DingZhiLun Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 Ok, ask me if there is anything that I should add or if there is a problem. I'm new here so just tell me if I need to change something. The main characters are : Yuke Sentius14Main Character of story and friend to Jordan and Terra Jordan Zeke14Younger brother of Arron Zeke and friend to Yuke and Terra Arron Zeke17Older brother of Jordan Zeke and heir to the Zeke Throne Nell Sentius16Older sister of Yuke Sentius and top ten duelist of her school Pam Sentius8Younger sister of Yuke Sentius and still a beginner at the card game Terra Hanzi14Friend of Yuke and Jodan and also top ten duelist in her school Hanza Sentius33Father of Yuki, Nell, and Pam also one of the greatest duelist in Rose City, but now an old timer Episode one " The battle between Yuki and Jordan" : Yuki was sound asleep in his bed untill the his father Hanza wake him up.Hanza: It's time to wake up YukiYuki: Oh come on, can't I sleep for a little longer PLEASEHanza: It's time for your dueling exam though and if you want to become a dulist you have to tke themYuki: What it's time for the dueling exam, why did you not wake me up earlier!Hanza: I did right now ( Door opens) Hanza: Huh, who is thatJordan: It's me JordanHanza: Ok you can come inJordan: No, i'm just here to tell Yuki to wake upYuki: I'm up i'm up!Jordan: Ok, lets goHanza: Goodbye, I hope you pass the exams (After a few minutes of running) Yuki: Can we take a restJordan: No, we can't unless you want to be lateYuki: Ok (After another few minutes of running) Yuki: Wow, look at the size of that buildingJordan: It's large, but not as large as the Zeke CoperationYuki: Hey, look there's the door. Let's hurry.Door Guards: Oh, are you here the examsYuki: YesDoor Guards: Ok here you goJordan: So, Yuki how do you thimk the exams are going to be likeYuki: I bet it's going to easyDoor Guard: Here is the exam's doorYuki: I am so excited (Door opens) Yuki: Look at how many arenas there areJordan: Yea, alot...Jordan in his mind: Not, my house has over three times more than this... wait how many is that one, three, seven, eight...Exam's teacher #7: Hello there you must be here to take the exam's testYuki: YeaJordan: YepExam's teacher # 12: Then you over ther to the rightJordan: MeExam's teacher # 12: You are going to duel meJordan: OkExam's teacher #7: Well, I guess you on the left is going duel meYuki: Ok (After they walked to the duel arena they started dueling) Exam's teacher #7: Well, I guess you go firstYuki: Ok, I summon Wall Guard Wall Guard****earth / rock Atk: 200 Def: 1800 Yuki: I place it in defence positionExam's teacher #7: I summon Dark Venus Fly trap Dark Venus Fly Trap***dark / plant / effectAtk: 400 Def: 700 Exam's teacher #7: Attack my Venus Fly Trap!Yuki: Huh, why are you attacking me with a monster that only has 400 attackExam's teacher #7: It's effect is that I destroy the card it battles withYuki: Yea, but it's still a wasteExam's teacher #7: I play a spell card Seed Rebrith which let's me bring this card back to the field and now your card is destoryedYuki: What (While at Jordan's duel)Exam's teacher #12: Ok, you can go firstJordan: I summon Sword Monster Lv. 3 Sword Monster Lv. 3***dark / warrior / effectAtk: 800 Def: 500 Exam's teacher #12: A level monster? Well to badJordan: What are you taking aboutExam's teacher #12: I have an anti-level deckJordan: That dosen't mean I am going to lose to youExam's teacher #12: I summon Gaint Blader Gaint Blader****earth / warrior / effectAtk: 1400 Def: 1300 Exam's teacher #12: Attack Gaint Blader! To be continued Hoped you liked it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Poison Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 No offence but I didn't liked it :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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