DarkForce™ Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 NOTE: YRPOtaku169 IS NOW MY CO-WRITER...[spoiler=Some Fan-Fic Info] When Yusei Fudo finds that the Dark Signers are back with a new plan, his dueling skills are put to the test. His son, Kyle Fudo, joins him in his journey as well as Crow, Jack Atlas, and a couple others that may help the team or betray them. Speed Duels take a new twist, they can now be played on a Duel Disk, but the same rules apply. Shadow Duels are back and when you lose you're soul is not only sent to the Shadow Realm, but also used to feed The Chained Gods. Before you are allowed to Duel in just any random place you must aquire a Dueling License, a Dueling License is a digital ID card that registers your wins and losses in order and to who, when you reach a certain number of Wins special areas are unlocked around New Domino City. Everyone in this Fan-Fic has a Dueling License. ------------------------------------------------------------------[spoiler=PROLOUGE]The Satellite – 9:00 AM Eerie Voice: You fool! You believed that The Dark Signers would be enough to handle Yusei Fudo and the Crimson Dragon? Deep Voice: Yes, Sir… Eerie Voice: If you fail me one more time Goblin, it will be your last day. This is your final chance. Now leave… Goblin: Yes, sir. (A man with a dark red base colored cloak with blue trimming stands and walks out of the room, while 5 more figures emerge from the darkness.) Eerie Voice: He is of no more use to me. Majic, Labyrinth, Dizeaze, Fire and Ice, you are now my top line of offense against the citizens of New Domino City. Majic, find Yusei Fudo and challenge him to a shadow duel, see how well he duels, and use your ‘skills’ to get out of the duel before one of you loses. Labyrinth, find Jack Atlas and tell him the game is starting anew, and then report back to me. Dizeaze, find Crow and dispose of him, then return here. Fire and Ice, work your way to the top of the food chain over there in New Domino and eliminate anyone who gets in your way. Dismissed! Majic: Yes, Sir… Labyrinth: Whatever you say boss. Dizeaze: Ssssssssure. Fire and Ice: Alright, Mr. Z, Bye. (A girl stands and walks out of the room in a pink and white cloak. A giant bulky guy, follows her in a brown and black cloak. A tall, slim man wrapped in bandages and a green cloak leaves too. And finally a boy and girl leave the room together walking side-by-side the boy in a fiery red cloak and the girl in an icy blue one.) Mr. Z: The time has come. In a matter of days the world will know the wrath of the CHAINED GODS!!!!!! (Roaring and grumbling can be somewhat heard from below the room.) To Be Continued… ---------------------------------------------------------------------[spoiler=Kyle Fudo]Name: Kyle FudoAge: 13Deck: Warrior SynchroFavourite Card: Berzerker KnightTrump card: Berzerker KingBio: Kyle Fudo is Yusei Fudo's son, and is working to get his Dueling License. He was born just after his Dad had defeated the Dark Signers and now, because Yusei didn't know he had a son, Crow helps Yusei take care of Kyle. His mom died when he was 2. He is 5'4'', with straight blonde hair and his duel disk is red, spiked on all edges, except where his arm goes, and his deck was made by Pegasus himself and consists of one-of-a-time cards. [spoiler= Kakiryu Sagaku]Name: Kakiryu SagakuAge: 23Deck List: Jurak/Dinosaur Beatdown DeckJuraks found here:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/JuracCards: 63Monsters: 32LV7+: 8Jurak TyranusJurak TitanJurak SpinosBlack TyrannoUltimate TyrannoSuper Conductor TyrannoSuper-Ancient DinobeastSaurobeast BrachionLV5-6: 0NoneLV1-4: 24Gilasaurus x3Miracle Jurassic Egg x2Element Saurus x2Hydrogeddon x3Black Veloci x2Black Stego x2DestroyersaurusDyna BaseJurak ProtapusJurak VelloJurak MonolovJurak PtieraJurak IguanonJurak BrachisJurak GuivreJurak StauricoSpells: 15Terraforming x3Molten Destruction x2Jurassic World x2Big Evolution Pill x3Double Summon x3Magical Mallet x2Speed Spell - Summon Speeder x2Speed Spell - Speed Energy x2Speed Spell - Vision Wind Speed Spell - Power Baton x2Speed Spell - Gap StormSpeed Spell - The End of StormSpeed Spell - Wheelie BreakerSpeed Spell - Tune-Up 123Speed Spell - Speed Jammer x2Speed Spell - Dash Pilfer x2Traps: 13Fossil Excavation x3Raigeki Break x3Sakuretsu Armor x3Hunting Intinct x2Wicked Rebirth x2Extra Deck: 3Dyna TankJurak GiganotJurak VelhiptoFavourite Card: Jurac TyranusTrump Card: Jurac TitanBio: Kakiryu is one of the two Sagaku Twins, Co-CEOs of Sagaku Motors, the leading retailer in Duel Runner parts (kinda like a cross between Ford and KaibaCorp). He has blond, spiky hair with red highlights at the tips, a goatee, black clothing including a racing jacket with big-name racing labels, a Sagaku Motors T-Shirt, and racing jeans. He always carries sunglasses and a lit cigarette (non-tobacco-based). He is very arrogant and has an enormous ego, as well as a very short fuse, but is very protective of his twin sister and his company. He is interested in the current state of affairs for reasons unknown, and seems to keep wanting to duel the Signers.... [spoiler= Yukikabe Sagaku]Name: Yukikabe SagakuAge: 23Deck List: Ice Barrier/Ice Counter Lock DeckIce Barrier found here:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ice_BarrierCARDS: Monsters:30LV7+: 4White Night DragonIce MasterMedium of the Ice BarrierGrunard, Brave General of the Ice BarrierLV5-6: 3FrostosaurusRoyal Knight of the Ice BarrierGreat Monk of the Ice BarrierLV1-4: 23Frost TigerBlizzard DragonBlizzard Warrior x3Blizzard Lizard x3Cold EnchanterIce Blast User Reice x2Unshaven Angler x2Blizzed - Guard of the Ice BarrierPractitioner of the Ice BarrierIntoxicated Bug of the Ice BarrierAcolyte of the Ice BarrierFeng Shui Master of the Ice BarrierDefying Troops of the Ice BarrierBushi of the Ice BarrierWater Reflection of the Ice BarrierTransport Unit of the Ice BarrierForbidden Spell Group of the Ice BarrierSpells: 16TerraformingField BarrierAbsolute Zero BarrierSalvage x3Water-Hazard x2Ice Mirror x3Double Summon x3Magical Mallet x2Traps: 14Blizzard Curtain x3Cold FusionRaigeki Break x3Defense Draw x3Dimensional Prison x3Divine Protection of the Ocean Dragon LordExtra Deck: 3Brionac, Dragon of the Ice BarrierDewloran, Tiger Prince of the Ice BarrierGungnir, Dragon of the Ice BarrierFavourite Card: Brionac, Dragon of the Ice BarrierTrump Card: Gungnir, Dragon of the Ice BarrierBio: Yukikabe is one of the two Sagaku Twins, Co-CEOs of Sagaku Motors, the leading retailer in Duel Runner parts (kinda like a cross between Ford and KaibaCorp). She has long, flowing hair with light-blue highlights at the tips, green eyes, a bit of a valley girl accent, and a mixture of Sailor and Gothic Lolita clothing including a frilly black miniskirt, long black shoulder-length gloves, long black stockings, and a black Japanese schoolgirl blouse with a light-blue bow embroidery. She always has a golden locket set on the center of her bow with a gem that looks like it is made out of ice, and a customized Duel Disk with a black and light-blue paintjob. She seems emotionless and merciless, but is very caring towards her twin brother and her employees. She is interested in the current state of affairs for reasons unknown, and seems to keep wanting to duel the Signers... [spoiler=Majic]Name: MajicAge: 23Gender: FemaleDeck: (Beginning) Spellcaster (End) Chained God - Spellz DeckFavourite Card: Dark Magician GirlTrump Card: (Beginning) Dawn Sorceress (End) Chained God - SpellzBio: Little is known about Majic, except that she loves pink, and she is a miraculous magician. She has long blonde hair with pink highlights at the ends, purple eyes, and a Pink base colored Duel Runner with purple trimming, the same with her duel disk. [spoiler=Labyrinth]Name: LabyrinthAge: 29Gender: MaleDeck: (Beginning) EARTH (End) Chained God - Maze DeckFavourite Card: Labyrinth WallTrump Card: (Beginning) Earth Destroyer (End) Chained God - MazeBio: Little is known about Labyrinth, except that he is 7'6'', he has a crew-cut, brown hair, and black lifeless eyes. His Duel Runner is dark, dark brown, his Duel Disk is brown and the center looks like a maze. [spoiler=Dizeaze]Name: DizeazeAge: ?Gender: MaleDeck: Chained God - Plague DeckFavourite Card: Chained God - PlagueTrump Card: Chained God - PlagueBio: Dizeaze is wrapped in bandages, and has no eyes whatsoever. He has a black Duel Runner, and Duel Disk. [spoiler=Fire]Name: Fyronus PyroniaAge: 850Gender: MaleDeck: Volcanic/Chained God - Volcanus DeckFavourite Card: Chained God VolcanusTrump Card: Chained God - VolcanusBio: You have heard of the city Atlantis. How its supposed to be lost in the deepest areas of the seas. Well Fyronus was born in Volcanus the city lost in the center of the earth. He was seperated from his twin sister Aquarius Icinean at birth. Fyronus has orange skin and black hair, he has the weirdest ability to catch himself and others on fire by touch. His Duel Runner and Duel Disks are Red. And he still loks like a 20-yr old kid. [spoiler=Ice]Name: Aquarius IcineanAge: 850Gender: Female Deck: Ice Barrier/Chained God - AtlantixFavourite Card: Master of The Ice BarrierTrump Card: Chained God - AtlantixBio: Aquarius was born in Atlantis the city lost in the depths of the ocean. She was seperated from her twin brother Fyronus Pyronia at birth. She has blue skin and white hair, she has the weirdest ability to freeze herself and others into an indestructable piece of ice by touch. Her Duel Runner and Duel Disk are both Blue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 [ALIGN=CENTER]TITLEChains of the Dead[/ALIGN] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Yu-Gi-Oh! Deus Ex Nazca?I have other ideas..... P.S. Do you have any character slots left? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Christian wins. Reps and points given. Thank you I hope you become fans of this fan-fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 :(Anyways, I will be making a character....Eventually.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Bump. Chapter 1 will be out sometime this week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 Note 1: DarkForce, please take out that note in Kaki's deck description and remove the parentheses section in both of the twins' bios (it's spoiler!).Note 2: The Speed Spells in Kaki's deck replace his Normal Spells when he Turbo Duels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 Ok, gotcha. I'll do that now. And now it makes sense. But im still goin with the Speed Duels are on normal duels thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 Attention!We will now be accepting characters ideas for this fanfic!But we won't let any ordinary Mary-Sues in.So PM me the following form filled out with your character's information:Name:Age:Deck List:Favourite Card:Trump Card:Bio: Character rules:1. Your Deck List should conform to playable standards. That means 40-60 cards in your Main Deck and up to 15 cards in your Extra Deck.2. You must follow the Advanced Format for your Decks. That means you have a Limited/Forbidden List. Follow this link to see what is on that list:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/March_2009_Lists3. You may put in custom cards as long as you include a link to where they are located.4. Your character bio must be no more than 5 sentences.5. No Mary-Sues. Period. Thank you, and get to work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 Heh... I have some problems with the names, to be honest. 1) Why would Yusei Fudo, a primarily Japanese character, have a kid with an English name? Doesn't make sense, and is a sign of Sue-dom.2) Kakiryu and Yukikabe? You're better off naming them "dinosaur" and "ice wall", because that's what they mean. Change 'em up; it's kinda cringe-worthy now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 1. I don't really know what was going through DarkForce's head when he wrote that about Kyle.But 2. I like Japanese names for my characters.And 3. FYI, "Kakiryu" translates into "heat dragon" and "Yukikabe" translates into "snow wall".So 4. Thank you for your comments.Finally, 5. Will you sign on to make a character, Rinne? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 *slaps self* I wasn't thinking straight; the "kaki" part threw me off. Anyways, you should still change them, because anyone who knows Japanese can't take this seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 But they sound cool...think about it...."kaki" and "yuki"..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 But they sound cool...think about it...."kaki" and "yuki"..... Sound cool =/= work well. If you need help, PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 I'm good. Besides, I hate dub names. Japanese names sound more original.And that character offer still stands, Rinne..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 I'm good. Besides' date=' I hate dub names. Japanese names sound more original.And that character offer still stands, Rinne.....[/quote'] *slaps you* I'm not talking about dub names... Oh, for the love of Frunk, I'll give you ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 (whimpers and cries)That huuuuuurt.....(breaks out into sobbing)Why..(sniff)....did...(sniffle)...do..(sniff)....that? P.S. Do you dislike Japanese names or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 Do you dislike Japanese names or something? I like them. I dislike bad usage of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 I'm sorry about being a crybaby when you slapped me...Wait...you consider their names bad?Can you please help me fix them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 I'm sorry about being a crybaby when you slapped me...Wait...you consider their names bad?Can you please help me fix them? *slaps harder* We're really going full-circuit here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 OMG Y DID U SLAP ME AGAIN!?!?!?!?!?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 OMG Y DID U SLAP ME AGAIN!?!?!?!?!?! I'm good. Besides' date=' I hate dub names. Japanese names sound more original.And that character offer still stands, Rinne.....[/quote'] *slaps you* I'm not talking about dub names... Oh, for the love of Frunk, I'll give you ideas. Does that answer your question? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 So...down to business...can you please help me fix my characters' names?And would you like to have a slot as a main character?Back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Please. Anyone who does not want to comment on this Fan-Ficneeds to leave. Thank you for your help Rinne but you are spamming my Fan-Fic, please leave unless you dont have anything good to say, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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