Zayne13 Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 ATTENTION: This fan fiction contains moderate to harsh swearing, harsh violence, and moderate sexual content, this fan fiction is rated PG-16. [spoiler=Prologue]What if you spent your whole life training for something,only to one day find out that everything you think you knowis not the whole truth, in fact it's barely the truth at all.Wouldn't you be pissed, wouldn't you feel violated,and would you trust any of your so called "friends" ever again...I sure as hell didn't. ~Rouge "Locked and loaded!" ~That's me... Kyle"Don't get cocky Harris. We can't be sure Wills won't have body guards." ~ That's my so called "friend" Samantha, she was also my instructor when I joined the fraternity, her code name was Mouse, remember that it's important. Any way back to the story. So we were on an assignment, we were told to take out a man named Ronald Wills, didn't know why, just knew we had to do it... "Do you have the sniper?""Huh, I thought you had it, Mouse.""You forgetful little bastar..."I'm kidding i got it!" ~ I took my aim, and was ready to fire I had it right on his head, then I don't know what happened but somehow my shot completely missed and ricocheted back at Mouse's arm, after the guards saw the blood on the roof they rushed up... "Dammit you retard!""Mouse we gotta run!, come on" ~I grabbed her hand and we ran like hell, they opened fire on us, it felt like it was raining bullets. "Crap, crap, crap, crap, crap!""Mouse hand me your gun!""Here!" BANG BANG BANG "Dammit were is that freaking helicopter?""sheet! Mouse get down! ~ They started throwing grenades at us, we managed to avoid them mostly but one blew off Mouse's toe. "GODDAMMIT!""You OK?""Does it freaking look like I'm OK! Ass-whole" "Goddamn, we've gotta run! Where do we go?" ~ Just then I saw a small gap between our building and the next, we made the jump but one of the shots hit me in the back, I blacked out... To be continued in WANTED: Rouge Chapter 1 This is something I did about three months ago, I know this isn't really something you would see on YCM but I'm thinking of continuing it and I wanted to know what people think before I posted it on fanfiction.net. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zayne13 Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I'd be grateful for comments... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Rouge Angles of Satin... Heh, heh. Check your spelling, kid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zayne13 Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Unless I get at least four more positive coments I'll completely trash this fanfic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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