[DUEL]Storm Lands

[-Griffin]

I'm on a roll aren't I? Wind Omen, Ladybugs, Fluidians and now these!

Who's ready for a game of luck?

 

|Storm Lands|

|Field|

|When this card is activated and during your opponent’s End Phase, roll a 6 sided dice and set the number of Storm Counters on this card equal to the result. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can remove 2 Storm Counters from the field to Special Summon a Thunder-Type monster from your hand and destroy 1 card on the field instead.|

 

|Kege Breaker|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 4|

|ATK 1800|DEF 0|

|If the number of Storm Counters on the field is 3 or less, this card loses 400 ATK for each Storm Counter on the field. If the number of Storm Counters on the field is 4 or more, this card gains 200 ATK for each Storm Counter on the field.|

 

|Rescu Bringer|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 4|

|ATK 1500|DEF 1700|

|During your Standby Phase, if you have more cards in your hand than the number of Storm Counters on the field, discard cards until you have a number of cards in your hand equal to the number of Storm Counters on the field. During your Standby Phase, if you have less cards in your hand than the number of Storm Counters on the field, draw until you have a number of cards in your hand equal to the number of Storm Counters on the field|

 

|Ta’ki Charger|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 5|

|ATK 2000|DEF 2400|

|If there is exactly 1 Storm Counter on the field you can Special Summon this monster from your hand. When this card is Summoned, place any number of Storm Counters on this card (Max 6). Destroy this card if there is more than 6 Storm Counters on the field. Destroy this card if there is not a face-up “Storm Lands” on the field.|

 

|Jardu Exploder|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 8|

|ATK 2700|DEF 3200|

|If there are exactly 6 Storm Counters on the field you can Special Summon this monster from your hand. When this card is Summoned by this effect, place 3 Storm Counters on this card. Destroy this card during your Standby Phase.|

 

|Armas Blaster|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 4|

|ATK 1800|DEF 0|

|Remove 3 Storm Counters from the field to destroy 1 card on the field.|

 

|Bemorth Scouter|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 3|

|ATK 1300|DEF 0|

|Once per turn you can destroy 1 face-up Spell Card.|

 

|Lumiiku Fabricator|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 4|

|ATK 1500|DEF 1400|

|Once per turn you can activate one of the following effects;

- Tribute a monster on your side of the field. Place Storm Counters on this card equal to the Level of the tributed monster. This card gains 200 ATK for each Storm Counter on it until the End Phase of your next turn.

- Remove any number of Storm Counters from the field. Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard who's Level is equal to the number of Storm Counters removed.|

 

|Smo'ka Expander|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 1|

|ATK 0|DEF 2000|

|When this card is Summoned, change it to Defence Position and place 1 Storm Counter on this card.|

 

|Bes'kati Rotator|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 4|

|ATK 1800|DEF 1500|

|Return this card from the field to the Deck to Special Summon Thunder-Type monsters other than "Nukin Rotator" from your Deck who's combined level equal the number of Storm Counters on the field.|

 

|Alle-Rei Accelerator|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 3|

|ATK 1650|DEF 1000|

|Remove 3 Storm Counters from the field to draw a card.|

 

|War'kuf Returner|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 4|

|ATK 2100|DEF 300|

|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Remove 3 Storm Counters on the field to Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. During your Standby Phase, place 1 Storm Counter on this card.|

 

|Kaiam Shredder|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 6|

|ATK ?|DEF ?|

|This card's origional ATK is equal to 600x the number of Storm Counters on the field. This card's origional DEF is equal to 700x the number of Storm counters on the field. This card can attack each monster your opponent controls once each.|

 

|Balum Sniper|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 4|

|ATK ?|DEF ?|

|This card's origional ATK is equal to 400x the number of Storm Counters on the field. This card's origional DEF is equal to 600x the number of Storm counters on the field. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, discard 1 random card from your opponent's hand.|

 

|Goard Terraformer|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 4|

|ATK 2100|DEF 300|

|You can discard this card to add 1 "Storm Lands" from your Deck to your hand. If "Storm Lands" is not on the field, destroy this card.|

 

|Reksi Maccau Divine Designer|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 10|

|ATK 0|DEF 4000|

|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Storm Lands". When this card is Summoned, remove all Storm Counters from the field, then place 6 Storm Counters on this card. Negate the effect of "Storm Lands" during your opponent's End Phase. If there are not 6 Storm Counters on the field, destroy this card during your End Phase. During your Standby Phase, set the number of Storm Counters on this card to 6.|

 

|Mirru Eschi Divine Protector|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 10|

|ATK 0|DEF 4000|

|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Storm Lands". Thunder-Type monsters are not destroyed by their own effects. Once per turn, add a Thunder-Type monster from your Graveyard to your hand.|

 

|Feifgun Haqqu Divine Soldier|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 10|

|ATK 3500|DEF 3500|

|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Storm Lands". When a monster is Special Summoned by the effect of Storm Lands, draw a card. This card inflicts piercing damage.|

 

|Emergency Storm Capsule|

|Trap Card|

|Place up to 3 Storm Counters on a face-up "Storm Lands".|

 

|Storm Pistol|

|Equip Spell Card|

|Equip only to a Thunder-Type monster. Increase the ATK of 1 monster equal to 400x the number of Storm Counters on the field. When this card is removed from the field you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field.|

 

[spoiler=YVD]|Storm Lands|0|STRM|Spell Card|Spell||Field|||When this card is activated and during your opponent’s End Phase, roll a 6 sided dice and set the number of Storm Counters on this card equal to the result. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can remove 2 Storm Counters from the field to Special Summon a Thunder-Type monster from your hand and destroy 1 card on the field instead.|

|Kege Breaker|1|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|4||1800|0|If the number of Storm Counters on the field is 3 or less, this card loses 400 ATK for each Storm Counter on the field. If the number of Storm Counters on the field is 4 or more, this card gains 200 ATK for each Storm Counter on the field.|

|Rescu Bringer|2|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|4||1500|1700|During your Standby Phase, if you have more cards in your hand than the number of Storm Counters on the field, discard cards until you have a number of cards in your hand equal to the number of Storm Counters on the field. During your Standby Phase, if you have less cards in your hand than the number of Storm Counters on the field, draw until you have a number of cards in your hand equal to the number of Storm Counters on the field.|

|Ta’ki Charger|4|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|5||2000|2400|If there is exactly 1 Storm Counter on the field you can Special Summon this monster from your hand. When this card is Summoned, place any number of Storm Counters on this card (Max 6). Destroy this card if there is more than 6 Storm Counters on the field. Destroy this card if there is not a face-up “Storm Lands” on the field.|

|Jardu Exploder|5|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|8||2700|3200|If there are exactly 6 Storm Counters on the field you can Special Summon this monster from your hand. When this card is Summoned by this effect, place 3 Storm Counters on this card. Destroy this card during your Standby Phase.|

|Armas Blaster|6|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|4||1800|0|Remove 3 Storm Counters from the field to destroy 1 card on the field.|

|Bemorth Scouter|7|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|3||1300|0|Once per turn you can destroy 1 face-up Spell Card.|

|Lumiiku Fabricator|8|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|4||1500|1400|Once per turn you can activate one of the following effects; - Tribute a monster on your side of the field. Place Storm Counters on this card equal to the Level of the tributed monster. This card gains 200 ATK for each Storm Counter on it until the End Phase of your next turn. - Remove any number of Storm Counters from the field. Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard who's Level is equal to the number of Storm Counters removed.|

|Smo'ka Expander|9|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|1||0|2000|When this card is Summoned, change it to Defence Position and place 1 Storm Counter on this card.|

|Bes'kati Rotator|10|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|4||1800|1500|You can return this card from the field to the Deck to Special Summon Thunder-Type monsters other than "Bes'kati Rotator" from your Deck who's combined level equal the number of Storm Counters on the field.|

|Alle-Rei Accelerator|11|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|3||1650|1000|Remove 3 Storm Counters from the field to draw a card.|

|War'kuf Returner|12|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|4||2100|300|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Remove 3 Storm Counters on the field to Special Summon this card from your

hand or Graveyard. During your Standby Phase, place 1 Storm Counter on this card.|

|Kaiam Shredder|13|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|6||?|?|This card's origional ATK is equal to 600x the number of Storm Counters on the field. This card's origional DEF is equal to 700x the number of Storm counters on the field. This card can attack each monster your opponent controls once each.|

|Balum Sniper|14|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|4||?|?|This card's origional ATK is equal to 400x the number of Storm Counters on the field. This card's origional DEF is equal to 600x the number of Storm counters on the field. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, discard 1 random card from your opponent's hand.|

|Goard Terraformer|15|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|4||2100|300|You can discard this card to add 1 "Storm Lands" from your Deck to your hand. If "Storm Lands" is not on the field, destroy this card.|

|Reksi Maccau Divine Designer|16|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|10||0|4000|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Storm Lands". When this card is Summoned, remove all Storm Counters from the field, then place 6 Storm Counters on this card. Negate the effect of "Storm Lands" during your opponent's End Phase. If there are not 6 Storm Counters on the field, destroy this card during your End Phase. During your Standby Phase, set the number of Storm Counters on this card to 6.|

|Mirru Eschi Divine Protector|17|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|10||0|4000|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Storm Lands". Thunder-Type monsters are not destroyed by their own effects. Once per turn, add a Thunder-Type monster from your Graveyard to your hand.|

|Feifgun Haqqu Divine Soldier|18|STRM|Thunder/Effect|Fire|10||3500|3500|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Storm Lands". When a monster is Special Summoned by the effect of Storm Lands, draw a card. This card inflicts piercing damage.|

|Emergency Storm Capsule|19|STRM|Trap Card|Trap||None|||Place up to 3 Storm Counters on a face-up "Storm Lands".|

|Storm Pistol|20|STRM|Spell Card|Spell||Equip|||Equip only to a Thunder-Type monster. Increase the ATK of 1 monster equal to 400x the number of Storm Counters on the field. When this card is removed from the field you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field.|

 

 

[-Griffin]

Added 4 new monsters, including their Ace's, the "Divine" Storm Lands protectors. Anyone going to comment?

[玄魔の王]

Storm Counters? Boo Yah! These are some powerful cards, ones that put Cloudians to shame, so I like them. 9/10 from me.

[-Griffin]

Added 4 new cards; the ones directly above the Divine set.

[EnkoMaun]

They're all-around good cards, but some of them are way too op'd. Such as Kege Breaker. It's ATK should've been 1400 at most, although it's effect is pretty good. The effects are all-around awesome. I have an idea, if you want it, i think it goes well with Bemorth Scouter.

 

Yhamuh Bomb (*) FIRE

Thunder/Effect - ATK 100 DEF 100

If "Storm Lands" on your side of the field is destroyed, inflict 300 damage to your opponent's Life Points for each Storm Counter on "Storm Lands". Discard monsters from your hand with a total of Level Stars equal to the Storm Counters on "Storm Lands" to take 1 "Storm Lands" from your Deck to your hand. Then shuffle your hand.

 

Also, your OCG is awesome, you're very creative, but I don't get the Fire/Thunder combo on monsters. Kinda weird.

 

Anyway, you've done yet another good job.

[-Griffin]

Well, 50% of the time, you can't really summon Kage anyway, unless you want him to just be a bad beatstick. And if you do summon him at a good time, his ATK will just change again next turn, and he could easily become useless. The point of the set is that its deadly with good timing but suicidal without it.

 

The FIRE/Thunder thing seemed to make sense, after all, thunder storms tend to set things on fire and both are energetic, destructive forces. I also wanted to move Thunder from using LIGHT support so much and split up the attributes a bit.

 

Other than Kage, which may be powerful but I'm happy with. What other ones do you think need balance?

[EnkoMaun]

hmm, never thought of it like that.

Y'know what I realized? You have no Spell or Trap cards. You should make some.

 

Also, when I thought of your "just at the right time!" strategy, I really did see that they are balanced enough.

 

Can I give you a few Spell ideas?

 

Emergency Storm Capsule

Quick-Play Spell Card

Put 3 Storm Counters on 1 card on your side of the field.

 

Lightningrod of the Divines

Continuous Spell Card

When a card with Storm Counters on it is destroyed, put all Storm Counters on that card on this card. Once per turn, you may place any amount of Storm Counters on a card on your side of the field from this card, or place any amount of Storm Counters on this card from a card with Storm Counters.

 

Storm Pistol

Equip Spell Card

Increase the ATK of 1 monster equal to the Storm Counters on the monster.

 

Also, you could've used WIND with Thunder. People don't tend to get the relationship between FIRE and Thunder, and if you don't want LIGHT, just an idea though.

[-Griffin]

I'm trying not to give too many ways of adding Storm Counters, for example, if you just used Storm Capsule on Kage, it would always have a boost of ATK while Storm Lands if face-up, a minimum of 2600 and a maximum of 3600, so average 3100 ATK monster, pretty powerful, even more when you notice that it still combos with the rest of the Deck.

 

 

Emergency Storm Capsule

Trap Card

Place up to 3 Storm Counters on a face-up "Storm Lands".

 

I like the balance of this more, when Storm Lands redoes its effect, the counters go and the trap part means you have to wait a turn before using it to get effects such as Alle-Rei to activate.

 

 

Storm Pistol

Equip Spell Card

Equip only to a Thunder-Type monster. Increase the ATK of 1 monster equal to 400x the number of Storm Counters on the field. When this card is removed from the field you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field.

 

Well, since the other version wouldn't ever really add more than 5 ATK =P This version gives a nice ATK boost (Average of 1400 ATK, which is less than a UWS or Mage Power would normally give, it also varies) It also has a nice second effect to make it more run, since equips almost never are, that doubles up as helping Storm Lands.

 

I don't like the other one, it just gives way too many reliable counters, doubly abusable by the first two monsters in this set.

[玄魔の王]

 

Emergency Storm Capsule

Trap Card

Place up to 3 Storm Counters on a face-up "Storm Lands".

 

I like the balance of this more' date=' when Storm Lands redoes its effect, the counters go and the trap part means you have to wait a turn before using it to get effects such as Alle-Rei to activate.

 

 

Storm Pistol

Equip Spell Card

Equip only to a Thunder-Type monster. Increase the ATK of 1 monster equal to 400x the number of Storm Counters on the field. When this card is removed from the field you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field.

 

Well, since the other version wouldn't ever really add more than 5 ATK =P This version gives a nice ATK boost (Average of 1400 ATK, which is less than a UWS or Mage Power would normally give, it also varies) It also has a nice second effect to make it more run, since equips almost never are, that doubles up as helping Storm Lands.

 

I don't like the other one, it just gives way too many reliable counters, doubly abusable by the first two monsters in this set.

[/quote']

 

...1400 ATK extra is impossible with 400-point incruments, unless something gets half a counter. You either mean 1200 or 1600. Besides that, valid points and very good cards.

[-Griffin]

I mean that the 'average' roll you get on a dice is 3.5. you'll never actually get that, but it's an average value for saying how good a card would be, 3.5x400 =1400.

[玄魔の王]

Fair enough arguement, although in my experience averages go out the window in practice.

[-Griffin]

It does, but it's still better to use an average than say, "Dice hate me, a 2 is my average, I'm going to double the power of all my cards."

 

Also; added the 2 s/t support cards and 3 monsters directly before the Divine set.

[玄魔の王]

And they seem like good cards to me.

[Haou Devil 12]

These cards are awesome. These cards are almost similar to my Digital Archetype. None the less, very cool. 9/10.

[goldenboy820]

Make the deck more detached from storm lands. You make it so that they depend solely on it, yet they are alos harmed by it. They should at least hold their own until you search for the field spell.

7/10 for now.

[-Griffin]

Make the deck more detached from storm lands. You make it so that they depend solely on it' date=' yet they are alos harmed by it. They should at least hold their own until you search for the field spell.

7/10 for now.

[/quote']

 

That is the entire point of the set. Making them "hold their own" without it is not my aim.

[EnkoMaun]

Oh yeah, you should make a field spell searcher. Or this set will collapse. You're going awesome tho.

 

@ goldenboy: damn i missed ya man.

[-Griffin]

They have a searcher;

|Goard Terraformer|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 4|

|ATK 2100|DEF 300|

|You can discard this card to add 1 "Storm Lands" from your Deck to your hand. If "Storm Lands" is not on the field, destroy this card.|

[EnkoMaun]

oh. Forgot that one.

[-Griffin]

Considering how vital Storm Lands is to them, a real Deck of these would probably run 3x Storm Lands, 3x Goard and 1/2 Terraforming to make sure they almost always get it in turn 1.

[玄魔の王]

Oh yeah' date=' you should make a field spell searcher. Or this set will collapse. You're going awesome tho.

[/quote']

They have a searcher;

|Goard Terraformer|

|FIRE/Thunder|

|Level 4|

|ATK 2100|DEF 300|

|You can discard this card to add 1 "Storm Lands" from your Deck to your hand. If "Storm Lands" is not on the field, destroy this card.|

oh. Forgot that one.

 

Wow. You didn't notice that? Besides, with Terraforming and other cards like that, this is just maple syrup on the pancakes.

[-Griffin]

Is it a necrobump? Why yes, it is! But what's that in the title? And that spoiler in the first post?