Houndor jumped over your Gastly, it got its foot caught on it. Why would this happen? Simple. When your Gastly goes to attack me, it has to be solid, otherwise its attacks will do what mine did to you, nothing"

 

As Renshi was saying this, Houndor began to shake Gastly around violently like a chew toy.

 

"Gastly, stop! Get away from it!"

 

Gastly took it's tougne back in, and immediatly floated through Houndor's mouth.

With a look of pain on it's face, it floated back toward Shane.

"You ok Gastly? He's got all that talk, but if he gets hit by you, he can't do anything about it!

Gastly, attack Houndor! Lick!"

 

"You just don't learn." Renshi said in a cold voice

 

Gastly again tried to lick Houndor. Again, Houndor dodged, and bit Gastly. Over and over again Gastly tried, even hitting Hounder every so often, but Hounder responded each time with an attack of it's own.

"Houndor, give it one more bite!"

Houndor bit Gastly again, this time, Gastly fell down some. Gastly retreated back to Shane with a tired look on its face.

"Gastly, we need to end this. Lets get this done! Night Shade!"

 

Gastly opened its mouth and eyes wide. They slowly changed to a crimson red color, and then, suddenly, the entire arena went black. It was pitch black. Nothing could be seen, except the bright, crimson red eyes and mouth of Gastly. Slowly, Gastly's eyes and mouth faded into the darkness, with a shivering laugh being left in its place.

For what seemed like forever, nothing happened. It was quiet. Then, out of the stillness, a loud thud, and a bark screamed through the arena. Then, again, it became quiet. Again, it was interrupted by another thud and bark.

 

"Houndor, are you ok!?" Renshi said with a panic

Thinking for a second on what to do, while the thuds became more frequent, Renshi came up with an idea.

"Houndor, Ember! Bring in some light!"

The complete darkness was broken by a tiny red ball. It was a small, tiny red ball, that gradually became bigger and bigger. Then, suddenly, it shot out, with the speed of a bullet into the ground. Then, it dissapaered. For a few seconds, the darkness took over the arena. Then, the sound of an exploding fire erupted. The darkness of the arena was slightly weakend by the flickering flame of Houndor's Ember. Behind the fire was Houndor itself. The orange glow of the fire shown on Houndor, as it looked around, trying to spot Gastly.

Then, the flame quickly leaned to the left, with a dark ball rushing past it, just missing Houndor. Houndor looked closely, trying to see anything. Then, the flames leaned to the right, and Houndor was hit by the ball. Over and over again, Houndor was hit by the attack. Over and over again, Houndor barked in pain. Finally, Gastly rushed toward Houndor again. Again, Houndor was hit, but this time, in complete desperation, it hung on to its attacker, and bit it. In a flash, the darkness was gone, Gastly's concentraition broken. Releasing the attack, Gastly escaped the clutches of Houndor's fangs.

 

"Gastly, were close! Lick! End it!"

 

"Houndor, he's weak! Bite! One more time!"

 

The two pokemon rushed at each other, each hitting each other with their attack. Houndor stumbled backward, exhausted. Gastly floated low to the ground, it too was exhausted.

 

Suddenly, Gastly began to glow. The glow became brighter and brighter, until it was almost blinding. Then the shape of the glow began to change. It grew bigger, and its ball like shape began to change.

 

"Houndor, don't let it finish! This is it, give it one last bite!"

 

Houndor worked up all the energy it had left, and rushed toward the shining form. It opened its mouth, and closed it on the form. A loud scream echoed through the arena. The glow quickly went away, leaving Gastly in its place, being held on to by Houndor. Gastly had a look of suprise on its face. Slowly, its expression changed. It closed its eyes, and fell through Houndor's mouth to the ground.

Houndor stood, panting above the pokemon.

 

The silence of the crowd was deafaning. They could not belive what they just saw. Then, out of the silence, a single clap was heard, followed by another person, and another, and another, until the entire crowd was cheering and clapping.

 

The megaphones and speakers played the booming voice of the narrator, that even with the help of the sound systems, was barely able to be heard

 

"What a battle! Congradulations to both competitors on a great battle! Congradulations to Renshi Tsuruchi! He will be advansing to the finals!"

 

Shane ran to Gastly, unsure if it was ok.

"Gastly! Come on, wake up!"

He repeated this many times, but Gastly did not respond.

Shane then heared a voice speak to him

"Idiot"

Shane looked up, and saw Renshi

Glaring at Renshi, Shane could only mutter a single word, "What?"

 

"I said, 'idiot'. Your pokemon fainted. It's tired from battle. Take it to a pokemon center..or don't. I don't care."

 

"You don't care?"

 

"Thats right. I just want you to know, I'll be keeping an eye on you."

Renshi turned to his Houndor "Houndor, return.". His pokeball released a red beam that engulfed Houndor, and returned it to its pokeball.

Renshi turned, and walked away, with the crowd still cheering behind him.

 

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Uh...NO idea how it wasn't as suspenceful

Uh..Gastly is a ghost..so phyisical attacks would go through

and only one battle is good if said battle is actually good.

 

Get on msn =D

 

my MSN is broken or something cuz ive tried to log in to it like over 500 times today and bite is a dark type move which is super effective against ghost.

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