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[Marly]

Oh, so this is an app for an RP?

I wouldn't mind joining. ^^

 

[spoiler=Application]

Real Life

Name: Ilse Abendroth (I suck at names, change to whatever you like.)

Year: Freshman

Gender: Female

Ethnicity: German

Appearance: Ilse dons a long, bright orange jacket that is much larger then her normal size. It drags down almost to her knees, which really isn't saying much, considering she's only 4 feet tall at the maximum. She also wears dark pants and a necklace in the shape of a cross. Her hair is short and dark.

Personality:She's very religious, and would stand by her beliefs even if it meant her her life. She attends church on Sunday mornings, and recites daily prayer before sleep. She's also generally very loyal. Some might describe her as being a 'goody two shoes'. She generally likeds to try her best and help show people the correct path to God.

Relationships: She's generally timid and meek, but not afraid to talk to people. Although, the fact that she is constantly mocked for being religious doesn't help. She has very few friends because of her beliefs.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Low. She dislikes technology.

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: In Lyoko, she's garbed in a white robe with various necklaces in the shape of crosses. White, fingerless gloves are on each of her hands, with a black cross on the back of her palm. Her eyes are protected by a small screen, just big enough to cover her eyes.

Focus: Power.

Weapon: A very broad sword. The left half is black, while the right is white. There is a single blood-red cross growing down the middle of the blade. Contrary to it's width, the sword is quite small in length.

Abilities: Purifying Light; Arrows of light shoot out of her back, any foes hit are paralyzed for a short amount of time.

 

Formidable Faith; An aura of light surrounds her, and she steadily regains her strength. The aura cannot be broken while in use, and any enemies hitting it take damage. Lasts for a very short amount of time.

Vehicle: N/A

 

[bury the year]

Oh' date=' so this is an app for an RP?

I wouldn't mind joining. ^^

 

[spoiler=Application']

Real Life

Name: Ilse Abendroth (I suck at names, change to whatever you like.)

Year: Freshman

Gender: Female

Ethnicity: German

Appearance: Ilse dons a long, bright orange jacket that is much larger then her normal size. It drags down almost to her knees, which really isn't saying much, considering she's only 4 feet tall at the maximum. She also wears dark pants and a necklace in the shape of a cross. Her hair is short and dark.

Relationships: She's generally timid and meek, but not afraid to talk to people. She's also very religious, and would stand by her beliefs even if it meant her her life. She attends church on Sunday mornings, and recites daily prays before sleep. She's also generally very loyal. Some might describe her as a 'goody two shoes'.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Low. She dislikes technology.

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: In Lyoko, she's garbed in a white robe with various necklaces in the shape of crosses. White, fingerless gloves are on each of her hands, with a black cross on the back of her palm. Her eyes are protected by a small screen, just big enough to cover her eyes.

Focus: Power.

Weapon: A very broad sword. The left half is black, while the right is white. There is a single blood-red cross growing down the middle of the blade. Contrary to it's width, the sword is quite small in length.

Abilities: Purifying Light; Engulfs the entire party in light, temporarily shielding them against attacks.

 

Formidable Faith; Her sword increases size, while an aura of light surrounds it. It strikes the foe with the supposed might of God.

Vehicle: N/A

 

 

1) You forgot Personality.

2) She goes topless? (AKA, she doesn't have a shirt, unless I'm reading that wrong.)

3) I like the various necklaces, but she should maybe have one big one as a "focal point". What color are they, too?

4) No passive ability? Usually it's a psychic or telekinetic ability.

 

I trust in your RP abilities, though, due to some of the work I've seen you done. ;D

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

We are planning the RP now, we are just making sure the apps are good enough XD. How is mine now Rinne?

[bury the year]

1) 5 miles is a lot. Drop that to maybe 1000 feet. I really don't know what to judge it on, though.

2) What are his claws like? Are they retractable, are they really thick, or are they skinny? What colors are they? Add more detail.

[Zimiri of the Muse]

is mine fine yet rinne or more editing for me

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

Better now?

[bury the year]

1) Orphans are cliche. How would he be able to attend a private school if he has no stable family?

2) More detail on the clothing. Solid black is boring.

3) We already have a half-and-half sword user. Change it up, plz.

4) How does the echolocation work? Give details.

 

More editing, definitely. Also, for the record, here's my app. Just so you can see to what standards I'm holding you guys to.

 

 

Real World

Name: Nikolai Korolyov

Year: Sophomore

Gender: Male

Ethnicity: Russian

Appearance: At first glance, Nikolai almost seems to emulate the cold northern country from where he comes. He has dark blue eyes that seem sharpened and homed on what he is currently looking at, pale white skin, and darkish-gray hair that is slightly long and tied back in a loose ponytail. There is a faint, but still noticeable scar stretching across the back of his neck, which he tries to conceal with white collared shirts, often worn open over gray undershirts. He also likes to wear plain black jeans and slip-on sneakers, just for ease of wear.

Personality: Reserved and peaceful, Nikolai doesn’t go out of his way to do much, preferring in real life to keep to himself and get his studies done as a priority. The only ones he really talks with are the other Lyokons, and even then he prefers to stay quiet. He subscribes to the theory that actions speak louder than words, and usually tries to stand up for those who are being picked on, although this usually is ignored because of him just being a sophomore.

Relationships: When it comes to other people, Nikolai friendly, but somewhat secretive. He’s very choosy with his words, trying to not reveal much about himself or offend anything. He likes being somewhat lonesome, an image that fits him fine.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Low-medium.

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: On Lyoko, Nikolai’s standard outfit is a tight navy-blue tanktop that exposes his stomach and abdominals, a pair of navy forearm guards with sliver armor, and matching fingerless gloves with silver backs. The tanktop has a white circle on the front, with a black icon in the center that resembles a howling wolf. He wears a pair of long loose navy pants with light grey hems, and uses a long flowing light-blue sash as a belt. A pair of simple blue sandals completes the ensemble. Two light-blue fang-like markings also appear under Nikolai’s eyes.

Focus: Speed

Weapon: A long iron chain with a sharp, large diamond-shaped knife on the end. The knife can split out into a grappling hook to allow Nikolai to grab far-away objects and reel them in. He can also hold the knife at the end without using the chain to fight in close combat.

Abilities:

Surge – By shooting the knife into an enemy and gripping the other end of the chain, Nikolai can sent a bolt of blue electrical energy down the chain that shocks anything it hits. This is the standard extra ability that he uses.

Storm – Spinning the chain out in a circle produces a large ring of blue electricity from the knife end, which Nikolai uses to act as a barrier of sorts.

Sight – Nikolai has a mental “radar” of sorts which allows him to locate anyone else on Lyoko via telepathy. This can only be used in very short bursts, though.

Vehicle: None.

 

 

 

EDIT: @Lawl;

 

1) Still need description of the claws.

2) "Hating someone for life" isn't exactly easy to RP. Change it, or make it less intense.

[Marly]

Oh' date=' so this is an app for an RP?

I wouldn't mind joining. ^^

 

[spoiler=Application']

Real Life

Name: Ilse Abendroth (I suck at names, change to whatever you like.)

Year: Freshman

Gender: Female

Ethnicity: German

Appearance: Ilse dons a long, bright orange jacket that is much larger then her normal size. It drags down almost to her knees, which really isn't saying much, considering she's only 4 feet tall at the maximum. She also wears dark pants and a necklace in the shape of a cross. Her hair is short and dark.

Relationships: She's generally timid and meek, but not afraid to talk to people. She's also very religious, and would stand by her beliefs even if it meant her her life. She attends church on Sunday mornings, and recites daily prays before sleep. She's also generally very loyal. Some might describe her as a 'goody two shoes'.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: Low. She dislikes technology.

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: In Lyoko, she's garbed in a white robe with various necklaces in the shape of crosses. White, fingerless gloves are on each of her hands, with a black cross on the back of her palm. Her eyes are protected by a small screen, just big enough to cover her eyes.

Focus: Power.

Weapon: A very broad sword. The left half is black, while the right is white. There is a single blood-red cross growing down the middle of the blade. Contrary to it's width, the sword is quite small in length.

Abilities: Purifying Light; Engulfs the entire party in light, temporarily shielding them against attacks.

 

Formidable Faith; Her sword increases size, while an aura of light surrounds it. It strikes the foe with the supposed might of God.

Vehicle: N/A

 

 

1) You forgot Personality.

2) She goes topless? (AKA, she doesn't have a shirt, unless I'm reading that wrong.)

3) I like the various necklaces, but she should maybe have one big one as a "focal point". What color are they, too?

4) No passive ability? Usually it's a psychic or telekinetic ability.

 

I trust in your RP abilities, though, due to some of the work I've seen you done. ;D

 

1) Ah, I think I merged Relationships and Personalities together by accident. I'll edit that.

2) Well, no. The shirt is just not visible due to her oversized jacket. What gave you the idea she went topless?

3) I wasn't thinking about adding a focal point at the time, but now that you mention it, it'd probably be better if she had one. The necklaces are sterling silver and gold.

4) As I stated previously, haven't watched Lyoko in forever, so forgive me for having no idea how abilities work. xD I'll edit that as well.

[Zimiri of the Muse]

you are telling me to change cause of my grammer and spelling and name u should work on yours

[bury the year]

you are telling me to change cause of my grammer and spelling and name u should work on yours

 

Whaddya mean? We're using Advanced Rules for the RP; that's why I keep making you revise your app. Mine upholds all the standards' date=' so I really don't see a need to revise it. :/

 

2) Well, no. The shirt is just not visible due to her oversized jacket. What gave you the idea she went topless?

 

Nothing...

 

(offstage voice) "Hey, Rinne! Your pervert's showing!"

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

EDIT: @Lawl;

 

1) Still need description of the claws.

2) "Hating someone for life" isn't exactly easy to RP. Change it' date=' or make it less intense.

[/quote']

 

I put it... Just think Odd's claws, but black...

 

And what could I change it to?

[bury the year]

EDIT: @Lawl;

 

1) Still need description of the claws.

2) "Hating someone for life" isn't exactly easy to RP. Change it' date=' or make it less intense.

[/quote']

 

I put it... Just think Odd's claws, but black...

 

And what could I change it to?

 

Honestly, I was thinking Wolverine claws. Much longer and kewler.

 

Maybe make it so that he dislikes people that go back on their promises?

 

And, on a different note, I think I deserve some points for all the work I've been doing. ;D

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

Yes, you do... 25 ok?

[bury the year]

Yes' date=' you do... 25 ok?

[/quote']

 

Yesh bish. ;D

 

And I'm going to bed now, so no more application help for another 9 hours or so. D:

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

1 last check please?

[Zimiri of the Muse]

there all re-edited happy

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

Your LYOKO description needs to be longer...

[Smear]

[align=center]Team X.A.N.A. or Team LYOKO?: Team LYOKO

Favorite character from the show?: Odd. Super cat-man owns. ^_^[/align]

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

Accepted. Will add later

[Pikachu]

Team X.A.N.A. or Team LYOKO?: Team LYOKO (hehe)

Favorite character from the show?: Ulrich. His speed and skills outmatch anyone, even William.

 

Why didn't you tell me there was a Code Lyoko club? I've been searching for one since last year!

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

I made it yesterday XD. Accepted

[Phantom Roxas]

Hah, Rinne is the only person that likes Yumi.

 

Aelita's second outfit is hot, especially with the wings. Just saying.

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

Hah, you have a 3-D fetish lol JK. But I wish someone looked like Aelita IRL...

[Marly]

Hah' date=' Rinne is the only person that likes Yumi.

 

Aelita's second outfit is hot, especially with the wings. Just saying.

[/quote']

 

Actually, I liked Yumi (I think. Isn't she the one with the fans?), I just couldn't think of her name and was way too lazy to Google it. D: So I just put the name of the only character I remember that I actually liked.

 

Eh, I didn't like either of Aelita's outfits. To be honest.

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

Ok... Who votes I put a pic of everyone (small of course) in the first post? But, yes that was Yumi...