Silent Omega Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Chapter 3 is up, it's short, sorry. [spoiler=Chapter 3; Others][align=center]Night soon fell over the town, and the familiar body of Derek was jumping through the rooftops. He swiftly jumped with agility from roof to roof, and found a man walking in an alley. He jumped down, and the man was scared, he staggered back, and dropped down. As he got up and saw the face of Derek, he said; “Oh, just you kids…” He began to walk, but Derek stopped him. “I don’t think so…I feel…hungry!” The man screamed in agony as Derek launched himself. Derek quickly punched the man in the face, and then he kicked him up, and did an uppercut. The man hit the wall and slid down, feeling pain surging through his bodies. He moaned and moved himself backwards, Derek closed in on him. His face his by the shadows, and his eyes and mouth white, grinning, he jumped. Derek grabbed his sword, and slashed at the man. * Kryton was in the tour, as they neared lab 12, he sneaked out and walked to the door. He opened it, and went inside, where he was stared at by about 20 scientists. He hmpfed, and rushed to them, and then beginning to punch them. He kicked at one of the scientist, blood spat from his mouth, and Kryton turned around, punching a scientist that was about to attack him. There were loud shatters but nobody noticed…Kryton was able to defeat all the scientists. He grabbed the leader, and shook him. “YOU! You were the one, weren’t you?!! It’s your entire fault I had injected it a few years ago!!” The scientist gulped. “W-what are you talking about?” Kryton got angry again, and raised his arm, then he punched the man’s head, but surprisingly he tore the head right off. He sighed, and got up, then leaving. * Padon walked back to an alley, he lay down, and coughed. He looked at his hands, blood. “I-I’m soon going to die…” He said, and looked around. “T-this world…I have to leave it…” He said to himself, and he closed his eyes…going to sleep. * Kurokawa had searched the town for his parents, he’s willing to search the world for them, but he would need to ask others if they had seen them. He sat down in a bench and sighed. “Hey kid!” A man shouted, and Kurokawa looked up, it was a man he had asked before. “Kid, I saw the people you wanted to find going to a hotel…” Kurokawa instantly got up, and ran back to the hotel, the one he had been in. He asked the man in charge of his parents, and said they were in a room in the top floor. Kurokawa ran up the stairs, and arrived at the front of the door, there was a note on it. “Dear Kurokawa, I’ve been sent to capture you, the government seems to be interested in you, and they say that you’re… ‘interesting’. I work for the government, and they’ve sent only me to keep a watch on you. I know you’re looking for your parents…we have them. If you want to meet your parents, meet and follow our demands. Be outside your hotel at 8 o’ clock tomorrow night. Sincerely, TRAP P.S: If you wish to know what you are then send back a letter of agreeing to us.” * The next night… Kurokawa waited outside the hotel, he patted his foot on the ground several times before a car arrived. A man in a black suit walked out, his blue hair waving around against the cold wind. “Hello…Kurokawa.” Kurokawa looked around. “Where are my parents?” The man laughed. “Kurokawa, don’t expect the government to say the truth…” Kurokawa folded his hands to a fist. “You lied to me?!! You B****!!” Kurokawa rushed to the man, but the man dodged Kurokawa’s punch, he side-stepped, and punched Kurokawa back, making him fly back. Kurokawa crashed to a wall, and slid down. “Bastard…” He muttered. He got up, and looked at the man, who smiled. “You’re not the only one, with it” The man replied. Kurokawa stepped back. “So you do know what I am. Tell me! Before you kill me, tell me what am I?!!” The man turned around. “Sorry Kurokawa, I’m afraid you would have to figure that out yourselves, along with the others.” The man stepped inside the car. “Others?!! Who?!!!” Kurokawa asked. The man chuckled, “I can’t tell you, but I’ll let you live…” He drove away, leaving Kurokawa full of questions in his head. There were others? If so, were they like him? He had to find out.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Chapter was nice. Derek was awesome, although I'd like to add a thing about his sword, The Soul Reaper; When Derek becomes his Berserk Mode, the sword appears from thin air, and Derek grabs it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 OK, I'll be sure to remember that in the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Ok, thanks! And oops, I called his sword the wrong name! It's MOON Reaper!:lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Nice Chapter 3 Destruction FTW! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Yes, and next chapter will be REALLY violent. Watching Madness Combat payed off in Fanfiction writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 OOOH!! BTW, remember that M.A.R.I.A was designed to be a homicidal robot! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Yeah, but smexy at the same time ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Heh, I'll be sure to make her kill a few. I just thought of Kryton, Derek, Maria, and Kurokawa joining together, but nah, it won't make sense. Perhaps there could be a connection between those 4 and the government. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Yes, that would give some suspense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Impressive chap 3. I want to see Derek more in Berserk mode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Yes, in the next chaptah! There will be guns, violence, gore, and madness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 So it will be more violent than chap 3? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Of course. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Good. I'm really going to look forward to the gore part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Same. I would laugh if this fic is all gore =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 But if that was true the previous chaps would be filled with them wouldn't they? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 True. to be honest im not a fan of gore but i'll survive ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Meh, you watch enough war documentaries and films you'll get used to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 ^Thats funny because i have :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Well, keep watching them (just not the Saw type gore, that's just wrong) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Agree'd Who could like those films? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 *shrugs* I guess if you like killing people, you could. That's why Fenrir said he'll make his fics like so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 O.O Im scared now.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Don't be. Seeing it on screen is one thing. Reading it on paper is another Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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