Soul Legacy Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Yeah, but i've you have a good imagination it isn't good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 True, that's why you try to suppress it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 True. Anyway, what type of gore do you want to see in chapter 3? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Not sure. I've seen some of the Saw gore myself, so I'm sure Omega can't beat that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Neither do I. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Plus I don't see Kurokawa as the person who understands nothing but killing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted June 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Plus I don't see Kurokawa as the person who understands nothing but killing Kurokawa may be like that but did you forget about his other side? :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Plus I don't see Kurokawa as the person who understands nothing but killing Kurokawa may be like that but did you forget about his other side? :3 Well i didn't. I find him a very mysterious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Plus I don't see Kurokawa as the person who understands nothing but killing Kurokawa may be like that but did you forget about his other side? :3 of course not, but even then I don't see him as a pure killer. Most fics don't have such characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted June 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Chapter 4 is still in process. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Don't worry, we can all wait it out while you write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Chapter 4 is still in process. Fine with me ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Share Posted June 17, 2009 Just announce when you're ready to have it up here, k? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 I hope he isn't forgeting about this........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 He's probably just busy right now, give him some time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 I will, im just hoping........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 so am I, Soul Legacy. Hopefully it's not writers block Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Hello guys, I'm sorry for the delay, I was back in my Uncle's house. (He doesn't have internet) So, I'll be working on Chapter 4, and will get it up ASAP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 That's good! Can't wait! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 I've split the chapters to 2 parts, because I'm a bit lazy to do more :3 [spoiler=Chapter 4; The Government Part 1][align=center]Kurokawa had a hard time sleeping that night; he was having a horrible nightmare. *Kurokawa was in the Government building; he grinned, and rushed to the hallways. Suddenly, he was greeted by 3 Security officers, who aimed their guns at him. “Halt!! What do you think you’re doing?!!” One of them asked. Kurokawa grinned harder in reply, and ran to the officers. He jumped, and dragged along the floors, passing through the officer in the center of the hallway by the legs. Kurokawa got up behind the officers, and kicked at the middle one’s back. Making a loud crack, the center officer fell to the ground in pain, and the other officers turned to Kurokawa. Kurokawa grabbed the left officer by the arms, and kicked at the right officer, with excellent speed and agility, he was able to kick the left officer stomach (With his knee), and kick the right officer away with his right leg.Kurokawa continued on, and went inside a lab. He turned to the lead scientist, and grabbed him by the neck. “Where are the weapons?!!” He asked the scientist, and the scientist pointed to a shelf of guns and knives. Kurokawa threw the man away, making him crash to the wall, blood spilling from his mouth. Kurokawa rushed to the shelf, and grabbed a knife, put it inside his pocket, and grabbed 2 pistols. Kurokawa went to the scientist, and pointed the pistols at his head. “Argh?!! What are you doing?!!” – “ “What do you think?!! I’m doing what we’re supposed to do, finding out what we are!” – “J-just stop it!! I don’t want to be this way!!” – “Don’t lie!! You like this, don’t you? The bloodshed, the pleasure of it all through your veins!!”Kurokawa grinned, and fired the pistol.*“ArGh!!” Kurokawa shouted, as he awoke from his sleep. Sweat dripping down and he felt himself tremble and shiver. “I…Have to get away. Those Government guys will know what I am, and what to do with me!” The sun rose from the horizon, as the clock reached 6. Kurokawa immediately got up, and grabbed a jacket. He rushed down the stairs, and went out the door. He walked to the place where the government, the largest building in town, ‘The Glory’ it was called. Kurokawa went inside the government building. That building only allowed members, so, he had to sneak in and find the man he had encountered with last time. He walked with stealth, keeping quiet, and hid behind a wall. He looked to the hallways, and found nobody, so he rushed through the hall, always keeping his back to the wall. “Nobody here…good.” Kurokawa said, and continued. He stopped, as he reached the lab he had found in his dream. He gulped, and went inside. He was surprised to see that all the scientists were beaten, and the lead scientist was being threatened by a familiar man. “Y-you…” Kurokawa stuttered. The man, who threatened the scientist, threw him down and looked at Kurokawa. “Kurokawa…” He said, sounding a bit shocked. “Kryton…” Kurokawa replied. Kryton grabbed a pistol he had in his pocket and aimed it at Kurokawa. “Sorry about this, besides, we only met each other once, so we won’t feel sad…won’t we?” Kryton carefully aimed it again; to be sure it was going to fire at Kurokawa’s head. Kurokawa felt himself being taken over, and felt he appearing. Kurokawa suddenly grinned, and rushed to Kryton, who was surprised. Kryton fired a bullet at Kurokawa, but Kurokawa moved his head slightly, the bullet passing from his hair. He continued, rushing to Kryton.Kryton fired again and again, but each bullet missed, and hit the scientists. Kurokawa was now close to Kryton, he grabbed his neck, and raised him up. “Goodbye…” He said, but Kryton grinned. “You don’t know who I am…” He kicked Kurokawa at the stomach, blowing him away. He dropped safely to the floor, while Kurokawa dragged and hit the wall. “How…interesting.” Kurokawa replied. He got up, and looked at Kryton with his glowing red eyes. * M.A.R.I.A.System EngageData file…loading.Data file…found.Extracting Data.Video Feed back *------*“N-no please…stop!! No!! ARgh!!” Shouted a scientist, as the shape of Derek appeared. He had the sword in his hands, and he fondled the scientist’s chin. “Ahh, What a cruel world we live in…” He sighed, the scientist gulped. “P-please…spare me!!” Derek shook his head, and stopped. He grabbed his sword with two hands, and slashed.*------*Main ObjectiveDestroy target; Derek Namio[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 Ooooh! MY characters are against EACH OTHER!!! That's brilliant! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 still having a problem containing the beast for Kurokawa. It's a great chap, but I wonder when he'll have more control Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Maybe in the next book :3 I'll be finishing this story with about 15 or so chapters. Sorry for all the delay and such, I was tired and had my graduation today. I will work on part 2 as soon as I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 figured something had gone up. No matter, I can wait this out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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