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Is the RP all good? Someone post the plot again? I got the app so I can get to it when ever, but I need the plot and to know if the RP is ready in the first place...

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Is the RP all good? Someone post the plot again? I got the app so I can get to it when ever' date=' but I need the plot and to know if the RP is ready in the first place...

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Immersive virtual reality isn’t just a myth. In fact' date=' it’s already happened. A supercomputer hidden in an abandoned factory in France is the pathway to Lyoko, a computerized world built as a safe haven for the creator and his daughter. However, the place was overrun by a malevolent force known as XANA, and only through the combined efforts of a hacker and his friends from the nearby Kadec Academy did it become possible for XANA to be defeated. After that, the computer was shut down, but things have flared up again…

 

Signs of activity have seemingly come from the supercomputer again, after 10 long years. It seems like an extremist country that is well-versed in technology is using Lyoko in order to wage its war against the world. Nobody knows this connection because of the terrorist’s actions, except for you and your friends at the academy. Can you dive back into Lyoko to save the day? Or will everything go up in smoke?[/quote']

 

Plot summary that I got so far. D'ya like it?

 

The RP is technically ready; I'll just need to freshen this summary up a bit before I can post it, tho.

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@Lawl:

1) I'm still iffy about the normal eyes thing. The silver one is fine, but the black one needs to go.

2) Do the claws retract? You still need to describe them, and not in terms of another character.

3) What color, size, shape is the vehicle? Much more detail needed.

4) You're not going to have more physical abilities? Maybe he can use fire in some way; I dunno. :/

 

@Mirage: Cool.

 

New topic: Since Code Lyoko is a French animation, discuss the awesomeness that is France. Which is my "spiritual home" country, BTW. ;D

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kk, I don't have time to make another app. You can have an NPC for the smart emo computer whiz.

 

My app

Real Life

Name: Shuang hui Li

Year: Freshmen

Gender: Male

Ethnicity: Chinese

Appearance: Shaung Hui is an average height for a person with black hair going down to his neck. His eyes are a dark brown color with a skin tone from the South Region of China. He wears a black jacket with usual jeans. There is nothing really special what he wears or about his appearance except a tattoo on his left forearm with the Chinese letters of “Fear”.

Personality: He tries to examine things out before doing any major actions. He doesn’t want anything bad to happen as he thinks about the outcomes. He is out going if he wants to be, but tends to stay in the back.

Relationships: He can get along with almost anyone, but get him pissed off he will hold a long grudge that probably won’t break.

Skill with Using Supercomputer:Little to none

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: In Shaung’s appearance his hair is tied with a red ribbon giving him a look of an old Chinese warrior. His clothing is a white mage robe which goes down to his legs with old style Chinese shows. He keeps his staff tied to his back.

Focus: Stamina

Weapon: Staff

Abilities: Levitation, and can make a blue orb of energy out of nowhere which he can use to block or attack against enemies.

Vehicle: A spider looking bike that has red legs with black for the rest of the body. The eyes are yellow, but they have special radar able to sense when enemies are close.

 

RP Sample: Too lazy to find one, anyway I was accepted into all your other RPs.

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1) Personal thing, but whenever I do Chinese or Japanese names for a character, I like seeing the characters used. D'ya mind posting them, or at least the meaning of the name.

2) Not all of us know what a Southern Chinese skin tone looks like. Describe it, plz.

3) A kid of his age would most likely be unable to get a tattoo.

4) The vehicle is cool, but it needs to start with "Over-", and the radar ability's already taken by another character.

5) Why is he wearing "shows?" Check your spelling and grammar, and add more description all around.

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Sure, sorta rushed.

 

1. Will post, the meaning for the first too mean close to the same thing. Like "Bright" or something like that.

2. I don't know how to describe it without saying yellow. lol

3. Fine shall remove.

4. I don't know, "Over-Spider" don't know what to really call it. Fine I will remove radar or change it to something.

5. Sorta rushed, will fix.

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How is mine?

 

@Lawl:

1) I'm still iffy about the normal eyes thing. The silver one is fine' date=' but the black one needs to go.

2) Do the claws retract? You still need to describe them, and not in terms of another character.

3) What color, size, shape is the vehicle? Much more detail needed.

4) You're not going to have more physical abilities? Maybe he can use fire in some way; I dunno. :/

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Does that answer it?

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How is it now? About the symbols, let me ask my dad for them. I will have them in a sec.

 

Real Life

Name: Shuang hui Li

Year: Freshmen

Gender: Male

Ethnicity: Chinese

Appearance: Shaung Hui is an average height for a person with black hair going down to his neck. His eyes are a dark brown color with a skin tone from the South Region of China. The skin tone is a dark tan. He wears a black jacket with the sleeves going down to his elbows with blue jeans with rips going down the sides of the pants legs. Then with a red shirt usually with some Chinese Symbol on it under his black jacket.

Personality: He tries to examine things out before doing any major actions. He doesn’t want anything bad to happen as he thinks about the outcomes. He is out going if he wants to be, but tends to stay in the back.

Relationships: He can get along with almost anyone, but get him pissed off he will hold a long grudge that probably won’t break.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Little to none

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: Shaung’s hair is tied in a ponytail with a white ribbon holding it together. He wears a long, white mages robe on the back of it with the Chinese Symbol of “Fear”. There is a cut within the bottom half of the robe from the bottom to waste portion revealing white pants tied with bandages around his ankles. He wears red shows with the tip pointing up.

Focus: Stamina

Weapon: A wooden like staff, with a blue orb at the top of the shaft. It is as high as the chest of Shaung, thin around the bottom getting fatter toward the top.

Abilities:

Levitation: Using his staff the blue orb starts to glow with almost anything trapped in its beam will start to move.

Terror Sphere: A black colored orb which can be produced out of nowhere. The sphere can be used to defend the user, when an attack hits the sphere the attack will disappear. Then another use it can be thrown at an enemy target.

Vehicle: A spider looking bike that has red legs with black for the rest of the body.

RP Sample: Too lazy to find one, anyway I was accepted into all your other RPs.

 

EDIT: Still working on the vehicle.

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