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[.Requiem]

Render all of them? Meh >_> sure should be quick.

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

kk. Lemme see?

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BTW, Mirage. Their LYOKO forms were all re-programmed. Those are their season 4 outfits...

[.Requiem]

Meh, do they look better? I don't really care.

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

NVM' date=' I got a good one. :0 Just turn the gray to white. ;D

 

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Aelita is completely new. Ulrich gets another sword... There is no real noticable difference in the other two...

[.Requiem]

NVM' date=' I got a good one. :0 Just turn the gray to white. ;D

 

[img']http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj4/tectonix55/4ut5cpk1.png[/img]

 

I really hate the jumpsuits, the two girls look lesbion while the other two look gay.

 

I like their original looks.

 

Aelita looks like a whore in that outfit.

[bury the year]

I just realized, if we're going to RP, we need a character who won't enter Lyoko, but will act as the coordinator. :/

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

The truth... But still, 2 swords for Ulrich and wings for Aelita is an improvement...

[.Requiem]

Also Odd as a cat makes him seem gay. I would like to see a wolverine look.

 

Also I can make an extra character if you want.

[bury the year]

Also Odd as a cat makes him seem gay. I would like to see a wolverine look.

 

Also I can make an extra character if you want.

 

If you want to, okay. Otherwise, I'll make an NPC.

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

Can you post the app again?? And yes, that'd be helpful... Or an NPC, as well... Rinne make it, I play it...

[.Requiem]

Also Odd as a cat makes him seem gay. I would like to see a wolverine look.

 

Also I can make an extra character if you want.

 

If you want to' date=' okay. Otherwise, I'll make an NPC.

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I get bored, I can make some type of emo computer whiz.

[bury the year]

Can you post the app again?? And yes' date=' that'd be helpful... Or an NPC, as well... Rinne make it, I play it...

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[b][u]Real Life[/u][/b]
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Year:[/b] {freshman, sophomore, junior, senior}
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Ethnicity:[/b] 
[b]Appearance:[/b] {at least 1 well-written paragraph, no pictures}
[b]Personality:[/b] {at least 1 well-written paragraph}
[b]Relationships:[/b] {how they interact with other player characters}
[b]Skill with Using Supercomputer:[/b] {low, medium, high}

[b][u]Lyoko[/u][/b]
[b]Lyoko Appearance:[/b] {at least 1 well-written paragraph; think video games}
[b]Focus:[/b] {speed, strength, stamina, power, technical}
[b]Weapon:[/b] {only 1}
[b]Abilities:[/b] {3 max}
[b]Vehicle:[/b] {should have the “Over-“ prefix, is optional}

[b]RP Sample:[/b] {at least 6 well-constructed and detailed sentences}

[.Requiem]

I will have the two apps done tomorrow. GTG

[bury the year]

Neh, screw it. I'm removing History; it doesn't seem to make much sense in context. :/

 

I also forgot to add Ethnicity.

[Marly]

Team X.A.N.A. or Team LYOKO?: LYOKO.

Favorite character from the show?: I believe Jeremy was his name, I haven't watched the show in forever. D: He was the computer whiz.

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

How is this?

 

Real Life

 

Name: - Kent Mishima

 

Year: {freshman, sophomore, junior, senior} - Sophomore

 

Gender: - M

 

Appearance: {at least 1 well-written paragraph, no pictures} - About 5''7', 1 silver eye, 1 red. Has black hair that spikes outwards, and is relatively pale. Is not buff, but his arms aren't toothpicks either. Wears sunglasses half the time and is usually sitting or laying down. He is usually found wearing a black t-shirt and some knee-torn jeans.

 

Personality: {at least 1 well-written paragraph} - Kent is pretty laid-back and tries to be cool. He cracks jokes and you can consider him a less-energetic, modern-day Odd. He loves to be outside, but only to get some sun and relax. He is very popular in his mind, although the new LYOKO Warriors are his only friends. He usually, when inside, plays video games or is in class. He doesn't listen to any music, and especially hates rap.

 

Skill with Using Supercomputer: {low, medium, high} - Medium

 

Ethnicity - Japanese-American

 

Relationships: {how they interact with other player characters} - He can get along with anyone, as long as they don't break their promises toward him, then he will feel betrayed and stop talking to them for a while.

 

Lyoko

 

Lyoko Appearance: {at least 1 well-written paragraph; think video games} - He gets a vest, hooded, that protects him from attacks in that area. He also gets claws on both hands that are actually gloves that aren't very thick and look more like a black dog's paw and that retract, but increase his strength. He gets glowing red eyes that allow him to see up to 1000 more feet away than the average human and able to see through fog, mist, etc.

 

Focus: {speed, strength, stamina, power, technical} - Balanced, but mainly strength

 

Weapon: {only 1} His claws

 

Abilities: {3 max} His sight (above), telekinesis

 

Vehicle: {should have the “Over-“ prefix, is optional} Overcycle (Like the overbike, but 2 wheels) It is virtually just a flying motorcycle... It is black with red streaks on the side, and is about 2 and a half feet tall.

 

Edit: Accepted. Yes, it was Jeremy ^_^

[bury the year]

1) Add a last name.

2) Although I had just added it, you forgot Ethnicity and Relationships.

3) The eyes are a bit weird; I don't think anyone would actually have them. Change 'em up a bit. Also, add more description, like his clothes.

4) Physical body changes don't occur on Lyoko, right? Also, the Lyoko appearance could use a lot more work. Be more descriptive; you'll get more power that way.

5) Whaddya mean by his sight?

 

@Sakuya: Are you gonna join the RP? ;D

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

His sight... I noted it in his LYOKO form... He has super eyes... And I like multi-colored eyes... And I had relationships, you removed it... The claws are gloves (will add) and his clothes I will add...

[bury the year]

His sight... I noted it in his LYOKO form... He has super eyes... And I like multi-colored eyes... And I had relationships' date=' you removed it... The claws are gloves (will add) and his clothes I will add...

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I removed it? Whaddya mean? And you need to describe the "super-eyes"; it's not evident what they do now. Look at my app for an example. :/

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

Ah. Nvm... I removed Relationships before you edit'd that post...

[Zimiri of the Muse]

Real Life

Name:Zach Kula

Year: freshman

Gender:m

Ethnicity:Mexican/Irish

Appearance: Zach is a tall boy with coal black hair. He usually wears a black hoodie with a deep red phoenix on the back the the words surrounding it are "faith and trust and honesty is required." and blue jeans. Underneath his hoodie he wears a tan/gray t-shirt and a dog-tag. Zach also wears deep green tennis shoes. He also has a small scar above his right eye.

Personality: {at least 1 well-written paragraph}Zach usually stays alone and talks very little, however when he does talk he is either very funny or very insightful depending on his mood. He has always been by himself. His parents always preferred his brother over him. He was shunned by his parents while his brother got all the glory. His parents said they were proud of him but never looked like they meant it. Until he got a scholarship to the school were he is now. (i dont know the name of there school okay)he has gotten good grades but never went out for sports. He feels that is why his father loathes him. He has very little money of his own. He has so many feeling mixed up inside of him hate, love, fear, sadness, anger, pain the list goes on and on. But when he is LYOKO he feels strong and powerful. When he is there he is a totally different person.

Relationships: {how they interact with other player characters}He talks very little with others. When he does talk he is either very insightful or very funny depending on his mood.

Skill with Using Supercomputer: {low, medium, high}high

 

Lyoko

Lyoko Appearance: {at least 1 well-written paragraph; think video games}Zach is almost ninja-like while he is in LYOKO. His suit is all black with a black hood. His palms and feet have special discs that allow him to hold on to and climb up walls.

Focus: {speed, strength, stamina, power, technical}well balanced but mostly strategics.

Weapon: {only 1}A battle axe with a serrated edge. His axe is also deep blue in color on one side while deep red in color on the other.

Abilities: {3 max}Zach's abilities include being able to climb up walls, echo location, and he can pick up on emotions of people very well.

Vehicle: {should have the “Over-“ prefix, is optional}Over-Pack a small jet pack

there all re-edited happy

[bury the year]

Sorry for being a Nazi, but...

 

0) Your spelling and grammar is atrocious. This is supposed to be an advanced RP; you'll need to fix that. (I need to add an RP sample requirement to the app. :/)

1) What the heck does your character's name mean? It should be somewhat realistic.

2) Electrical charge would count as an ability. However, my character already uses electricity, so I'd recommend you junk that.

3) Emotion control is changing other players' characters against their will without permission. That's god-moding. Remove it.

4) What part of "1 good paragraph" don't you get? More description all around, please.

 

@Lawl:

1) If he's Japanese, why does he have an English name?

 

Sheesh, it feels like I'm running the RP now... D:

[Zimiri of the Muse]

the main monster in Carthage is this whale thing if im not mistaken

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

lol. No one else questioned it... I'ved used that name in many other RPs, mainly with an asian last name... Ok... I'll change... He's Japanese-American...

 

Edit: It's a manta (ray)...

[Zimiri of the Muse]

srry ill completely remodel it