maxliam Posted October 29, 2007 Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 hope you like this one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxliam Posted October 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 oh i forgot to put caps on the names oh well its still good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted October 29, 2007 Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 Pretty good, the only mistake I found was the 2nd word should be changed from "an" to "a", other than that Its good. I'll give it a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Hidden Mirror Village Posted October 29, 2007 Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 when it first started to load, i thought it was bubble dragon lol, but it is an okay card, a wee bit overpowered, i would lwer him to 2300/0 but its your best so far, and the only grammar mistake is the second word "an" should be "a" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 29, 2007 Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 It needs work. You don't need to put an "a" nor "an" before the card name, you're missing capitals where needed, and the effect is a bit overpowering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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