Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 I decided to type this for fun....tell me if there are errors......OH! and tell me what YOU think...... Yu-Gi-Oh Double C – Dawn of dusk Academy [spoiler=Semester 1 Chapter 1]SEMESTER 1Chapter 1 – The Beginning of a Duelist Zenon Fuuzo had just reached age 14, and he had just reached Dawn of Dusk Academy – an elite dueling school for duelists. There was the DuelBot, a dueling robot that new students had to face in order to get into Shining Dawn, Shadow Dusk, or Fusion – three different groups depending on skill, smarts, grades, deck construction, and other attributes. Professor Doop: Zenon! Your turn! And ummm…you’ll be needing this, it’s yours. Zenon: No sweat Pro, I’m on it! Zenon, DuelBot: Let’s DUEL! They each draw 5 cards and Zenon gets to go first. Zenon: I summon Elemental Swordsmen in Attack Position! 3 face-downs and my turn is done! DuelBot: I GO. I ACTIVATE LUCKY SUMMON. I CHOOSE INFERNO SCORCHER FROM MY DECK AND SUMMON IT IN ATTACK POSITION. I ATTACK ELEMENTAL SWORDMEN. As it seemed Inferno Scorcher had the advantage with 1900 ATK with Elemental Swordsmen having 1700 ATK, Zenon was pretty sure of his plan. With Mirror Force activated, Inferno Scorcher was sent to the Graveyard. The DuelBot ended his turn and Zenon was up for bat. The duel progressed and it seemed as if Zenon was losing his grip. He went from barely winning to losing badly. He was at 50 Life Points and the DuelBot had 600 Life Points. Close match as it seems but Zenon was at the tip of a cliff. But he made a comeback with Meteor of Destruction dealing 1000 damage to the DuelBot and therefore winning the duel on a bit of luck. Professor Doop: Hmmm…hmmm…could improve on duel survival a bit…deck construction needs working on…common sense is a little in the crazy department, but not by much…I guess the rest checks out. Shining Dawn it is for you…but let me explain a bit about it to you because you’ll be there for almost year, maybe more of you keep this dueling status of yours up. But don’t get me wrong, that’s good! Well just go to room 6 in the Shining Dawn house. Zenon: Ummm…ok! Then – Professor Doop: NEXT! Zenon takes his stuff to Room 6 and meets his fellow roommates – C Rider and Xvextor. They seemed to be wearing a pink and black jacket like him. Roommate: Sup, I’m C Rider, but you can just call me C. Roommate: Hi, I’m Xvextor, but…..just call me X. Zenon: Oh hi, ummm….I’m Zenon, but I guess you could – Two Shining Dawn students came bursting into the room, looking as if they are about to explode into a party of good news. Student: Hurry up! Speedzer X is gonna duel Zone! Student: And it’s for the brand new Gold Tri-Force Duel Disk! C Rider: Xvextor, Zenon, let’s go! Xvextor, Zenon: Ok. As the group of Shining Dawns dashed to the hallway, Zenon tripped over a duel disk lying on the floor. Zenon: OUCH! C Rider: WHOA! Th-Th-That can’t be the new X Blade Academy duel disk! Zenon got himself up and looked at the duel disk that everyone was staring at with shock and amaze. Student: Well aren’t you gonna – WAIT! We’re gonna be late if we sit around like this. Just take the duel disk and let’s go!!!! Zenon picked up the duel disk and followed the group to the Main Dueling Arena. He went to Professor Doop with the duel disk in his hand. Zenon: Ummm…Pro…I found this on the floor as the group and I were coming here. What shall I do with it? Professor Doop: WHOA!!!!! I mean…hmmm…we don’t seem to have that type in our school…hmmm…let’s see…duel me for it and if you win you get it, but if you lose…ummm…nothing. Zenon: OK! Well anyway, I’ve got nothing to lose, let’s duel! They both draw 5 cards and Zenon goes first. He summons Gear Man in Attack position, sets 2 face-downs and ends his turn. Doop goes next. He activates 1st offense and if the opponent has only 1 monster on the field, it’s destroyed. Gear Man is destroyed through a barrage of spikes. Doop ends his turn. Zenon: Is that all ya got?! Zenon gives up 4000 of his Life Points to deal the same damage to Doop’s Life Points. He then gives up 3000 Life Points to summon Gigagear and it gains ATK equal to the Life Points you gave up to summon it. Zenon activates Axe of Despair and equips it to Gigagear, attacks, and wins the duel, and the duel disk. Zenon: Tsk! You let me win! Doop: Actually, I let you win the duel disk. It’s only nice to do that for a New Duelist. Doop smiles and walks away as Zenon joins his friends to watch Speedzer X against Zone. He missed most of it with his duel with Doop but he was proud of the duel disk he was holding. All his friends gloried at it, asking him questions upon questions. Speedzer X won the duel and he’s never been defeated. Afterwards, Zenon begins to walk to his room. He finds a sheet of paper along the way. Dear Zenon, Meet me at the Card Shop at midnight or else I’ll find you myself. And don’t be late! Bring your new duel disk with you…From,??? The note was in un-neat script but Zenon managed to figure out what it said. He decided to keep the note himself and go where the note said to go. As time passed and everyone was in bed at midnight, Zenon snuck out and dashed silently to the Card Shop. It was close so after turning around, he saw a dark figure. Zenon: Who’s there?! He tried to quiet his voice. The shadowy figure walked slowly towards him. The only sparkle of light was the duel disk that the mysterious figure had just activated. Zenon: So, you wanna duel?! Cause if it’s a duel ya want, it’s a duel you’ll – ???: Hehehe, I have not come to duel. Zenon: So?! Why’d ya activate your duel disk then, HUH?! ???: Just to show you mine…that’s all…to show you how it glows in the shadows…but…I want YOURS! The dark figure got closer and he came out of the darkness and into the light. ???: My name is Jazo, but I already know your name – Zenon. Zenon: How do you know my – Jazo: I don’t got time to chit chat now, you wanna duel, with your duel disk up for grabs? It’s not like you have a choice! Zenon: Well then let’s – Jazo: DUEL! Zenon easily defeated Jazo in a one-turn move. Jazo: Well…ummm…SEE YA! Zenon went back to bed, until the next day. It was when Zenon was walking down a hallway to class and Professor Patronus stopped him. Professor Patronus: YOU! IT’S YOU! YOU STOLE THE RARE CARDS! Zenon: Wait…WHAT?! I didn’t do that. Patronus: Don’t lie because whether you lie or not, you might get expelled! Zenon: BUT I –Two guys in Shining Dawn security suits came dashing down and they demanded Zenon’s Deck. He gave it to them to avoid trouble. Patronus: You’re lucky we only took your deck! Next time and you’re 100% EXPELLED! Zenon walked away with slight anger, trying to calm himself down. After class, he went to go eat lunch. They served his favorite, Jumbo Joe on a stick. Afterwards, he had received a package from his brother who was a pro duelist. Zenon: Didn’t see that coming. Something in here is big. I-I-Is it a – There was a letter attached to the package Dear Brother, How’s it going in Dawn of Dusk Academy? Hope you’re doing well. I’m doing great! I’ve won quite a bit of hard duels. Well, just wanted to give you a present.From,Zephirium Zenon opened the package. In it was a brand new deck. He stared at it in happiness. He put his other duel disks in a box and decided to use a duel disk. And so Zenon adapted to Dawn of Dusk Academy, met new friends, gained new cards, won new duels, and became a better duelist. [spoiler=Chapter 2]Chapter 2 – The Dusk Tournament It’s been 3 months since Zenon’s arrival and he’s adapted well. It was after deck construction class that he decided to get a new duel disk. He has a flashback of when Joboz Croton stole it and broke it. Zenon: NO!!!! Give it back!!!! Joboz: Well…duel me for it! They dueled and Joboz won and forever claimed the marvelous duel disk. Later, he broke it to anger Zenon even more. Joboz now proves himself as the biggest bully in Dawn of Dusk Academy. Zenon goes into the duel disk store and sees what they have in stock for a low price. Zenon: …..? A Dusk Tor –!!!!! There’s a tournament!!!! I gotta get – OH, gotta buy THIS! Here ya go cashman! Zenon rushed through hallways and zoom past duelists until he stopped at a crowd. Zenon: What’s that? Ummmm…..or WHO’S THAT?! It was Joboz, the big school bully. Zenon was ready for a rematch – and this time, it was for pride. Joboz: Well, well, well, look who it is – the duel-less wannabee. Zenon: Funny you should say that, I’m in the Dusk tournament. And you’re my first opponent! Everyone backs away as Zenon and Joboz begin the duel. Zenon summons Cloudian – Wormhole. It allows him to give up 1000 life points for every card that he decides to discard from Joboz’s hand. He gives up 5000 Life Points to discard all of the cards from Joboz’s hand. He sets 2 face-downs and ends his turn. Joboz draws a card and summons Elemental Hero Anti-Master with 2400 ATK and 1400 DEF. He can summon it if he has no monsters on the field. Joboz attempts to attack with it but Zenon activates a Trap called Pain Absorb. Elemental Hero Anti-Master is destroyed and Joboz loses 2400 life Points. He ends his turn. Zenon draws a card and summons Cloudian – Tuner Helper. Since Cloudian – Wormhole is a 4 star monster and Cloudian – Tuner Helper is a 4 star monster, Zenon is able to Synchro Summon Cloudian – Corrupt Storm Cloud. Zenon: Finally! I Synchro Summon Cloudian – Corrupt Storm Cloud! The duel ends now! Zenon attacks with his key card, winning the duel and eliminating Joboz from the Dusk tournament. Joboz: Wh-Wh-WHAAAAAAAAT!!!! I’m outta the Dusk tournament!!!! Zenon, I’ll remember this, and next time it will be a happily NEVER after for you!!!! Zenon: Dude, chill, it’s not my fault you can’t duel. Everyone shouted Zenon’s name and he was the idol of the day while Joboz stayed in his room in anger. Days later, the tournament ended and the day after it ended, everyone was waiting for them to announce the winner. Intercom: The winner is……….ZENON FUUZO! Everyone congratulated Zenon except Joboz. While flooding his anger the day Zenon beat him, he snuck into Zenon’s room and found out that his brother gave it to him. The rules state that you have to make the deck. After Joboz told the officials, Zenon stated that he only made 10% of the deck but the rules never stated how much you had to make of it. Therefore, Zenon still attained the title of Dusk tournament winner. He also was awarded a new Dusk Academy Duel Disk and was sent to Team Dusk. He said his goodbyes to his fellow Shining Dawn friends and moved on to a more skilled duelist level. [spoiler=Chapter 3]Chapter 3 – Nemesis Breaker 1 month has passed after the tournament and Zenon is doing well on Team Dusk. Joboz was moved to team Fusion because his dueling abilities slipped and a new student arrived at Dawn of Dusk Academy. His name was Nemesis Breaker. He was a pro duelist but decided to go there to further sharpen his skills and meet new duelists. He had dueled Zenon twice – winning both times – but said that Zenon’s Cloudian Deck was well made. H knows who Zephirium is and has dueled him 3 times – losing every time. He uses a One-Turn Win Deck. One day as Zenon was walking through the hallway, he met up with Nemesis, who stopped and gave a forced smile. Zenon: Ummm, hey. Nemesis: Hi, ummm, there’s this ummm duel disk I wanted you to have. I’d think you’d want it because your brother gave it to me the first time I lost to him. Zenon’s eyes brighten as he sees the Dusk version of the duel disk that Joboz stole from him. He takes it and puts it on. Nemesis begins to walk away. Zenon yells “Thanks” and hears a faint noise that sounds like “No problem”. Zenon turns around and bumps into Professor Poxter, who seems to hate Zenon for embarrassing him 3 ½ months ago. Poxter: Watch where ya goin’ Z-Failer! Zenon: Ummm, sorry. Poxter: What’s with the duel disk, HUH?! You gonna duel someone, HUH?! Why don’t’ you – Zenon: Calm down Chicken Pox, this used to be my brother’s and someone gave it to me! Poxter: That’s convenient, ISN’T IT?! Let’s duel! If you lose YOU’RE EXPELLED! Zenon: HEY?! You can’t expel me! Whatever, if I win, you give me all A’s for the rest of the semester! Poxter: FINE! Let’s duel! Poxter demands that he should go first. He draws and activates A – Lucky Break. It allows him to gain 1000 Life Points and Zenon gains 500 Life Points. He then activates Z – Fail for Life. Poxter loses 8000 Life Points and so does Zenon. All cards on the field and in each player’s hands are destroyed and Poxter can draw a card. He then puts sets a card and ends his turn. Zenon draws a card and activates Fatal Luck, which allows to draw 2 cards at the cost of half his Life Points. He summons Trap Passer with an ATK of 1400. Traps don’t affect it. He attacks with it, therefore winning the duel and a semester full of A’s from the Education of Common Sense Dueling. Poxter: This…..isn’t…..OVER! Poxter walks away in anger and Zenon turns around to find that a crowd of 6 duelists were watching him duel. Everyone was happy that he finally beat the grumpy teacher. Later that night there was an alarm and everyone rushed to the dueling arena. They saw Nemesis Breaker lying on the floor, incapacitated. When he finally woke up, he tried to tell Professor Szwoom – the headmaster – who did it. : He a-a-asked for my d-d-duel dissssk. He had purple hair, with a purple vest, and – Nemesis became incapacitated again. Zenon rushed to Szwoom to tell him that he met him too and told Patronus that it was him who stole the rare cards. Patronus apologized and gave him his old deck – although his new one proved to be better. For the past few days, Nemesis was in the hospital while everyone continued their daily lives. The first semester ended for Zenon soon after and he went back to his normal life until next semester. [spoiler=Semester 2 Chapter 4]SEMESTER 2Chapter 4 – Cloudian Corruption Non-normal things began to happen when Zenon came back. A few students who once had nice, happy personalities, are now dark and shady. Slowly, over the weeks, Zenon himself noticed his change of personality. One night, he met Jazo again outside. Jazo confessed that he was causing the corruption of the students, but only as payback because his identity was exposed. He then dueled Zenon and lost. He said he didn’t know why he only lost to Zenon and no one else. He disappears into dark air, thinking he said too much. Zenon noticed that not just he was changing, but his cards were changing too. All of his Cloudian cards Corrupt Cloudian Cards with more powerful and pain-inflicting attacks. Yet, the corruption of the cards only happened to him and he was the most corrupt student in Dawn of Dusk Academy. Students began to stop hanging out with him and soon enough anyone who dueled him always lost. Barjevore D. Mushovere: Wh-What? NOOO!!!!! Zenon: If you knew how to duel, this wouldn’t have happened. Barjevore D. Mushovere: BUT NO!!!!!! That’s my duel disk from my father!!!! Don’t take it!!! Zenon: Those who can’t duel have no right purpose for a dueling mechanism. Zenon walks away with dark evil eyes as Barjevore cried. He threw Barji’s – Barjevore’s nickname – duel disk aside and it broke. No one dueled him after that. His outfit also changed. It turned from a brown bullet proof vest, a loose white shirt, a pair of brown gloves, gray and white pants, nice-looking shoes, and a gun holder, to a Dusk Obelisk Black jacket, black gloves, futuristic black shoes, and black jeans. He was so evil, Joboz was frightened of him and stopped bullying him. The whole school feared him and he feared no one. As days passed, Zenon waited for an opponent. Barji challenged him to a duel after he got a new duel disk yet he lost. The only way for him to be uncorrupted, someone had to beat him. Speedzer X decided to be that someone. Everyone watched as Speedzer X was on the edge and about to lose. Yet he pulled out Elemental Hero Pain Inflictor and won the duel, turning Zenon back to normal. But Zenon was not the only victim of darkness. Anyone with the potential to be a great duelist is targeted by Jazo and is turned corrupted so they won’t succeed. Jazo’s way of stopping people’s goals is a cruel way of doing things, but he never revealed the benefit on his side. Speedzer X was a better duelist then Zenon and Nemesis and by means of that, he was corrupted. The way the students acted towards Zenon was the way they acted towards Speedzer X. Zenon got his respect back, but was faced with an even bigger challenge – defeating Speedzer X, the undefeated duelist. He attempts it but loses and decides to remake his deck to counter the Corrupt Hero Deck. He had his Mixture Deck, One-Turn Win Deck, his Cloudian Deck, and his Corrupt Cloudian Deck. He only used his One-Turn Deck once and it was based on luck so it wouldn’t work. His mixture Deck was the first deck he made and it wasn’t so good. The Corrupt Hero Deck had cards that countered the Cloudian Deck very easily so there was only one deck he could use. It was his Corrupt Cloudian Deck. It was a risk to use since it might bring out his darkness but he was possibly the only student that had a chance at defeating Speedzer X and Nemesis Breaker was still in the hospital. He had to try. [spoiler=Chapter 5]Chapter 5 – Corruption vs. Corruption Zenon went and challenged Speedzer X to a duel. The battle for light has begun! Zenon goes first and draws a card. He summons Corrupt Cloudian – Shadow Cloud Enforcer with an ATK of 1600. He activates its effect which allows him to Special Summon one Corrupt Cloudian Monster from his deck and he chooses Corrupt Cloudian – Tuner Helper. He lays 2 face-downs and ends his turn. Speedzer X draws and summons Corrupt Hero Divination Sparker. He can special summon 2 more of that card from his hand or deck. They all have 1400 ATK. He then activates Poison of the Army which decreases all of Zenon’s monsters’ ATK to 1000. Speedzer X then attacks with all of his monsters but Zenon activates Pain of the Deploy which sends all of the opponent’s monsters to the graveyard and the opponent receives damage equal to all the monsters’ ATK. Speedzer X loses 4200 Life Points with 3800 Life Points left. He ends his turn. Zenon draws and summons Corrupt Cloudian – Doom Cloud. Since Corrupt Cloudian – Shadow Cloud Enforcer is a 4 star monster and Corrupt Cloudian – Tuner Helper is a 2 star monster and Corrupt Cloudian – Doom Cloud is a 4 star monster, he is able to Synchro Summon Corrupt Cloudian – Shadow Doom Blaster which has an ATK of 3200. He equips Corrupt Thunder to it and attacks Speedzer X full on and wins the duel. Speedzer X returns to normal and Zenon remains normal. Speedzer X: Thanks Zenon, you really helped me out there, didn’t think you would beat me. Zenon: Ya know what they say, fire vs. fire – in this case, corruption vs. corruption. [spoiler=Chapter 6]Chapter 6 – Ultimate Sacred Egyptian God of Divinity Since the events of corruption scrambled the students’ minds, they forgot about Zenon’s birthday. As soon as one person found out, the whole school found out and since he is such a good duelist and has been through so much, they threw him a birthday party. They hadn’t had a big birthday party since Zephirium was still there. 2 months later, a mysterious man with a suitcase came into the school, asking for Zenon……. TO BE CONTINUED........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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