Black Field - Chapter 3 up -

[Silent Omega]

[align=center][spoiler=Plot]Kurokawa, a young man in search of his memories. He hopes to figure out his past when he suddenly wakes up, and finds himself in a room, trapped with a dead civilian. Korukawa, who was charged for murder after that, was sent to prison. He slept the first night, and found that everybody was dead the next day, and blood was on his hands...he ran. Now, he's an outcast, trying to search fo his memories and find out the horrible truth about what he was.

 

 

[spoiler= Character apps]

Name: Kurokawa Kaito

Age: 18

Appearance: http://www.freewebs.com/pinkashes/red%20hair%20guy.jpg

Personality: *Ranges from differents*

Bio:

Korukawa doesn't remember anything of his past. The only thing he could remember was his name and age, and that's all. Korukawa hopes to find his memories and find out what he really is.

Appearance in the story:

Korukawa was arrested as he woke up inside a room, trapped with a dead civilian. Korukawa could not remember his memory and was taken to interogation, there, several policemen asked him questions about the murder. Because of his loss of memories, he did not reply and was taken to prison. He went asleep the night he went to Jail, and the next day was horrible. He found everybody dead, his cell open, and blood everywhere on the walls...and Korukawa's hands. Korukawa ran away from the people and had to live as an outcast.

 

Name: Kryton

Age: 32

Appearance: http://s.bebo.com/app-image/7924704848/5411656627/PROFILE/i.quizzaz.com/img/q/u/08/04/03/DarkBoywithaFireButterfly1.jpg

Personality: Changes from time to time

Bio: Kryton is a lonely man, he never really socialises with people. Her hasen't really got any background except from the fact when he was young he was very intrested in science, and created his own DNA string. He injected it into himself and something happened to him, something that still needs to be discovered.

 

Appearance in the Story: He was walking alone, that is all.

 

Name: Derek Namio

Age: 18

Appearance:

http://dark.pozadia.org/wallpaper/Dark-Anime-Warrior/

Personality: Derek is usually calm during the days, jolly and optimistic, almost like a child. But when the night is lit by the full moon, he turns into a full-blood killing machine, slaughtering and incinerating innocent people and houses as he goes. He usually wakes up and remembers nothing of what he has done during those full moon nights.

Bio: Derek Namio is quite an optimistic one at first glance, but when the full moon lights up the night, he shows his true instincts. Because of this 'Berserker Tendencity' being active already at childhood, Derek was rejected and thrown out by his parents at early age, and he had to learn to survive on his own. When his berserker tendencities awaken, a gigantic, curved blade(the one in the picture) called the Moon Reaper, appears in his hand. The Moon Reaper is magical in nature, allowing no mortal to hold it, not even with two hands.

Appearance in the Story: He was in his berserker stance, slaughtering scientists in a factory, which ironically is the birthplace of my SECOND character.

 

Name: Her real name is Experiment XJ009, but she is called M.A.R.I.A(Murderous Assault Robot In Action).

Age: Unknown. Creation date unknown.

Appearance:

In-complete Form(This Appearance is IMPORTANT for her appearance in the Fan Fic!):

http://www.eiga.dk/billeder/0059.jpg

 

Complete Form:

http://www.acceleratingfuture.com/michael/blog/images/gits.jpg

Personality: Being an artificial being, M.A.R.I.A can only simulate human feelings, although she has no complete understanding about them.

Bio: M.A.R.I.A was created by a secret military organization called B.I.O(Bio-genetic Intellect Organization) to support military advancements. Unfortuneatly, the president turned the project down, and stopped giving B.I.O the economic funds nessecary for such operations. Luckily, B.I.O made the project possible by organizing a criminality mob, robbing banks and stealing equipment from computer companies. But they had no idea that Derek Namio would one day stumble upon them, and ruin all their work by slaughtering the scientists and destroying all equipment, except M.A.R.I.A...

Appearance in the Story: She is in her In-complete Form, inside a liquid-filled tube while waiting for her to be complete. Derek spots her and is about to destroy the tube, when he suddenly ignores her and leaves the destroyed factory, leaving her to complete herself.

 

Name: Padon

Age: 26

Appearance: sickly pale, scarred skin but usually covered by wearing thick, covering clothes, even in sweltering weather. Almost colorless blue eyes, dark brown and rather oily hair. Has a rasping cough, and a rather stickly body.

Personality: Distrusting, strikes when feels as if he has been backed into a corner, usually tries to keep a safe distance from crowds, yet close enough to keep safe from being 'picked off', or ambushed. Anti-social to put it mildly, has an eye for detail, but not very smart when it comes to Maths, English etc. Although is somewhat well versed in medicine. Which helps, considering he is dangerously ill and usually talks quietly and with a raspy cough.

Bio: Known as 'Subject 108', he was basically a test dummy for medicine, cosmetics, and numerous products by a less-then-scruple company. He knows little of his past (although he knows he hasn't lived here all his life, he has small glimpses of a smiling father, a swing set, and what looks like a ghost), and has numerous blank spots in his memory. he 'lived' in a small room made of a dull metal with a small bed, and rather erratic meals, usually depending on the medicine (and in some cases, the disease) he had been forced to take. He has left the box on few occasions, only to be allowed in another small area with a few leisure activities such as playing cards, tarot cards, a scrap of a page with a short story about a boy called "Padon" who found himself with wings, and a rubix cube. He has seen no other prisoners, and wonders if he really is the one hundred and eighth one, or if the white-suited people he sees are just trying to confuse him.

Appearance in the Story: He felt death nearing one day as he coughed a mouthful of blood, and tried harder then ever to escape. He managed to escape from the box when one section of it weakened, perhaps from corrosion, perhaps something else, he found himself in the middle of a city and began to run. He managed to steal some thick clothes and medicine from a house while the occupants slept and stumbled his way around looking for a place to hide, rest, attempt to heal, and perhaps die. He decided to call himself Padon, after the story, because it was the only name he really knew.

 

*Character Applications*

 

I am taking characters, to apply one here, just fill out this form.

 

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Bio: (At least 1 paragraph of a summary of your character backround)

Appearance in the Story: (Your character's last remaining activity, before he/she appeared in a chapter)

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapters]

[spoiler=Prolouge]

“Who, no what am I? Where did I come from? Why am I unwanted? All these questions…wandering in my head, unanswered.”

 

“Am I…my own enemy?”

 

A young man had these thoughts in his head, as he walked along the road of a nearby town. He had killed more than 20 people…what had he done? The man gripped his bag, that he had held over his shoulder, and continued to walk.

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1; Getting Started]

Kuroka wa Kaito arrived in an old bar, he opened its door, and walked inside. Everybody in the bar stared at him. “We don’t need kids here, now get off!” Shouted one of them. Kuroka wa nodded, “Yes, but I’m rather sorry, I need to find a hotel and couldn’t find one. I thought one of you guys could help me.” One of the bar men grinned, he got up. “Oh, I’ll help you alright!” He walked to Kurokawa, and grabbed his neck, then lifted him up.

Let the Bodies Hit the Floor

Kurokawa smirked, his eyes now covered by the shadows. He grabbed the man’s arm and pushed it away from his neck. The man was surprised to see that Kurokawa was able to do this. Kurokawa finally pushed the man’s arm away, cracking it as it went backwards from the push, as Kurokawa fell, he slided, and kicked the man’s leg, making the man fall. The man fell to the ground, and Kurokawa grinned, he put his legs on the man’s back. “Now…who wants to die?!”

Outside the bar, as several bystanders were walking, the bar windows were crashed as 2 men flew out covered in blood. The bystanders began to gather around and look as more and more bodies piled up. Kurokawa walked out, his arms and hands clean, and walked away, he had gotten the information he needed.

*

Kurokawa had rented a room in a hotel, on the top floor.

 

Animal I have Become

 

Kurokawa grabbed his head in pain, he had remembered what happened. He got up, and shouted, while kicking at a desk. “ArGh!!! Why the hell was I born this way?!! WHAT AM I?!! WHY AM I SUCH A F*CKING B*TCH?!!!” He went to his knees, still holding his head in pain, he felt a tear drop down his eyes. “Why am I unwanted?” Kurokawa’ eyes then turned red, he felt power surging through his body. “No, not again!!!” He shouted, having no will to control himself.

*

Kurokawa opened his eyes, and looked around. He was in his bed, and it was morning. What had happened, last night? He suddenly felt a flash of his memories pass by, and he held his head in pain, once more. He sighed. “I…did it…again.” He said sadly.

*

Kurokawa walked to the bar he was in before, as he entered, everybody began to look away in fear. He walked to the counter, and sat down in one of the chairs. Beside him was a woman with beautiful crimson hair, as long as her shoulders and she concentrated hard, on only her drink. She turned to Kurokawa and he realized something…the woman was as old as he was, about a high schooler’s age. “What?” She asked him. Kuroka wa shook his head, “Nothing.” The woman realized what he had found out. “What? Just noticed I’m 17?” Kurokawa slowly nodded. “Well, listen here. Y-you don’t need to t-talk about…age, I can…drink anytime I…want!” The woman replied, at every silence, she hiccupped. “Excuse me, are you drunk?” Kurokawa asked, the woman shook her head. “Of course not!” She lied. “Why would I be drunk, no, how…would I be…drunk?!” The woman took a deep breath. “Are you accusing me of drinking…too… much?!” Kurokawa shook his head and turned away. “How did I get into this mess?” He thought to himself.

Finally, he stood up, and left the bar. Who would’ve wanted to listen to a drunk teenager?

*

Kurokawa had decided to take a walk, on the way he admired the beauty of the town he was in. But he stopped, as he bumped into someone. “Ouch, sorry sir.” He said, and looked at the one who he had bumped. A man with blue hair, and blue eyes, his skin was nearly as blue as what he had on. What was this? A blue fanatic? The man did not reply, but continue. “Uh, sir, wait!” Kurokawa replied. “What’s your name?” The man stopped. “Kryton” He said, his deep voice sounding menacing, yet soft. Kurokawa nodded. “And I’m Kurokawa!”

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2; Finding Families]

Completion…50%

These words flashed on a robot’s eyes, halfway done through its completion. A blue bar showed how much its completion was through, and it greatly increased every second.

 

“Completion…100% finished. Activating reboot.” The robot said, in a cold metallic voice. The robot body moved, the human part following it, in perfect synch, the mix of two walked out of its tube. She stretched herself, and looked at her body. “I’m…part human. Do…I feel emotions?”

*

A man hid inside an alley, he sat down, laying on the wall by his head. He was comfortable because he wore bundles of coats and jackets. He coughed, and watched as several bystanders passed by. “H-help please…” He said, or at least tried to, in his raspy voice. The bystanders seemed to not notice and continued their regular daily activities.

*

Kurokawa laid on his bed, and looked around his room. He noticed his bag, which he had found when he awoke on that day…when he killed several of the law enforcers. He grabbed it, and sat up. He opened it, and looked inside, grabbing several things out, he emptied it. He searched around the pile, and found only pictures, all of people he did not know. He looked at a picture of an old man, in his 60s and a woman in her 50s. He looked at it closely, and flipped it to its back. Mom and Dad it stated. Kurokawa couldn’t help, but he put the pictures of his parents to a desk close to his bed. He looked at another picture, a park, but different than from the world he awoke to. In the picture, there was the usual bench, and people passing by, all with red eyes, same as he and his parents. He looked at the trees, which seemed to move as he looked at them. He put the picture away and continued to look through the pile.

*

The man walked at the sidewalk, he kept close to buildings, sure he was going to die anytime. He walked through, and stopped, reaching a church, inside, he walked to the front, and sat down. He watched a young man, who sat to his knees and prayed. After a few minutes, the young man walked next to the man, and sat down. “Hello.” The young man said, and the man nodded. “Hi…” He rasped. “I am Derek.” Replied the young man. “And I am…Padon.” Derek got up, “Well, it’s time for me to go, goodbye…” He said, and walked out. Padon nodded, and looked back to the statue of god.

*

Kryton walked to an old lab, he barged in and walked to a counter in the front. “Excuse me, where is lab 12?” He asked the woman behind the counter. “Oh, that’s guarded by security, but there will be a tour soon, if you want to see it.” Kryton nodded. “Yes, I would like to join that tour group.”

*

Kurokawa found a picture of a young woman, about the same age as he was. She had bright silver hair, and her face looked like a beauty to Kurokawa. He flipped it to the back. Matsuo Tsubaki ~ Love He put this photo next to his parents, and walked to the door. He turned off the light, and walked outside. He had to search for those people.

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 3; Others]

Night soon fell over the town, and the familiar body of Derek was jumping through the rooftops. He swiftly jumped with agility from roof to roof, and found a man walking in an alley. He jumped down, and the man was scared, he staggered back, and dropped down. As he got up and saw the face of Derek, he said; “Oh, just you kids…” He began to walk, but Derek stopped him. “I don’t think so…I feel…hungry!” The man screamed in agony as Derek launched himself. Derek quickly punched the man in the face, and then he kicked him up, and did an uppercut. The man hit the wall and slid down, feeling pain surging through his bodies. He moaned and moved himself backwards, Derek closed in on him. His face his by the shadows, and his eyes and mouth white, grinning, he jumped. Derek grabbed his sword, and slashed at the man.

 

*

 

Kryton was in the tour, as they neared lab 12, he sneaked out and walked to the door. He opened it, and went inside, where he was stared at by about 20 scientists. He hmpfed, and rushed to them, and then beginning to punch them. He kicked at one of the scientist, blood spat from his mouth, and Kryton turned around, punching a scientist that was about to attack him. There were loud shatters but nobody noticed…Kryton was able to defeat all the scientists. He grabbed the leader, and shook him. “YOU! You were the one, weren’t you?!! It’s your entire fault I had injected it a few years ago!!” The scientist gulped. “W-what are you talking about?” Kryton got angry again, and raised his arm, then he punched the man’s head, but surprisingly he tore the head right off. He sighed, and got up, then leaving.

 

*

 

Padon walked back to an alley, he lay down, and coughed. He looked at his hands, blood. “I-I’m soon going to die…” He said, and looked around. “T-this world…I have to leave it…” He said to himself, and he closed his eyes…going to sleep.

 

*

 

Kurokawa had searched the town for his parents, he’s willing to search the world for them, but he would need to ask others if they had seen them. He sat down in a bench and sighed. “Hey kid!” A man shouted, and Kurokawa looked up, it was a man he had asked before. “Kid, I saw the people you wanted to find going to a hotel…” Kurokawa instantly got up, and ran back to the hotel, the one he had been in. He asked the man in charge of his parents, and said they were in a room in the top floor. Kurokawa ran up the stairs, and arrived at the front of the door, there was a note on it.

 

“Dear Kurokawa,

 

I’ve been sent to capture you, the government seems to be interested in you, and they say that you’re… ‘interesting’. I work for the government, and they’ve sent only me to keep a watch on you. I know you’re looking for your parents…we have them. If you want to meet your parents, meet and follow our demands. Be outside your hotel at 8 o’ clock tomorrow night.

 

Sincerely,

TRAP

 

P.S: If you wish to know what you are then send back a letter of agreeing to us.”

 

 

*

 

The next night…

 

Kurokawa waited outside the hotel, he patted his foot on the ground several times before a car arrived. A man in a black suit walked out, his blue hair waving around against the cold wind. “Hello…Kurokawa.” Kurokawa looked around. “Where are my parents?” The man laughed. “Kurokawa, don’t expect the government to say the truth…” Kurokawa folded his hands to a fist. “You lied to me?!! You B****!!” Kurokawa rushed to the man, but the man dodged Kurokawa’s punch, he side-stepped, and punched Kurokawa back, making him fly back.

 

Kurokawa crashed to a wall, and slid down. “Bastard…” He muttered. He got up, and looked at the man, who smiled. “You’re not the only one, with it” The man replied. Kurokawa stepped back. “So you do know what I am. Tell me! Before you kill me, tell me what am I?!!” The man turned around. “Sorry Kurokawa, I’m afraid you would have to figure that out yourselves, along with the others.” The man stepped inside the car. “Others?!! Who?!!!” Kurokawa asked. The man chuckled, “I can’t tell you, but I’ll let you live…” He drove away, leaving Kurokawa full of questions in his head. There were others? If so, were they like him? He had to find out.

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 4; The Government Part 1]

Kurokawa had a hard time sleeping that night; he was having a horrible nightmare.

 

*

Kurokawa was in the Government building; he grinned, and rushed to the hallways. Suddenly, he was greeted by 3 Security officers, who aimed their guns at him. “Halt!! What do you think you’re doing?!!” One of them asked. Kurokawa grinned harder in reply, and ran to the officers. He jumped, and dragged along the floors, passing through the officer in the center of the hallway by the legs. Kurokawa got up behind the officers, and kicked at the middle one’s back. Making a loud crack, the center officer fell to the ground in pain, and the other officers turned to Kurokawa. Kurokawa grabbed the left officer by the arms, and kicked at the right officer, with excellent speed and agility, he was able to kick the left officer stomach (With his knee), and kick the right officer away with his right leg.

Kurokawa continued on, and went inside a lab. He turned to the lead scientist, and grabbed him by the neck. “Where are the weapons?!!” He asked the scientist, and the scientist pointed to a shelf of guns and knives. Kurokawa threw the man away, making him crash to the wall, blood spilling from his mouth. Kurokawa rushed to the shelf, and grabbed a knife, put it inside his pocket, and grabbed 2 pistols. Kurokawa went to the scientist, and pointed the pistols at his head.

“Argh?!! What are you doing?!!” – “ “What do you think?!! I’m doing what we’re supposed to do, finding out what we are!” – “J-just stop it!! I don’t want to be this way!!” – “Don’t lie!! You like this, don’t you? The bloodshed, the pleasure of it all through your veins!!”

Kurokawa grinned, and fired the pistol.

*

“ArGh!!” Kurokawa shouted, as he awoke from his sleep. Sweat dripping down and he felt himself tremble and shiver. “I…Have to get away. Those Government guys will know what I am, and what to do with me!”

 

The sun rose from the horizon, as the clock reached 6.

 

Kurokawa immediately got up, and grabbed a jacket. He rushed down the stairs, and went out the door. He walked to the place where the government, the largest building in town, ‘The Glory’ it was called. Kurokawa went inside the government building. That building only allowed members, so, he had to sneak in and find the man he had encountered with last time. He walked with stealth, keeping quiet, and hid behind a wall. He looked to the hallways, and found nobody, so he rushed through the hall, always keeping his back to the wall. “Nobody here…good.” Kurokawa said, and continued. He stopped, as he reached the lab he had found in his dream. He gulped, and went inside. He was surprised to see that all the scientists were beaten, and the lead scientist was being threatened by a familiar man. “Y-you…” Kurokawa stuttered. The man, who threatened the scientist, threw him down and looked at Kurokawa. “Kurokawa…” He said, sounding a bit shocked. “Kryton…” Kurokawa replied. Kryton grabbed a pistol he had in his pocket and aimed it at Kurokawa. “Sorry about this, besides, we only met each other once, so we won’t feel sad…won’t we?” Kryton carefully aimed it again; to be sure it was going to fire at Kurokawa’s head. Kurokawa felt himself being taken over, and felt he appearing. Kurokawa suddenly grinned, and rushed to Kryton, who was surprised. Kryton fired a bullet at Kurokawa, but Kurokawa moved his head slightly, the bullet passing from his hair. He continued, rushing to Kryton.

Kryton fired again and again, but each bullet missed, and hit the scientists. Kurokawa was now close to Kryton, he grabbed his neck, and raised him up. “Goodbye…” He said, but Kryton grinned. “You don’t know who I am…” He kicked Kurokawa at the stomach, blowing him away. He dropped safely to the floor, while Kurokawa dragged and hit the wall. “How…interesting.” Kurokawa replied. He got up, and looked at Kryton with his glowing red eyes.

 

*

 

M.A.R.I.A.

System Engage

Data file…loading.

Data file…found.

Extracting Data.

Video Feed back

 

*------*

“N-no please…stop!! No!! ARgh!!” Shouted a scientist, as the shape of Derek appeared. He had the sword in his hands, and he fondled the scientist’s chin. “Ahh, What a cruel world we live in…” He sighed, the scientist gulped. “P-please…spare me!!” Derek shook his head, and stopped. He grabbed his sword with two hands, and slashed.

*------*

Main Objective

Destroy target; Derek Namio

 

 

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[bury the year]

Shouldn't it be "Kurokawa" instead of "Korukawa?" In it's current state, your character's last name is nonsense.

[Silent Omega]

Oh right, it was hard for me to memorize it. Also, the last name of Kurokawa is nonsense? Then, I'll change it.

[bury the year]

Well, the first part is at least.

[Silent Omega]

I've currently changed it to Kaito.

[Silent Omega]

Bump

 

To all readers;

 

Chapter 1 is still in process.

[Soul Legacy]

Name: Kryton

Age: 32

Appearance:

Personality: Changes from time to time

Bio: Kryton is a lonely man, he never really socialises with people. Her hasen't really got any background except from the fact when he was young he was very intrested in science, and created his own DNA string. He injected it into himself and something happened to him, something that still needs to be discovered.

 

Appearance in the Story: He was walking alone, that is all.

[Silent Omega]

Accepted, and Chapter 1 is nearly finished!

[ragnarok1945]

not bad of a prologue. Reminds me a little of the Bourne film series for memory recovery.

[Silent Omega]

K then, chapter 1;

[spoiler=Chapter 1; Getting Started]
[align=center]
Kuroka wa Kaito arrived in an old bar, he opened its door, and walked inside. Everybody in the bar stared at him. “We don’t need kids here, now get off!” Shouted one of them. Kuroka wa nodded, “Yes, but I’m rather sorry, I need to find a hotel and couldn’t find one. I thought one of you guys could help me.” One of the bar men grinned, he got up. “Oh, I’ll help you alright!” He walked to Kurokawa, and grabbed his neck, then lifted him up.
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sO_QntXc-c4&feature=fvst]Let the Bodies Hit the Floor[/url]
Kurokawa smirked, his eyes now covered by the shadows. He grabbed the man’s arm and pushed it away from his neck. The man was surprised to see that Kurokawa was able to do this. Kurokawa finally pushed the man’s arm away, cracking it as it went backwards from the push, as Kurokawa fell, he slided, and kicked the man’s leg, making the man fall. The man fell to the ground, and Kurokawa grinned, he put his legs on the man’s back. “Now…who wants to die?!”
Outside the bar, as several bystanders were walking, the bar windows were crashed as 2 men flew out covered in blood. The bystanders began to gather around and look as more and more bodies piled up. Kurokawa walked out, his arms and hands clean, and walked away, he had gotten the information he needed.
*
Kurokawa had rented a room in a hotel, on the top floor.

[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbHn1Pgj6Zk&NR=1]Animal I have Become[/url]

Kurokawa grabbed his head in pain, he had remembered what happened. He got up, and shouted, while kicking at a desk. “ArGh!!! Why the hell was I born this way?!! WHAT AM I?!! WHY AM I SUCH A F*CKING B*TCH?!!!” He went to his knees, still holding his head in pain, he felt a tear drop down his eyes. “Why am I unwanted?” Kurokawa’ eyes then turned red, he felt power surging through his body. “No, not again!!!” He shouted, having no will to control himself.
*
Kurokawa opened his eyes, and looked around. He was in his bed, and it was morning. What had happened, last night? He suddenly felt a flash of his memories pass by, and he held his head in pain, once more. He sighed. “I…did it…again.” He said sadly.
*
Kurokawa walked to the bar he was in before, as he entered, everybody began to look away in fear. He walked to the counter, and sat down in one of the chairs. Beside him was a woman with beautiful crimson hair, as long as her shoulders and she concentrated hard, on only her drink. She turned to Kurokawa and he realized something…the woman was as old as he was, about a high schooler’s age. “What?” She asked him. Kuroka wa shook his head, “Nothing.” The woman realized what he had found out. “What? Just noticed I’m 17?” Kurokawa slowly nodded. “Well, listen here. Y-you don’t need to t-talk about…age, I can…drink anytime I…want!” The woman replied, at every silence, she hiccupped. “Excuse me, are you drunk?” Kurokawa asked, the woman shook her head. “Of course not!” She lied. “Why would I be drunk, no, how…would I be…drunk?!” The woman took a deep breath. “Are you accusing me of drinking…too… much?!” Kurokawa shook his head and turned away. [i] “How did I get into this mess?”[/i] He thought to himself.
Finally, he stood up, and left the bar. Who would’ve wanted to listen to a drunk teenager?
*
Kurokawa had decided to take a walk, on the way he admired the beauty of the town he was in. But he stopped, as he bumped into someone. “Ouch, sorry sir.” He said, and looked at the one who he had bumped. A man with blue hair, and blue eyes, his skin was nearly as blue as what he had on. What was this? A blue fanatic? The man did not reply, but continue. “Uh, sir, wait!” Kurokawa replied. “What’s your name?” The man stopped. “Kryton” He said, his deep voice sounding menacing, yet soft. Kurokawa nodded. “And I’m Kurokawa!”[/align][/spoiler]

[ragnarok1945]

it makes me wonder of Kurokawa is under some sort of mind control or some mind manipulation chip planted in his brain

 

He doesn't want to kill, yet doesn't seem to have control in the matter.

[Silent Omega]

Well, you can guarantee that he doesn't have any mind control thing on him. It's just the usual 'Beast Inside' classic in those few movies.

[ragnarok1945]

so basically we go back to taming the beast in you concept

[Silent Omega]

Guess you can say I have that idea in mind.

[ragnarok1945]

then you should make sure the early attempts will fail disasterously

[Silent Omega]

lol

 

You can make sure I do that, because I will.

 

O' Course, I want to give this fanfic some kind of romance in it.

[ragnarok1945]

That's also good, unless you intend to do the drama romance where the beast loses control in the middle of the romance.

[Silent Omega]

Nah, I would never do that in my fanfics.

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

I got not only one, but TWO!

 

[align=center]Name: Derek Namio

Age: 18

Appearance:

http://dark.pozadia.org/wallpaper/Dark-Anime-Warrior/

Personality: Derek is usually calm during the days, jolly and optimistic, almost like a child. But when the night is lit by the full moon, he turns into a full-blood killing machine, slaughtering and incinerating innocent people and houses as he goes. He usually wakes up and remembers nothing of what he has done during those full moon nights.

Bio: Derek Namio is quite an optimistic one at first glance, but when the full moon lights up the night, he shows his true instincts. Because of this 'Berserker Tendencity' being active already at childhood, Derek was rejected and thrown out by his parents at early age, and he had to learn to survive on his own. When his berserker tendencities awaken, a gigantic, curved blade(the one in the picture) called the Moon Reaper, appears in his hand. The Moon Reaper is magical in nature, allowing no mortal to hold it, not even with two hands.

Appearance in the Story: He was in his berserker stance, slaughtering scientists in a factory, which ironically is the birthplace of my SECOND character.

 

Name: Her real name is Experiment XJ009, but she is called M.A.R.I.A(Murderous Assault Robot In Action).

Age: Unknown. Creation date unknown.

Appearance:

In-complete Form(This Appearance is IMPORTANT for her appearance in the Fan Fic!):

 

Complete Form:

Personality: Being an artificial being, M.A.R.I.A can only simulate human feelings, although she has no complete understanding about them.

Bio: M.A.R.I.A was created by a secret military organization called B.I.O(Bio-genetic Intellect Organization) to support military advancements. Unfortuneatly, the president turned the project down, and stopped giving B.I.O the economic funds nessecary for such operations. Luckily, B.I.O made the project possible by organizing a criminality mob, robbing banks and stealing equipment from computer companies. But they had no idea that Derek Namio would one day stumble upon them, and ruin all their work by slaughtering the scientists and destroying all equipment, except M.A.R.I.A...

Appearance in the Story: She is in her In-complete Form, inside a liquid-filled tube while waiting for her to be complete. Derek spots her and is about to destroy the tube, when he suddenly ignores her and leaves the destroyed factory, leaving her to complete herself.[/align]

[Aelsthla-Mental]

Interesting story. I've always enjoyed the 'beast within' stories, and This one looks like it will be no exception. I look forward to seeing where it goes.

 

Oh, and a character you might want to use:

 

Name: Padon

Age: 26

Appearance: sickly pale, scarred skin but usually covered by wearing thick, covering clothes, even in sweltering weather. Almost colorless blue eyes, dark brown and rather oily hair. Has a rasping cough, and a rather stickly body.

Personality: Distrusting, strikes when feels as if he has been backed into a corner, usually tries to keep a safe distance from crowds, yet close enough to keep safe from being 'picked off', or ambushed. Anti-social to put it mildly, has an eye for detail, but not very smart when it comes to Maths, English etc. Although is somewhat well versed in medicine. Which helps, considering he is dangerously ill and usually talks quietly and with a raspy cough.

Bio: Known as 'Subject 108', he was basically a test dummy for medicine, cosmetics, and numerous products by a less-then-scruple company. He knows little of his past (although he knows he hasn't lived here all his life, he has small glimpses of a smiling father, a swing set, and what looks like a ghost), and has numerous blank spots in his memory. he 'lived' in a small room made of a dull metal with a small bed, and rather erratic meals, usually depending on the medicine (and in some cases, the disease) he had been forced to take. He has left the box on few occasions, only to be allowed in another small area with a few leisure activities such as playing cards, tarot cards, a scrap of a page with a short story about a boy called "Padon" who found himself with wings, and a rubix cube. He has seen no other prisoners, and wonders if he really is the one hundred and eighth one, or if the white-suited people he sees are just trying to confuse him.

Appearance in the Story: He felt death nearing one day as he coughed a mouthful of blood, and tried harder then ever to escape. He managed to escape from the box when one section of it weakened, perhaps from corrosion, perhaps something else, he found himself in the middle of a city and began to run. He managed to steal some thick clothes and medicine from a house while the occupants slept and stumbled his way around looking for a place to hide, rest, attempt to heal, and perhaps die. He decided to call himself Padon, after the story, because it was the only name he really knew.

[Soul Legacy]

Great Chapter 1 ;)

[ragnarok1945]

Nah' date=' I would never do that in my fanfics.

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why not? You can even use that to lead to comedy scenes.

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

Anyone who liked my Character suggestions?

 

I really hope Omega will accept them.

[Soul Legacy]

I like M.A.R.I.A ;)

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

Well, as I said, I really hope he accepts them.

 

Do you think he will?