eyeofthedeck Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 new fan fic tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted October 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 im so excited so ill just post ep 1 now jake ran towards duel academy. he stopped at the front and entered. he found a seat and sat and watched a little kid duel against a proctor KID: I play polymerization and fuse avian and burstinatrix to summon elemental hero phoenix enforcer. now phoenix enforcer attack!!PROCTOR: not so fast!! i play my trap: sakuretsu armour!!! your attacking monster is destroyed!!!KID: i play a face down and end my turnPROCTOR: i draw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i play the spell card ookazi!!KIDS LP: 0000PROCTOR LP:300[end duel] PROCTER: next up... jake dupont jake walked to the duel field. JAKE + PROCTER: duel! JAKE LP: 4000PROCTOR LP:4000 JAKE: ill start! i summon skate boarding snake in attack mode(1500) next ill place 2 facedowns and ill end my turn.PROCTOR: i summon elemental hero the heat in attack mode! (1600) and now his ability activates and his attack increases to 1800. now attack!JAKE: i activate my trap: stacked it on a skateboard!! when one of the monsters on your side of the field attacks one of my monsters then your monster is destroyed!!PROCTOR: ok i play a face down and end my turn.JAKE: i play pot of greed!! now i draw 2 cards *draws cards* i play monster reborn! i bring back elemental hero the heat! (1600) now because of his effect he gains 200 attack! now i summon roller blading snake in attack mode (1800) now i sacrifice all three of my monsters to summon the ultimate rare limited edition skateboarding exodia!!!! (0) and now his effect activates! he gains double the attack points of all the monsters sacrificed to summon him *exodias attack points rise to 10200* now attack with speed skate charge!!PROCTOR: now magic cylinder activateJAKE: i wont let you coz when exodias on the field all your spell and traps are useless! JAKE LP:4000PROCTOR LP: -6200 PROCTOR: i guess your in jake. welcome to the academy.JAKE: thanks ???: woah that guys pretty good. hes perfect!! hehehehehehehehehehehehehehe to be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted October 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 bump... is my fan fic that bad??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted October 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 episode 2 is here jake had just put on his new obelisk blue jacket, when his rival, dean came JAKE: what do you want dean??DEAN: a duel!JAKE: a duel with you??? what a waste of my time. your a ra yellow. im obelisk blue! but anyway ill except your challenge. JAKE + DEAN: duel! JAKE LP:4000DEAN LP:4000 DEAN: ill go first! *draws* i summon cyber dragon in attack mode (2100) i end my turn.JAKE:*draws* i play the spell card change of heart to take control of your cyber dragon. next i play double summon. so i summon skate boarding snake (1500) and roller blading snake(1800). now i sacrifice all three of my monsters to summon skate boarding exodia!!!!!!!!! (0) but his effect makes him have double of the combined attack of the three sacrificed monsters *exodias attack points raise to 10800!!!* now skate boarding exodia attack with speed skate charge!!! JAKE LP:4000DEAN LP: -6800DEAN: noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo???: he is indeed the one to be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 Get better grammar, make episodes longer. get card effects right (cyber dragon), make duels more interesting and add more of a storyline to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted October 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2007 i will. soon you will find out who the mysterious stranger is. mehehehehehe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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