OMGAKITTY Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 UPDATE! Suggestions and what-not...I'm pretty sure my OCG is off...again...I'll get it right one day... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 maybe lower the ATK and level Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rock_leet Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 i think it is an ok card though as the last dude said it's attack power and level are a bit too high. And yes, you need to rephrse the card so it looks like a real one. (OCG <-- im not sure waht iut exactly means, though i know it is related to how you write the cards effect) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 OCG is Official Card Grammar (I'm pretty sure, at least)If someone were to tell me how to word it, I would appreciate it... I don't know...I think that this card is pretty hard to pull of, therefore deserving the attack... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God of Cadillacs Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 Cool cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rock_leet Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 OCG is Official Card Grammar (I'm pretty sure' date=' at least)If someone were to tell me how to word it, I would appreciate it... I don't know...I think that this card is pretty hard to pull of, therefore deserving the attack...[/quote'] the first card's ocg its ok i think,, the other one would read like " This card is used to Ritual Summon "Alastor the Flame of Heaven". You must also pay half of your remaining Life Points and offer 1 Level 5 or higher Warrior-Type FIRE monster from your side of the Field."or something like that i guess BTW Rep-> for telling me what OCG means ty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joseph_downe Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 the ocg is off a little on the first, and more on the second Alastor's effect:This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the Ritual Spell Card "Contract of the Flame". This card cannot attack on the turn it is Ritual Summoned. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, both you and your opponent are limited to four Monster Card Zones. Contract's effect:This card is used to Ritual Summon "Alastor, The Flame of Heaven". You must pay half of your Life Points to activate this card. You must also offer at least one FIRE Warrior-type monster whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. All Ritual Offerings of Level Stars have to be equivalent to the monster it summons. Therefore, I suggest removing one of the later requirements to make it more playable. I don't think Alastor's ATK is too high, as long as you keep one of the restrictions(Either FIRE or Warrior-type, just not both) on the offerings for it, it should be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted November 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 thanks to leet for the rep, thanks to joseph for the detailed OCG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azwolop Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 hrmm i like the card actually, maybe if u decreased his ATK to like 3500-3200 and his DEF too 2600-2500 it might make it a little less over powered, personally it dosnt even seem overpowered too me now cause u gotta give up half your lifepoints, but still it would be a good idea, and i guess decrease it's level, then u got yourself a perfect card :D 8/10, if u tweek it again it'd easily be 9/10[ i havn't given out a 10/10 yet so dont assume i dont like your card :P ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 Overpowered. Take out last effect. Change the Ritual Spell's requirements to the usual. 8/10 Good pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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