Riku Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 [spoiler=Intro]It has been two years since Yuna and the others had defeated Sin, Somehow Sin has Been Revived By Seymour, Who we all thought they had killed.Now We Need the Guardians and Summoners of Spira To fight. ^^^^I know it not good, but it a start[spoiler=Character Form]Characters Name:Age:Gender:Appearence:Class:Summoner Etc. (Classes From FFX)Weapon:Bio:Anything to add for Your Character: [spoiler=My App]Characters Name:VladimirAge:15Gender:MAppearence:[spoiler=Pic] Class:WarriorWeapon:ScytheBio:A Cocky Kid That is a Real Ladies man But Doesnt always think positiveAnything to add for Your Character:-------------- once i get at least 1 summoner and 3 guardians, i'll start writing-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Chapters[spoiler=Chapter 1-The Journey Begins]It was spring in Luca, Vladimir had just heard that Lukky was starting her journey today. “I have to be at the Dock in aboutfive minutes” Vladimir Said while putting on his shoes. Runi and Rakke had been waiting at the dock for about fifteen minutes for Vladimir and Lukky. While Lukky was running down the Street of Luca then she notices Vladimir. “Well hello Vladimir, sorry I'm running so late.” Lukky Stated while walking up to Vladimir. “It ok, I'm running late too.” Vladimir added. “Hey Runi do you know what is taking them so long?” Rakke stated. “Well Vladimir Had probably Fallen into a toilet or got beat up by a fly and Lukky probably got caught up in makeup and making sure she has everything like her staff and potions and all the stuff Vladimir would probably forget” Runi said while sitting down. “Why do you hate Vladimir so much? You know he is the strongest out of all of us and yet you make him sound like somebody who can’t even beat up a fly.” Rakke added while walking over to Runi. “I'm just worried he may get too attached to Lukky and stuff, just like what happened to Tidus and Yuna.”Runi said in a sad tone. “Well you have to deal with love, if they both love each other; I think they should be allowed to love each other.” Rakke said defensively. Meanwhile on the streets of Luca Vladimir and Lukky where talking and laughing until they got to the dock. Once Lukky and Vladimir had gotten there, Rakke and Runi started to walk up. “Took you guys long enough!” Rakke and Runi simultaneously said. “Well, I had to do choirs, grab my scythe and potions plus I had to buy my new Armlet.” Vladimir stated while showing off his glowing black armlet. “I had to grab my staff, potions and phoenix downs and I had to tell my parents that I was going to be off.” Lukky said while checking her backpack. “Well at least you’re here now can we leave?” Runi added. “Last one on the ship is a rotten Flan!” Lukky said while running towards the ship. Everybody started to run and laugh and have a great time except the whole time when Runi looked at Vladimir she gave him an evil look, like she wanted to punch Vladimir right in the nose. In Vladimir’s mind he wondering if she was making everyone laugh just we all don’t worry about Sin and Seymour. Once everyone got on the boat, the villagers had come to say goodbye. The horn sounded then the ship was sailing into the unknown seas and oceans to head to Besaid to recruit a hero. At about twenty-three minutes into the cruise it started to storm. “Haha… You guys have done well so far but get ready to fight your first Sin-Spawn or as I call him your first Seymour-Spawn. The voice from the sky said as a crimson red Lightning bolt came out of the sky right onto the dock of the ship. Thus creating a monster called Mortibody Ver2.3. “What the heck, Seymour where are you, come fight like a real man.” Vladimir yelled but only got silence. “Thundaga!!!” Lukky yelled while having 5 giant thunders bolts come from the sky onto the Mortibody but only slightly hurting him. “Here this should help you guys.” Rakke Said while transforming into his Overdrive from. “Haha...He he...Time for this little mutt to die.”Rakke Added. When Rakke had transformed Lukky had casted Haste so Rakke was attacking at twice the speed. “Rughhh… raughhhhh” The Mortibody said while being sliced and diced, then the Mortibody threw Rakke off him, thus knocking him onto the bridge, Rakke turned into his normal form after that critical blow from The Mortibody. Now the Mortibody was mad and started to go on a rampage. “Lukky Summon Ixion hopefully her Overdrive can help us” Vladimir said while swings his scythe at The Mortibody, stabbing it into its arm. Lukky first used cure on Rakke giving him energy to help fight again then she summoned Ixion which took about a minute. “Ixion, will you help us?” Ixion nodded and used her aerospark shot, which hit The Mortibody directly in the Face, knocking him closer to the edge of the ship. “Ixion use your Thor’s Hammer.” Lukky said. Ixion started to disagree and started to attack with her horn knocking Mortibody a little bit closer to the edge. “She has a brilliant idea instead of wasting all that energy, she can just keep attacking The Mortibody until he gets close enough to the edge to knock him off” Runi said in a fascinated tone. Ixion neighed to show that she agreed with Runi. Once Rakke and Vladimir heard Runi they started to back away so Ixion could continue what she was doing then Vladimir thought of a perfect idea and whispered it to Rakke,Rakke and Vladimir had cut off the Anchor and where slowly tying it onto The Mortibody’s Leg. Once Ixion saw that the anchor was tied on and that Rakke and Vladimir where away from the Mortibody, Ixion kicked the Mortibody knocking him off the ship and the anchor pulling the Mortibody deeper and deeper into the ocean, thus drowning him.Lukky Dismissed Ixion, Ixion jumped and disappeared into the clouds. “Where here, we are at Besaid, get ready to get to land.” The captain said while slowing the ship down. The ship hit land and everyone was happy that, the ride from hell was over. “Thank god that’s over” Vladimir said. “Yeah but we have to ride it again to get to Kilika” Rakke said in a sad tone. Everyone starts to Disperse and check out the land. “Hey Vladimir, you guys are finally here, I thought you’d guys would never come. So Lukky is a summoner and you guys need my help to Re-Defeat Sin you said right?” the Mysterious man said. “Yup so will you help or what?” Vladimir asked nervously. “Sure! I'm always up for a challenge.” The mysterious man added. “Okay that’s awesome. Hey guys guess who is joining our party?” “Who?” Rakke, Runi, and Lukky said. “It is the Legendary Wakka, From the Besaid Aurochs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Characters Name: LukkyAge: 26Gender: FemaleAppearence:Class: SummonerWeapon: Lunar Sceptre (Staff in the pic)Bio: Lukky is a Summoner from Djose Temple, meaning that she has inherited the Lightning Aeon Ixion from the beginning. She is a happy-go-lucky person, always cheerful and optimistic, never believing that there's a bad side on things.Anything to add for Your Character: She can use the Blk Magic Thunder, Thundara and Thundaga. Characters Name: RuniAge: 28Gender: FemaleAppearence:Class: Black Mage, GuardianWeapon: Ixion's Lightning Rod (Staff in the Pic)Bio: Runi is an apprentice from Djose Temple, having learned the utmost of the Black Magic Thunder. Her temper may not be the most patient thing, but she's the 'brain' of the group, and can easily help her Summoner out of trouble.Anything to add for Your Character: She can 'talk' to Aeons, by communicating through their minds using electric currents in the air and the Aeon's brain patterns. Characters Name: RakkeAge: 33Gender: MaleAppearence:[spoiler=Normal Form] [spoiler=Overdrive Form: Dark Angel Raksheus] Class: Warrior, GuardianWeapon:Normal Form Weapon: Dark Oblivion(Sword in Normal Pic)Dark Angel Weapon: Double Penance(Swords in Overdrive Pic)Bio: Rakke is a mysterious warrior from an unknown location. Many believe he's directly from the Farplane, but he never tells. He has an inner transformation, which he activates when the need is dire.Anything to add for Your Character: He's slightly psychopathic, and when he transforms, he laught menially. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 All Accepted :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Sweet! So, when will they appear? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 beginning im writing it right now, should i put chapter 1 and the name at the top? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Nah, finish the Chapter first, and make it long enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 ok im using microsoft word should i make it 2-3 pages? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 That's a good length Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Yeah, a pretty good lenght. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 ok im about 3/4 the way done with pg 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Keep going. BTW, Broken, aren't you going to suggest chars to this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 i am and broken if you do they'll be in chapter 2 or 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Oh, no, I don't think I could really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 you sure and kuja is lukky also a white mage like yuna? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Yes, Lukky is a White Mage, but she can use the Black Magic Thunder spells. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 ok, and what aeon(s) does she start with, nothing too strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Well, I wrote in her description, she starts off with Ixion, since she is a Summoner from Djose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 oh, sry lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Please...space...between the lines... My eyes burn. Great chapter, though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Kinda, but try to put the spaces between the end of a sentence, and when a new character speaks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GundamFreedom Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Characters Name: WesAge: 16Gender: MaleAppearence: Class: WarriorWeapon: Moon SwordBio: LaterAnything to add for Your Character: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 will be made into chapter 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
game_boy Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 i do not get it do we make characters then you write them into the story but either way here is my character app name:montelage:17appearance:http://tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:UhiMsjgutyBQpM:http://jamie-online.com/random-jamz/wp-content/uploads/2009/02/anime_boy.jpgclass:monk (please)weapon:http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/finalfantasy/images/0/0e/RikkusClaws.png can i have the top right one i do not know what it is but it looks coolbio:he was born right after his father died and his mother died from birth he found his way to a forest he trained there until he was 13 then he moved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 maybe, i'll think about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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