-Griffin Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Another awesome chapter! =^.^=The characters are so cute, it's awesome. You really do the whole thing well, and the duel monster world thing is actually done perfectly. This makes me want to write a fic! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Another awesome chapter! =^.^=The characters are so cute' date=' it's awesome. You really do the whole thing well, and the duel monster world thing is actually done perfectly. This makes me want to write a fic! :3[/quote'] Who says you can't? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Leo-chan! I may just write out the backstory to the Mystic Guardians thanks to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Well that's good to know I've been inspiring people :DI'm working on chapter three as we speak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Negimalevolent Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Great, chapter 2 was amazing, I loved it when they were going up the stairs and they kept hitting the Mokey Mokey's head! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 LOL, that's Cece for you when she becomes far too excited they're gonna go on an adventure :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Leonic, you think if I made a Chaos Fan-Fic, it'd be any good? Btw liked Chapter 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 If I'm honest, it depends on the person I suppose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Yeah I guess. I'm gonna start it now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 OKI'll read it at the weekends when I can view spoilers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 This makes me want to write a fic! :3Who says you can't?A strict amount of available time does, but this really did inspire me, so I'm going to try and write the fanfic when time allows, probably around two weeks from now I can start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted June 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Thank you so much for your comments guys :DHere's chapter three [spoiler=Chapter Three]Chapter Three It felt like forever but eventually they landed feet-first in a forest. To Gabrielle, the unkempt light green grass and the occasional odd clover was only knee-high; to Cece and Jake they would have drowned in a sea of green plants if it wasn’t for Gabrielle’s magic keeping them in the air. “Where are we dudettes?” asked Jake as his body spun around, taking in his surroundings. They were shadowed by magnificent trees standing tall with age. Barely any sunlight could breech the trees. “We are in the Forest,” answered Gabrielle. “Home to insects, plants, beasts and warrior-beasts. Come, let’s move.” She pointed ahead and began to walk, her legs cutting through the grass like razors. Her enchantment kept Cece and Jake in the air. As they walked through the forest, it was incredible how many life forms there were. Every now and then, Dungeon Worms wormed their way up through the grass, curious to see the newcomers, before burying themselves back in the nutrient-rich soil. Giant Fleas buzzed before their eyes, and 4-Starred Ladybugs of Doom and Petit Moths lived in the holes of trees. Even the plants could be surprising; several times they saw Dandylions suddenly getting onto their feet and shifted away from sneaking Nettles. They also saw the outline of beasts such as Ancient One of the Deep Forest lurking in the shadows, their eyes following the small party. “I don’t like the attention dudettes,” said Jake nervously as he kept looking around. “Indeed, our presence will not be so kind at first. Have patience Jake, Cece,” said Gabrielle. “In any case, we are breaching rule number four.” *** Rule no. 4: Never enter another homeland without at least a week’s notice. *** Unfortunately Gabrielle was right. They had barely taken another step forward after her words when a distant buzzing alerted her. Cece and Jake yelped as they suddenly shot towards Gabrielle, sitting forcefully on her shoulders. They soon saw why though. A swarm of about 10 Insect Knights were flying towards them at breakneck speed. Each Insect Knight was carrying a sword and shield and looking very menacing. However it was nothing to their leader, who was at the heart of the swarm. They could immediately tell who it was; he carried the longest sword and the biggest shield. “Brace yourselves,” warned Gabrielle. Already her hands were glowing with a faint golden aura. By now many more beasts, plants and insects had appeared, all eager to see what was going to happen. “We’re about to be attacked.” And so they waited for the Insect Knight swarm to approach. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Aye! will our heroes survive? let's hope so, i've always had a problem with insect knights. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Negimalevolent Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Suspence... trust you Leonic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted June 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 lol guys :Pif there's nothing I do better it's suspense ... Earpiece (another fanfic of mine I posted on another site) is the perfect proof ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 You should add all of the chapters to page one ¬_¬ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted June 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 loli never do - on all the message boards I've ever been on you just put it up in your next post and it's fine :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 On YCM we put them all on the first page generally. ¬_¬ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted June 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 you know, the more I go on here, the more different it is to any other message board - which is good but I'm more used to my ways Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Well, it's easy to do it both ways. Put them in the new posts but edit them into the origional post too, then noone complains ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 loloh well i like my way, and I have noticed several people have done the same ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I like this, entertaining and utterly eye clawing cute, great job. Though, I must ask, in Chpater 2, what exactly are the librarians? Spirits of the Books or something along those lines? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naimo Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I based it on Royal Magical Library: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Royal_Magical_Library Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Oh, I see, forgot that there were people in the image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Is chapter 3 finished? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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