Umbra Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Too much filler in this chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Seriously? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 The entire dialog between the cops was filler, Yuusuke obviously talking to Hana is filler, and cops coming around for ILLEGAL FILESHARING seems very unlikely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 it dosent mater if it had alot of filler it works Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 The entire dialog between the cops was filler' date=' Yuusuke obviously talking to Hana is filler, and cops coming around for ILLEGAL FILESHARING seems very unlikely.[/quote']Â The dialogue between the cops was definitely filler, Yusuke's online conversation was not filler, and if you noticed later, the cops did manage to arrest Daniel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Derek has YET to make a physical appearance! Is my char ignored? Anyways, GREAT chapter 3, Roxy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 *Slices Kuja's head off.*Â Patience is a virute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 *OVER 900000! FALCON PUNCHES FENRIR* *HEALS KUJA* >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Good stuff, LZ has screen time. =DÂ The fillers were good. I'd rather read that than watch a filler episode. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zexaeon Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 ..... Were you deliberately trying to set up material for Alex/Daniel shipping? xD That aside, nice chapter. I like how they're getting longer. Just don't make the same mistake I did and make them so long that people start expecting no shorter. @_@ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 ..... Were you deliberately trying to set up material for Alex/Daniel shipping? Yes and no. I don't even know how to explain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zexaeon Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 xD That's shame. I'd like to grasp your meaning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 I guess you can say it was intentional, but I purposely made Alex try to resist it. ...Crap, that only makes it support that possibility more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zexaeon Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Tsk, tsk, Rox. If you wanted to avoid it, you coulda just not touched on it to begin with. xD Ah well. This is a fanfic - I highly doubt anyone is gonna write yaoi off of your story, so don't worry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 I highly doubt anyone is gonna write yaoi off of your story' date=' so don't worry.[/quote'] Rule 34. And cops arresting people for illegal filesharing is not realistic in the least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 well it dosent have to be realistic its a fan fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 very very true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 What should we expect for next chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 I'm not so sure on that one. After I see Revenge of the Fallen tomorrow, I'll most likely direct more attention towards this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 im gona see it too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 Sounds good, I can't wait for next chp. btw: Wish I could see Transformers. T-T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 why cant you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 Take it to the thread in Movies & TV Shows please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 ok roxy sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted July 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 BUMP. I'll try to work on Chapter 4 tomorrow, and it will definitely explain Daniel's arrest in an attempt to make it more realistic. I really don't have any idea about what else to write for next chapter beyond that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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