Glory of the Chosen

[Guest]

Ive gotten a bit bored and decided to try to write a fanfic once again, this one is about a Boy who is starting his dueling experience, and who is also trying to make it to the pro league.

 

Characters are below

 

Matto Yoshiro

Age 15

Deck: Mixed *Will get a theme later on*

Bio: The main character, his goal is to make it big while having fun

 

Kunai Metiro

Age 18

Deck: Necroface/Life Gain

Bio: Current Pro league Champion

 

Juno Haruno

Age: 17

Deck: Level Time

Bio: A rogue duelist, used to be champion

 

Those are just 3 there will be more later on but thats all I need for now

 

Episode 1

*Very short for a first episode, not going to be real length*

 

Openning Theme:

 

Matto walked out the door with his new deck in his duel disk, this was his first day out into the dueling world. On his way to the park he noticed many duels were going on today, which amped him up for when he finally got to duel. In the middle of the park he saw the former champion Juno Haruno, who was defeated by Kunai Metiro last year. Matto walked up to him and started to talk "Hey aren't you Juno Haruno, would you duel me" he asked as he waiting for Juno's responce. Juno put his deck in his Duel Disk and activated it, the duel was going to go down.

 

Duel

 

Matto: 4000

Juno: 4000

 

 

 

 

Ending Theme: Ghost

[Wicket]

Like the idea, songs are great. Hope to see great episodes for this rp.

[Jerry OldMaster]

I can't say anoything about an episode so short...

 

Hope you will work on it much :P

[Guest]

Episode 2: Let the Duel Begin

 

Openning Theme: Goover

 

 

Duel

 

"Ill go first" Juno said as he drew his first hand, "Ill start by summoning my Silent Magician lv 4 and playing one card face down, then I end my turn"

 

Matto Draws

 

"My Silent Magicians effect activates when you draw, it gains 500 attack points and one counter, five counters and it levels up"

 

"My move, Ill start with my Spell Card, Card Trader, so now each of my standby phrases I can return a card to my deck and then draw a new card, Next ill summon my Vorse Raider, Now attack his Monster Vorse Raider"

 

"I activate my Hollowed Life Barrier, so now by discarding one card I will not take any damage this turn" he said as his Silent Magician was destroyed

 

"I'll my turn with a face down"

 

"Ill draw, I activate my Level Modjuacation so now you get to draw 2 cards and i get to special summon a LV monster from my graveyard, like my silent magician lv 8

 

"Wait how did that get in your graveyard"

 

"Easy when i activated Hallowed life barrier i had to discard a card didn't I, now lets get back to my turn, by the effects of my Modjuacation I cannot attack with it this turn, but I can still lay a face down, your move"

 

"Ill start by summoning my Spirit Ryu in attack mode, then ill play one card face down and end my turn"

 

"You must be a newb, Ill activate my Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy your face down"

 

"Not my Hero Signal"

 

"Next ill summon my Mystical Swordsman lv 2 and activate Level up to sub him out for Mystical Swordsman lv 4, now Silent Magician attack his Vorse Raider, Mystical Swordsman attack his Spirit Ryu"

 

Matto's Monsters were destroyed, his field is cleared, what will happen on the next episode of Glory of the Chosen

 

Ending Theme: Ghost

 

Any better?

[Jerry OldMaster]

Better, but still short.

 

"I'll my turn with a face down"

Yah :|

 

And you forgot the LP count.

[Purple Dinosaur]

I don't mean to be mean but you can look at my Fan-Fic for length ideas to make you fan-fic longer and more full of dueling action! I still like it though! Well constructed Bayakuya!! 9.3/10

[Guest]

Hey episode 3 is going to take a bit, i was almost done then the power cut out without me saving it so it will take a while to rewrite it

[Umbra]

Wasn't that much. Lot of grammar things, like 's and ,s not at the correct place, but the "best" must almost be the "Not my Hero Signal". It sounds more like he's going to counter MST with Hero Signal, whatever that would be good for. And by the way, why would anyone have Spirit Ryu, Vorse Raider and Hero Signal in the same deck? I know he has a mixed deck, but come on. Hero Signal's only good in a Hero Deck.