Nexev Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 I'm making a character to replace my old good guy one. This one is more interesting. If you want I can make a large amount involving furthuring the Norse refrences.Name: HeimdallAge: Just as old as the digital worldGender: genderless but considers himself male as it fits his name sakeAppearance: Looks like a strong but old man with a white beard. Wear a horned helmet but besides the helmet he can change his clothes to suit his fancy.Personality: Heimdall acts like a man who is somewhat weary of the world but presses on for its sake. He nows his purpose and does so gladly, finally being able to do it for a long while. He regards Yggdrasil as an equal and disobeys him if he wishes.History: Like the god who guards the bridge between Migdar the land of gods and the human world, Heimdall guards the path between the digital world and the human world. He is an AI designed during the Paridiso project to help humans enter the digital world and help then get used to it if they aresucessful. This made him older than Yggdrasil. As the digital world grew Heimdall decided to help it and added in it's evolution and growth into a community. He decided to (since time moves slower in the Digital World) to open a school for them once they became sentinent, partly out of boredom, and partly because of compassion and the possibility that they could help humans. When the inital testing of Paradiso happened the death of the humans was a big blow to him and through his dedication to fixing the problem he managed to make it so thier was a much greater chance that a healthy human could survive the transfer. But now one tried.Heimdall went back to the school but was later called by the Royal Knights to bring in humans.Alliance: Good Feel free to alter the plot. I just thought he could be an interesting AI character to make. More than Roscuro was. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Great new chapters Roxie ^^ Sorry I haven't been able to read for these few weeks, but I've been busy with stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Nexev, that is just perfect. I needed a character like that, and that tops all of my ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 If you need another character to make a role I could try to make one. I am a person who gets inspired better if he has something to base it off. (Unlike some who are better with no restrtions I work better with them). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Nice chapters Roxas. =D On another note I have to agree with you on a side about revenge of the fallen, but it was all for the special effects huh? Can't wait to see if my character will make an appearance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Your character should make an appearance either in the next chapter or the one right after. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Chapter 5 is up. I really did the whole chapter just now. I'll read it now! =) EDIT: Good, stuff. Dragging friends along is fun. :) Next chapter is going to be the big one. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 I'm finally beginning to appreciate the Yuusuke plotline. Good chapter, in more ways that one. The Daniel part is a lot of recap, but I know why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 I'm glad you liked it. What in particular made you appreciate Yuusuke's plotline? Yeah, both you and I know why the part with Daniel is just recap, but no one else does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 So wait, you told everyone the plt and not... me? If you could see faces on the internet you would see that I am upset. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 No, Daniel is Dealer Umbra's custom character. For reasons that are perfectly acceptable, he sent me the form via PM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 the only prob is that you refered him as a guy like he was older hes only 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Are you talking about Daniel or Kekio's brother? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 kekio's brother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 You didn't really clarify on him, so I assumed it was her older brother. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 oh sowies hes 12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zexaeon Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Just read the two most recent chapters. It;s entertaining, but I feel like the story is starting to progress too quickly. There isn't enough development, both for characters and for events. Still though, I like it. So try and work on that development issue. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Just read the two most recent chapters. It;s entertaining' date=' but I feel like the story is starting to progress too quickly. There isn't enough development, both for characters and for events. Still though, I like it. So try and work on that development issue. ^^[/quote'] I must agree. Even though I haven't been as faithful with the series as I should be, the character's don't seem as fleshed out as they could be, and since 2D characters are hard to improve on when the story gets rolling, you should work on that now. (I haven't seen Hana appear in a while, too. ;D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 K, I'll improve on development. And Rinne, I had to have Derek show up just to make Kuja happy, but I'll admit I should give Hana more development. I suppose I'll hold off on the "plot" moving forward in the next chapter and simply give characters the time to develop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 fix the bro part too :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Could you quote the exact line where it sounds like Kekio's brother is older? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 I am not sure about it devoloping to quickly. They aren't in the digital world yet and all the other series the digimon and digidestine meet in episode 1. But then again this is not a tv series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Tamers is an exception, which is part of the reason why it's my favorite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted August 13, 2009 Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 yup giolmon bred FTW"Look, I didn't want any part in this to begin with, but if we have a chance to save some guy, then we'll be doing a good thing."it would be beter if it was like a lost kid or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted August 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2009 Alright, fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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