Yusei Fudou Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 Episode One: Darkness from Other DimensionEpisode One: Darkness from Other Dimension A man, dressed with a long black trench coat, too long messed black hair, and pure black eyes with a black hat is walking in the night protecting himself from rain with an umbrella, and the alley he's walking in is silent... Man: (How silent it is, reminds me of my old nights as a hunter..) The man hears then a foot step behind him, then turns back... Man: (So that's how it is... a new target, huh?) The man then takes out a gun out of his pocket, throws the umbrella.. and loads the gun then grins viciously Man: (Agent Mare Octavius's back.) The other man is hiding behind a wall, holding a gun, waiting for Mare to come. He wears a dark purple tuxedo, and has teal eye color and hair color. Then, when Mare arrives, he suddenly comes out with a gun threatening Mare, but Mare quickly raises his gun with his two hands and threats the man. Man 2: Hello, Maelstrom.. Mare: I'm no longer Maelstrom Clemons... you know, now I am Mare Octavius. Don't try with me, Cedrick. I now work for the 3rd Dimension. Cedrick: Dimension of Humans, huh? You betrayer.. you have betrayed your own dimension. Mare: You'll get over it. lowers his gun Dimension of duelists doesn't suit me anymore. And our dimension's forces are doing small attacks on this little defenseless dimension. Cedrick: Since when you've been too soft like that.. hmm? lowers his gun What is the reason of your betrayal, Maelstrom? Mare: Nothing much, really. grins meanly then laughs a deep laugh closing his eyes It's just fun.. laughs our selfish dimension. You're all trying to bully the weak, but when it comes to the 6th dimension... hehehe, you're scared off them. Plus, nobody wants to be a member of such a silly dimension, right? grins and raises his head Yeah, keep sending more forces, bro. I'll hunt them one by one.. Cedrick: laughs deeply No, brother. grins meanly Not this time. Cedrick's eyes glow teal, and he looks evil, then darkness rolls around his wrist and forms the figure of a duel disk, then it turns into a black duel disk with cards in it. - I'll do the job myself this time.. Mare: You'll fail like your minions summons darkness and it rolls around his wrist to form a dark black duel disk with cards in it Cedrick: Big brother, this duel, you'll be defeated. If I win, you'll return back with me. raises his duel disk Mare: OK. raises his duel disk Cedrick and Mare: Let's duel. both shuffle decks and draw 5 cards Cedrick: I'll go first. draws a card and looks at it Hehe. I summon Brron, Mad King of Dark World. (Brron, Mad King of Dark World|4|1800|400|When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, you can select 1 card in your hand and discard it to the Graveyard.) Then I will set 1 face-down card and end my turn... Mare: My turn, then. draws a card and looks at it Not bad. I'll set 1 face-down monster. Then I'll set 2 face-down cards and end my turn. Cedrick: It's my turn again, hmm? draws a card Now I'll summon another Brron, Mad King of Dark World. Then I'll attack your face-down with my first one! Mare: I reveal my face-down monster, Undercovered Hunter. (Undercovered Hunter|4|1000|1900|While this card is face-up on your side of the field in Attack Position, during your Main Phase, you can switch this card's Attack and Defense Points until the end of this turn.) That will deal 100 damage to you. Hehehe. Cedrick: 3900 LPMare: 4000 LP Cedrick: Nice move, hunter. I'll end my turn, hmm? Mare: Good. It's time for me to show you how skilled my hunters are.. draws a card Alright, now I'll summon another Undercovered Hunter in Attack Position! Then I'll activate my face-down Trap Card, Hunting Time! (Hunting Time|Normal Trap Card|You can only activate this card when you have a face-up 'Undercovered Hunter' on your side of the field in Attack Position. Special Summon 1 'Hunter' monster from your hand.) And I summon Double Hunter! (Double Hunter|4|1700|1400|While this card is face-up on your side of the field in Attack Position, during your Main Phase, you can switch this card's Attack and Defense Points until the end of your opponent's next turn. If you activate this effect, this card can attack twice this Battle Phase.) And I will switch all of my monsters' Attack and Defense Points! Muwhaha! Undercovered Hunters, attack his mad kings! Cedrick: 3700 LPMare: 4000 LP Cedrick: Nice attack.. but I will put my mad kings back into my hand with this card's effect! I flip my face-down card, The Forces of Darkness! (The Forces of Darkness|Normal Trap Card|Return 2 monsters from your Graveyard to your hand that include "Dark World" in their card names.) Mare: Nice, young bro. However, I wonder how your 'Dark World' monsters will deal with my 3 remaining hunters! Anyways, I'll continue my attacks, Double Hunter, attack him twice! Hehehe..Cedrick: 900 LPMare: 4000 LP Cedrick: I no longer call myself your bro, you betrayer.. pft.. Mare: I don't care, hehehe. I end my turn. Cedrick: It's my turn, hmm? draws a card and looks at it Yeah.. alright, I'll summon Brron, Mad King of Dark World again.. hmm, I think I'll then attack your Undercover Hunter with it..Cedrick: 900 LPMare: 3200 LP Mare: So..? Cedrick: My Brron's effect activates when I deal damage to your life points! I can discard 1 card from my hand! Hehe! I'll discard my Sillva then summon it! (Sillva, Warlord of Dark World|6|2300|1400|If this card is discarded from the hand to the Graveyard by a card effect, Special Summon this card to your side of the field. If this card is discarded from the hand to the Graveyard by your opponent's card effect, your opponent selects 2 cards in their hand, and returns them to the bottom of their Deck in any order.) Sillva, don't be easy on his weak Undercover Hunter! Blast him! Sillva's blade gets a dark aura then Sillva crushes Undercover Hunter by a vicious attack of the bladeCedrick: 900 LPMare: 1900 LP Cedrick: I end my turn.. it's your turn now, Maelstrom.. Mare: You're going to lose, Cedrick. draws a card and looks at it Hehehe. Yes you are really going to lose. I'll activate my Spell Card! Undercover Mission! (Undercover Mission|Normal Spell|Add 1 "Undercover Hunter" from your Deck to your hand. Then shuffle your Deck.) And I will summon my third Undercover Hunter. Then, I'll activate my face-down card, another Hunting Time.. hehehe. I'll play this from my hand.. Curse Hunter! (Curse Hunter|2|800|300|If there's 1 other face-up 'Hunter' monster on the field, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.) I'll activate Undercover Hunter's effect.. then I'll attack your Brron with it, decreasing your Life Points and destroying Brron.. Cedrick: 800 LPMare: 1900 LP Cedrick: How selfish.. now your little Curse Hunter is going to defeat my Sillva? Mare: No, not just him.. he's going to defeat you and all of your monsters. Cedrick: Hmm? Mare: Basically, Curse Hunter can attack directly when his friends are near.. Curse Hunter, attack him directly and finish this duel. Cedrick: 0 LPMare: 1900 LP Cedrick: So you've won, Maelstrom. Alright, I guess it's time for me to go.. Cedrick opens a dimension hole under him and goes in it, then the rain stops after he goes into his dimension Mare: Hehe, young brother. The 3rd dimension will be ready for you and your crazy mind. Mare walks away, grabs his umbrella and closes it, then puts it in his trench coat and carries his gun then loads it, then a limo comes to him, and someone from the back seat tells him 'Come on, Octavius'. Mare grins, then gets in the backseat of the limo. ---------------Episode FAQ Why is this episode.. shorter than your usual episodes of R-City, Mare?-A good fan-fiction starts with a small first episode. The format you're using in writing is different.. -Yeah. This is just for first episode. Next time it'll be like my usual. Who's Maelstrom?-Mare. Maelstrom is his original name in the 5th dimension, dimension of duelists. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 it is a cool Fan-Fic. You should improve your writing a bit. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted October 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 You mean my way of writing? I know, look at my R-City fanfic.. that's how I write.. just 1st episode of this one, 'thought I could make a change. ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 Cool, Mare :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted October 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 Hurray! =D You'll like next episode as you'll be in it Hehe, and it will be longer too =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Yusei Fudou Posted October 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2007 Episode 2: Exam Time! Part 1: Duelists from the 'Public' D.D.I.C. (Different Dimension Investigation Center) Headquarters ----------Woman: Alright, agent Octavius. Please meet Mr. Ambient at his meeting room. He is waiting for you.Mare: Hey, Sophie. Calm down. You don't have to be stressed like that all the time.Sophie: ... Agent Octavius, just go please. Mare: Just if I could tell you how beautiful you are, Sophie-girl.. *grins viciously winking*Sophie: Agent Octavius...Mare: Alright, fine. --Mr. Ambient: Hello, Agent Octavius.Mare: Hello, Mr. Ambient.Mr. Ambient: Call me Steven.. I'm just 23 years old.Mare: Alright. Steven: Go on. Tell me what happened between you and Cedrick Clemons.Mare: I assure you it's not something sexual.Steven: Um, OK. Please talk seriously.Mare: Yes, sir. As you know, Cedrick Clemons is my brother, and you already know I'm from the other dimension, the 5th. Well, we met up, he was holding a gun, and we both took the defensive formation.. and then we dueled on a bet if he could take me back to the dimension if he wins, and well, I won.Steven: Aha. Well good job, Agent Octavius. Our spies in the 5th dimension have noticed that Cedrick Clemons is planning a new plan to come with a small group of duelists here. Mare: A duelist team, you mean? Yes. I know of this tactic. Steven: I know of it, too. I have planned you a team to lead from the public.Mare: The public?! But, but--Steven: I understand your feeling.. guys from the public cannot be hired for VIMs. (Very Important Missions) But it's our new tactic. I've chosen randomly from the public. Mare: Why is that, sir?Steven: It's how we make spies for us between the public, so if there was something that dimension-strangers are dissing into people's minds, we could be informed of that, or if they are attacking from the inside.Mare: Yes, true.Steven: *opens a wide screen, then shows the info of the duelist team on it.* First duelist, Jerry Oldmaster. Jerry is the runner up of the Rum-Ball tournament which was later won by Ryan Doodler or Deadie, who holds that rank, currently, and is stuck in the virtual city R-City. So, basically, Jerry Oldmaster is the second best Gravekeeper user in the world. He also won two of the monthly tournaments designed by the Organization of Judgment held by a person with the same nickname you have, Mare Octavius, and got a ticket to a free duel disk by winning one of the weekly starter tournaments by KaibaCorp. This duelist indeed has a bright future.Mare: I see. Who's next?Steven: Maximus Creator. He uses gladiator beasts, and he's not a bad player. He was twice the runner-up of the Monthly Organization of Judgment tournament. Next is Titan Blake, he's a Destiny Hero user. He's moody, and he's skilled, he also uses the effects of the modern D-Heroes well. After that comes Victor Masters, he uses the Dark Paladin/Dragon strategy of Yugi Muto.Mare: Hmm. The strategy that defeated Seto Kaiba right?Steven: Indeed. He's a good player, and a skilled one, too. In fact, he's reached Semi Finals in the yearly KC tournament, and won his first tournament ever, the KC Starter weekly tournament. He also won a Judgment tournament, and a former Organization of Judgment member. He has left because of Mare Octavius's way of behaving..Mare: Erm.. my way of behaving?Steven: I meant the other one..Mare: Aha.. yeah. Who's next, then?Steven: Next is a player that simply refers to himself as 'George'. He uses an awesome One-Turn-Kill deck, and he's ranked #150 in Domino Town. That's near its Top 100Mare: Interesting. So when am I going to meet the team?Steven: Right now.Mare: Right now?!Steven: Yes, right now.Mare: Alright.Steven: *opens phone* Sophie.. please call the team. Sophie: Right away, sir. ---Later, Sophie comes with the teamSophie: Here's the team, Mr. Ambient.Steven: Please just call me Steven.. how hard is that?!Sophie: Sorry, sir.. Mare: Sophie, you look beautiful today.. hehe..Sophie: Yes thank you. *closes the door*Steven: Alright, gentlemen. This is your leader, Mare Octavius or Maelstrom Clemons. Maximus: My name's Maximus Creator~! And with my gladiator beasts, the other dimension will get... uh... gladiated! Steven: Yes.. thank you. *looks away* Now, please all get to your tests while me and Mr. Octavius will be watching you.Jerry: My Gravekeepers will own them! Titan: Bleh. Troublesome tests.. oh well. Victor: *looks at his cards in the duel disk* (I count on you, Paladin!)Maximus: The gladiation is about to start~!George: (Good. My O.T.K is ready. Skill is all I need.)---Testing RoomsSteven: Alright, gentlemen. You'll duel our center's testing duelists. They're high skilled and we will see how exactly skilled you are. So be ready to duel... 10... 9...Sophie joinsMare: Hey Sophie...Sophie: Hi. (Oh god.. what trouble did I get myself in?)Steven: 8... 7... 6.. 5.. 4.. 3.. 2.. 1.. DUEL!All duelists shout out 'DUEL!' and they all raise their duel disks and begin the duelsGeorge: Good luck. I don't think luck will help you against my strategy. *draws 5 cards* You can go first. Examiner 1: We'll see about that. *draws 5 cards* And thanks. *draws a card* I'll summon my Vorse Raider in Attack Mode! (Vorse Raider|4|1900|1200) And I'll set 1 face-down card and end my turn. George: Not bad. *draws a card and looks at it* But you're done. I'll activate Mystical Space Typhoon, targetting your face-down card. (Mystical Space Typhoon|Quick-Play Spell|Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. Examiner 1: Nice. You've just destroyed my Mirror Force.George: That's nothing. I'll now activate Advanced Ritual Art. (Advanced Ritual Art|Ritual Spell Card|Choose a Ritual monster from your hand, choose Normal monster(s) from your deck to the same level as that card and send them to Graveyard. Special Summon the chosen Ritual monster.) And I'll send two of my Insect Knights from the deck to the graveyard in order to summon, Demise, King of Armageddon! (Demise, King of Armageddon|8|2400|2000|This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "End of the World". By paying 2000 Life Points, destroy all cards on the field, except this card. But don't worry, I won't use its effect. Examiner 1: Huh? What will you do then? Attack normally?George: Not really 'normal', but yeah.. anyways I remove my two Insect Knights from play to Special Summon Doom Dozer! (Doom Dozer|8|2800|2600|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 Insect-Type monsters in your Graveyard. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, send 1 card from the top of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard. Then I'll decrease my Life Points by 2000 in order to activate my Dimension Fusion! (Dimension Fusion|Normal Spell Card|Pay 2000 Life Points. Both players Special Summon as many of their monsters as possible that have been removed from play.) And that will bring me back my 2 Insect Knights! (Insect Knight|4|1900|1500) George's LP: 2000 (-2000)Examiner's LP: 4000George: This will teach all people to never mess with me! Insect Knight 1, attack his Vorse Raider! Both monsters get destroyed - Demise, Dozer, attack his life points directly!George's LP: 2000Examiner's LP: 0 (4000-2800+2400)George: Good game, pal.Other side: Victor: Alright! I'll go first! *draws a card and looks at it* Aha! I summon my Skilled White Magician in defense position! (Skilled White Magician|4|1700|1900|Each time you or your opponent activates 1 Spell Card, put 1 Spell Counter on this card (max 3). Tribute this card with 3 Spell Counters on it to Special Summon 1 "Buster Blader" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.) Then, I'll set 1 face-down card and end my turn!Examiner 2: Alright. I set 1 face-down monster.Victor: I chain! I activate my face-down Trap Card! Pitch-Black Power Stone! (Pitch-Black Power Stone|Continuous Trap Card|After activation, put 3 Spell Counters on this card. During each of your turns you can move 1 of this card's Spell Counters to another face-up card on the field that you can put a Spell Counter on. When there are no Spell Counters on this card, this card is destroyed.) Examiner 2: Alright, I end my turn.Other side: Jerry: Aha! Let me show you how this game is played! *draws a card and looks at it* Great! I activate my Spell Card Terraforming! (Terraforming|Normal Spell Card|Add 1 Field Spell Card from your Deck to your hand.) And that allows me to add 1 field spell from my deck to my hand! I choose Necrovalley! Then, I'll activate it! (Necrovalley|Field Spell|As long as this card remains on the field, negate the effects of Spell, Trap and Monster Cards that affect a card(s) in the Graveyard and neither player can remove cards in the Graveyards from play. Also as long as this card remains on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all monsters that includes "Gravekeeper's" in their card name by 500 points.) And I'll set 1 face-down monster, 1 face-down card and end my turn!Examiner 3: Then it's my turn. I summon my Archfiend Soldier! (Archfiend Soldier|4|1900|1500) Archfiend Soldier, attack his face-down monster! Jerry: Ha! Bad move! I reveal my Gravekeeper's Spy! And its Defense points are increased by Necrovalley making them 2500! (2000+500=2500) (Gravekeeper's Spy|4|1200|2000|FLIP: Select 1 monster that includes "Gravekeeper's" in its card name with an ATK of 1500 or less from your Deck and Special Summon it in face-up Attack or Defense Position. The Deck is then shuffled.) Jerry's LP: 4000Examiner's LP: 3400Jerry: Oh and by the way it has a super cool effect! I can Special Summon 1 Gravekeeper monster from my deck onto my field! And I choose Gravekeeper's Spy, in Defense Mode!Examiner 3: Not bad.. I'll end my turn..Jerry: Alright! I'll change my spies to attack mode! (1700 ATK - 1200+500=700) And I'll summon Gravekeeper's Assailant! (Gravekeeper's Assailant|4|1500|1500|You can activate this card's effect only when "Necrovalley" is active on the field. When this card attacks, you can change the battle position of 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field.) (2000 ATK - 1500+500=2000) Assailant, attack his Archfiend Soldier!Examiner 3: Nice.Jerry's LP: 4000Examiner's LP: 3300Jerry: That's not all! Spies, attack him directly!Jerry's LP: 4000Examiner's LP: 0 (3300-1700*2)Jerry: Good game! *makes the Jaden move and winks*Other side:Maximus: Alright, let's get the gladiation on~! *draws a card and looks at it* Alright, I set 1 face-down card and end my turn!Examiner 4: So, it's my turn!From above:Steven: Who do you think has talents the most?Mare: Jerry. Steven: What about George? Mare: George has the secret in his deck. It doesn't follow a strategy that is fair to any deck, but Jerry uses the strategy well.Steven: I see. Well, they're both good. It's now left for Maximus and Victor. Mare: Wait, what about Titan?Steven: He told me that he will do it after this noise's gone. He seems very silent. Mare: Hmm. I see. At the next episode: Episode 3: Exam Time! Part 2: Team Maelstrom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted October 28, 2007 Report Share Posted October 28, 2007 W00t thank you! Behold one of the best fan fic's in the world :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Yusei Fudou Posted October 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 Episode 3: Exam Time! Part 2: Team Maelstrom 5th Dimension:-View: Cedrick standing on a rock, with wind blowing, the sky is dark purple, and duelists with different monster figures are gathering around Cedrick Cedrick: Now it's the time, my people! *eyes glow dark teal* It's time to begin our attack on this selfish 3rd dimension! And we'll destroy everyone who betrays us!Monster-Duelists: Attack! Attack! Attack! Behind a rock, there is a girl with white hair watching over Cedrick and his army of duelists.. she decides to run away but Cedrick feels something and turns to look at her escaping to a dimensional portal Cedrick: Silvia! Where are you going?!Silvia: To my other brother! Cedrick: She's a betrayer! *eyes glow and Cedrick grins viciously with sharp teeth appearing* Destroy her! Destroy the betrayer!Monster-Duelists: Destroy the betrayer! Destroy the betrayer!Silvia quickly enters the dimensional portal and closes it with a ring of light on her finger.Cedrick: (You'll pay for your betrayal, sister!) She's our first target! Muwhahaha! -----------Examination Room, D.I.I.C Mare: So, Sophie, how was your day?Sophie: *looks away* Could have been better. I have work to do, anyways. *goes away*Mare: Ah, that girl. *grins closing his eyes* She can never confess how she's attracted to me.Steven: *sweat drop*--Examiner 4: Alright, Mr. Creator! I summon Gene-Warped Warwolf! (Gene-Warped Warwolf|4|2000|100) Warwolf, attack his face-down monster! Maximus: I reveal my face-down monster! Gladial-Beast Hoplomus! (Gladial-Beast Hoplomus|4|700|2100|When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Gladial-Beast" monster, the original DEF of this card becomes 2400. If this card battles, by returning it from the field to the Deck at the end of the Battle Phase, Special Summon 1 "Gladial-Beast" monster from your Deck, except "Gladial-Beast - Hoplomus".) Hoplomus's defense points are higher than your warwolf's attack points, which means you'll get 100 points of damage! Examiner's LP: 3900Maximus's LP: 4000Examiner 4: And now I end my Battle Phase then--Maximus: Not yet! I activate Hoplomus's special effect at the end of the Battle Phase! I can return it to my deck in order to Special Summon 1 Gladial-Beast from my deck and I choose Gladial-Beast Laquer in attack mode! (Gladial-Beast Laquer|4|1800|400|When this card is successfully Special Summoned by the effect of a "Gladial-Beast" effect monster, the original ATK of this card becomes 2100. If this card battles, by returning it from the field to the Deck at the end of the Battle Phase, Special Summon 1 "Gladial-Beast" monster from your deck to your field, except "Gladial-Beast - Laquer".) And its original attack becomes 2100 by its effect!Examiner 4: Nice move.. well I end my turn!Maximus: Alright! *draws a card and looks at it* Ha! I summon Gladial-Beast Dichaeri! (Gladial-Beast Dichaeri|4|1600|1200|When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Gladial-Beast" monster, it can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. If this card battles, by returning it from the field to the Deck at the end of the Battle Phase, Special Summon 1 "Gladial-Beast" monster from your Deck, except "Gladial-Beast - Dichaeri".) Laquer, attack his Warwolf!Examiner's LP: 3800Maximus's LP: 4000Maximus: Dichaeri, attack him directly!Examiner's LP: 2200Maximus's LP: 4000Maximus: And now, at the end of the Battle Phase, I'll send back my Dichaeri to my deck in order to Special Summon Gladial-Beast Alexander! (Gladial-Beast Alexander|6|2400|600|This card cannot be special summoned except by the effect of "Gladial-Beast Dichaeri". When this card is successfully Special Summoned, while this card is face-up on your side of the field, it is unaffected by the effects of Magic Cards. If this card battles, by returning it from the field to the Deck at the end of the Battle Phase, Special Summon 1 "Gladial-Beast" monster other than "Gladial-Beast Alexander" from your deck to your field.) Then, I end my turn!Other side:Victor: Alright, now I'll activate my Pitch-Black Power Stone's effect, and move 1 Spell Counter to my Skilled White Magician! *1 of Skilled White Magician's 3 circles glows* Then I'll activate Pot of Greed! (Pot of Greed|Normal Spell|Draw 2 cards from your deck.) And that will increase my Magician's counters! *draws 2 cards* And now to the final spell! The Allied Forces! (The Allied Forces|Continuous Spell|Increase the ATK of all Warrior-Type monsters on your side of the field by 200 points for each face-up Warrior-Type and Spellcaster-Type monster on your side of the field.) Now that my Skilled White Magician has 3 Spell Counters, I'll use its effect to sacrifice it and summon Buster Blader! (Buster Blader|7|2600|2300|The ATK of this card increases by 500 points for every Dragon-Type monster on your opponent's side of the field and Graveyard.) (2800 ATK (A Forces)) Then I'll summon Spear Dragon from my hand! (Spear Dragon|4|1900|0|When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent’s Life Points. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step.) And now, Spear Dragon, attack his face-down card!Examiner 2: I reveal my Sangan! (600 DEF) I'll now add one monster with 1500 ATK or less from my deck to my hand and I choose my Snipe Hunter!Victor: Not bad, but you'll lose Life Points thanks to my Spear Dragon's effect! It inflicts piercing damage!Examiner's LP: 2700 (-1300)Victor's LP: 4000 Victor: Sorry but you won't be able to play with your Snipe Hunter because my Buster Blader with 2800 ATK points is attacking your Life Points, meaning that you will lose!Examiner 2: Good move! *gets slashed by Buster Blader*Examiner's LP: 0 (2700-2600+200=0)Victor's LP: 4000Victor: Yessir! The heart of the cards is always on my side!Other side:Titan: Hey you, examiner! Examiner 5: Huh?Titan: I'm ready.. bleh.Examiner 5: Alright then! Your examination starts! Titan vs. Examiner: DUEL~!Titan: I'll go first, if you don't mind. I want to finish this rubbish quickly. *draws a card and looks at it* I'll play Destiny Draw, and I'll discard my Destiny Hero - Disk Commander in order to draw 2 cards from my deck. (Destiny Draw|Normal Spell|Discard 1 "Destiny Hero" monster. Draw 2 cards from your deck. *draws 2 cards and looks at them* Hmm. I'll set 1 face-down monster, 2 face-down cards and end my turn.Examiner 5: It's my turn, then! *draws a card and summons it quickly* I summon Enraged Battle Ox! (Enraged Battle Ox|4|1700|1200|As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, when Beast, Beast-Warrior, and Winged Beast-Type monsters on your side of the field attack with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your opponent's Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.) And this monster is a Beast-Warrior! Which means, by its own effect, it will inflict you piercing damage! Anyways, attack his face-down card Battle Ox! Titan: I reveal my Destiny Hero - Fear Monger.. by its special effect I can summon 1 Destiny Hero monster from my graveyard on my next Standby Phase except Fear Monger.. (Destiny Hero - Fear Monger|4|1000|1000|If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard Special Summon 1 "Destiny Hero" monster from your Graveyard (except a "Destiny Hero - Fear Monger") during your next Standby Phase.) Examiner 5: Damage will be still inflicted to your Life Points! 700 points of damage! After that, I end my turn. Examiner's LP: 4000Titan's LP: 3300Titan: Pft. You're wasting everyone's time here, don't ya notice? *draws a card* Now at my Standby Phase, I'll summon back my Destiny Hero - Disk Commander from the graveyard, thanks to Fear Monger's effect.. (Destiny Hero - Disk Commander|1|300|300|When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, draw 2 cards.) And when my Disk Commander's Special Summoned from the graveyard, I can draw 2 cards from my deck. *draws 2 cards* Then now I'll move to my Standby Phase. I'll activate another Destiny Draw, and I'll discard my Destiny Hero - Malicious in order to draw 2 more cards. *draws 2 cards* Then, look at this. I'll first tribute my Disk Commander in order to bring my Destiny Hero - Dasher! (Destiny Hero - Dasher|6|2100|1000|Once per turn, by Tributing 1 monster this card gains 1000 ATK until the end of this turn. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. While this card is in the Graveyard, once time only, when you draw a Monster Card during your Draw Phase you can show it to your opponent and Special Summon it.) Then I'll activate my face-down Call of the Haunted, in order to bring me back my Disk Commander! Again, I draw 2 cards. *draws 2 cards* I'll now set 3 face-down cards, then I'll activate my Destiny Hero - Malicious's effect, I'll remove it from play from my graveyard in order to Special Summon one from my deck! (Destiny Hero - Malicious|6|800|800|By removing from play this card while it's in your graveyard, select 1 'Destiny Hero - Malicious' from your deck, and special summon it.) Now, Dasher, attack his Battle Ox!Examiner's LP: 3600Titan's LP: 3300Titan: Disk Commander, Malicious! Attack directly!Examiner's LP: 2500 (-1100)Titan's LP: 3300Titan: I end my turn. Other side:Examiner 4: Back to my turn! I'll set 1 face-down position monster and 1 face-down card then end my turn! Maximus: I'm tired of you! *draws a card and looks at it then summons it quickly* I summon Gladial-Beast - Bestorourii! (Gladial-Beast Bestorourii|4|1500|800|When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Gladial-Beast" monster, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. If this card battles, by returning it from the field to the Deck at the end of the Battle Phase, Special Summon 1 "Gladial-Beast" monster from your Deck, except "Gladial-Beast - Bestorourii".) Now, Laquer, attack his Defense Position monster!Examiner 4: I chain my Sakuretsu Armor! Maximus: Foolish fool! You destroyed my Laquer but you're unaware that I have a strong monster like Alexander, and you wasted the chance to destroy it! What an examiner! Bestorourii, attack his face-down monster! Spear Dragon gets destroyedMaximus: I thought so... just strong ATK monsters, eh? Seems you don't focus on the defense much! Well, your end is now! Alexander, attack him directly! Examiner's LP: 0 (2200-2400)Maximus's LP: 4000Examiner 4: Hmph. Nice. Do not make fun of my skills as an examiner.Maximus: Don't worry, I think I'm still a starter too. ^^;Examiner 4: (Geez, who said I'm a starter?)Other side:Examiner 5: It's my turn!Titan: Geez, just go already.Examiner 5: You asked for it.. boy. I summon Gene-Warped Warwolf! (Gene-Warped Warwolf|4|2000|100) Attack his Dasher!Titan: Unaware of 4 face-down cards that your monster might get destroyed off? Examiner 5: *sweats* Damn.. I stop my attack. I end my turn.Titan: Stupid examiner. *draws a card* You're not a good examiner over there. Know why? There's something called never waste the advantage! But no, I play mind games to distract you and you're like a chimp responding to what I'm telling you. Minus 1 Advantage Point, please. Anyways, without much blabbering, I summon my Destiny Hero - Diamond Dude! (Destiny Hero - Diamond Dude|4|1400|1600|While this card is face-up on your side of the field, once per turn you can look at the top card of your deck. If the card is a Normal Spell Card, send it to the Graveyard and you can activate the Normal Spell Card during your Main Phase of your next turn. If the card is not a Normal Spell Card, place it on the bottom of your Deck.) And I return my Dasher to attack mode! Dasher, attack his warwolf!Examiner's LP: 2400Titan's LP: 3300Titan: You're done for now, stupid. Diamond Dude, Malicious, Disk Commander, D-Hero Triple Attack!Examiner's LP: 0 (2400-1400+800+300(2500)=0)Titan's LP: 3300Mare: (Advantage.. yes, that is what you taught me, dear master Alden)Steven: Well, gentlemen, I'm quite impressed. All of you have passed the exams!George: A good combo + a good deck = victory.Jerry: Woohoo! Gravekeepers rule!Titan: Eh. Easy and time-wasting game against that loser. Maximus: Go Gladiation!Victor: I could have never accomplished that without my dear Buster Blader *looks at his deck with confidence* (I now believe in what you say, Yugi Muto, and someday, we will meet!)Steven: Alright, gentlemen. Now it's time for Mr. Octavius, or Clemons, to arrange you by rating. Mare gets down by an elevatorMare: Alright. This is how's the team going to be arranged. I'm going to divide the team into several parts. First, my apprentices. And surely, I'll choose Jerry and George as my two apprentices. They do wonderful OTKs, and have excellent decks and skills. Next part will be Victor and Titan, they will be in the second line, and lastly, for backup, Maximus.Maximus: Hey, what is that supposed to mean?!Mare: Nothing. I just arranged you fair and square. Plus you're the one who said that he's a starter. *looks away* Ready, people?George: Me and my deck are always ready.Jerry: Me too. The Gravekeepers will bring us victory!Victor: Heart of the Cards, let us win!Titan: These enemies won't be even a match for my skill.Maximus: Gladial backup~! Yeah!Mare: Everybody, shout, Team Maelstrom! Team Maelstrom: *put hands together united then raise their hands shouting* Team Maelstrom!! ---Later - Domino Streets, Dark Alleys - 12:35 AM Mare: (I have a skilled team on my side, and the D.I.C.C is good, I don't expect anything bad happening this day...)Voice of Silvia: Leave me alone, you freaks!Mare: (Silvia?) *picks his gun and loads it, then walks carefully to the alley he heard the voice from, then finds two demon humanoids with duel disks trapping Silvia, he comes out with the gun from behind the wall* Freeze, idiots! Didn't your mummy tell you to not pick on girls?Demon Humanoid #2: I'm Drakeon!Demon Humanoid #1: And I'm Danzald~! Mare: *shoots* Leave, whoever you are! Silvia, come quicklyDrakeon and Danzald escape from the bullet so Silvia gets the chance to escape and gets back to Mare, he hugs her and tells her if she's fine, and she replies 'Yes'Mare: I'm going to take you two on!Silvia: Don't do that, bro!Mare: Huh?!Silvia: Because I'll be dueling them too!Drakeon: Then it's a tag duel?!Danzald: Hahaha, how I love tag duels! Mare: Yes, it's a tag duel, ready, sis?Silvia: I'm ready, bro!Mare & Silvia VS Drakeon & Danzald: DUEL~! (4000 LP for each)Mare: I've prepared the right deck.Silvia: Hehe. ^^ Next time on Yu-Gi-Oh! War of Dimensions: Episode 4: The Tag Duel of Siblings! Brother + Sister vs. Brother + Brother! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted October 29, 2007 Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 NICE!! Very nice, Mare ^^You're without doubt the best fan fic maker on here :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted October 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 LOOOL! Thank you, really, ^.^ I appreciate it. I just hope.. Remix comes to see this fanfic and rates this. ^^ I want ideas from a pro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted October 29, 2007 Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 now that i read more i see, you are a perfect writer! Your fan-fic rocks! Continue this way! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted October 29, 2007 Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 NICE!! Very nice' date=' Mare ^^You're without doubt the best fan fic maker on here :)[/quote'] I second thatnice ep man, I already wish that the new episode was out, YOUR FAN-FIC IS JUST SO DAMN ADDICTIVE(In an good way) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted October 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 Guys, you inspire me.. ^^ I'll post Ep. 4 for you tomorrow ASAP, and if I can't, it will be out after tomorrow, but I'm not making the length any longer! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted October 29, 2007 Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 pretty good i might say and looooooooooooooooooooong too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted October 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 The longer, the better. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted October 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2007 Here, WoD's fans, a new episode! Episode 4: The Tag Duel of Siblings! Brother + Sister vs. Brother + Brother! Mare & Silvia vs. Drakeon & Danzald: DUEL~! *raise duel disks and 5 cards drawn*Mare: I'll go first. *draws a card and looks at it* Hmm. Alright, I set 2 face-down cards, then set a face-down monster and end my turn.Drakeon: It's my turn, then! *draws a card* I'll start by summoning Spear Dragon! (Spear Dragon|4|1900|0|When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent’s Life Points. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step.) Then I'll set 1 face-down card and end my turn.Silvia: My turn! *draws a card and looks at it* Aha. I activate The Sanctuary in the Sky! (The Sanctuary in the Sky|Field Spell|Battle Damage to the controller of a Fairy-Type monster from a battle involving that Fairy-Type monster becomes 0.) I'll set 1 face-down card, then I'll summon my Harvest Angel of Wisdom! (Harvest Angel of Wisdom|4|1800|1000|When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 Counter Trap from your Graveyard to your hand.) After that, I end my turn!Danzald: My turn, then? Hehe. *draws a card* I'll summon my Luster Dragon! (Luster Dragon|4|1900|1600) Then I'll set 2 face-down cards and attack Silvia's harvest angel!Silvia: I respond with my face-down counter trap card! Negate Attack! (Negate Attack|Counter Trap|You can only activate this card when your opponent's monster declares an attack. Negate the attack of that 1 monster and end the Battle Phase.) Drakeon: Not bad, little brother. It's OK. Silvia: He's your brother?Drakeon: Yes. He is my brother. Me and Danzald are orphans. Our father Zaldeon died in a war against the 3rd Dimension... long ago, our long-living species had a war with the army forces of the 3rd Dimension. The 5th Dimension had victory in its hands, however, the 3rd Dimension's secret soldiers on horseback attacked a squad from the 5th Dimension's demon army, and killed it all. The leader of that squad, who also died, was our father Zaldeon. Mare: You stupid, 5th Dimensionals.. you bullied on other dimensions, and lost alot in the war already. Pft. No wonder I don't want to be a part of your silly dimension.. even if it's my origin.Danzald: Shut up! Our father was the greatest squad leader, and you betrayer, you follow the dimension that killed my father! I'm not going to forgive you, never!Drakeon: Here, Maelstrom Clemons.. another bet on our duel! If you win, you could have your sister back in this dimension, and take our rarest 2 cards, but if you lose, we'll take your sister back to Master Cedrick, and you will follow us!Mare: Hehehe, you two are just like your father. I will get rid of you as soon I'm done. You think you'll have victory? False! Instead of blaming me because of your father's failure in bullying a dimension, try stopping to bully my little sister who's from YOUR dimension! Danzald: We will follow our father's steps! *points at Mare* We will never betray our dimension like you and your little sister did! Anyways, I end my turn.Mare: Like your turn has ended, hehehe, you will be ended, too. *draws a card and looks at it* Hmm, nice. I tribute my face-down Layard the Liberator in order to summon Airknight Parshath! (Airknight Parshath|4|1900|1400|When this card attacks with an ATK higher than teh DEF of your opponent's Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, draw 1 card from your Deck.) Then, I'll equip my Airknight Parshath with this card, Cestus of Dagla! (Cestus of Dagla|You can only equip this card to a Fairy-Type monster. Increase the ATK of a monster equipped with card by 500 points. When the monster equipped with this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, increase your Life Points by an equal amount.) And it will raise my Parshath's attack points by 500, making them 2400! (1900+500=2400) Now, Airknight Parshath, attack his silly Spear Dragon!Drakeon: I chain my Sakuretsu Armor! (Sakuretsu Armor|Normal Trap|You can only activate this card when your opponent declares an attack. Destroy the attacking monster.) Now your Airknight will be destroyed!Mare: False, your Sakuretsu Armor will be destroyed!Drakeon: Huh?!Mare: I chain my face-down Counter Trap Card, Trap Jammer! (Trap Jammer|Counter Trap|You can only activate this card when your opponent activates a Trap Card during the Battle Phase. Negate the activation of the Trap Card & destroy it.) When you activate a trap card during the Battle Phase, my Trap Jammer will negate it! Hehehe! Parshath, continue your attack! Drakeon: Ugh! Drakeon's LP: 3500Mare's LP: 4500Drakeon: Wait! How did your Life Points increase?!Mare: It's simple. By the effect of Cestus of Dagla, when my Airknight inflicts battle damage to you, I can increase my Life Points by the same amount! (4000+500=4500) Also, here my Parshath's effect activates! When it inflicts Battle damage to your Life Points, I can draw 1 card from my deck! *draws 1 card and looks at it* Hehehe. And with that, I end my turn.Drakeon: Hmph. Nice. Well it's my turn then! *draws a card and looks at it* Ha! I activate Premature Burial! By paying 800 Life Points, I can summon 1 monster from my graveyard! (Premature Burial|Equip Spell|Pay 800 life points. Select 1 Monster Card from your Graveyard, Special Summon it on the field in face-up Attack Position, and equip it with this card. When this card is destroyed, the monster is also destroyed.) And I summon back my Spear Dragon!Drakeon's LP: 2700Mare's LP: 4500Mare: Hahaha, the loser dragon's back. How scared I am.Drakeon: You will be scared! Because, I tribute it to summon Luster Dragon #2! (Luster Dragon #2|6|2400|1400) Mare: Hehehe. My Airknight Parshath has equal powers with your Luster Dragon. I doubt you're going to destroy your dragon for that.Drakeon: You're right, I won't! Your Airknight will no longer have equal powers to my dragon after I activate this card! Stamping Destruction! (Stamping Destruction|Normal Spell|You can only activate this card only when you have a face-up Dragon-Type monster on your side of the field. Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field to inflict 500 points of damage to the controller of that card.) And I target your Cestus of Dagla! Mare: I respond to that with my other face-down Counter Trap Card! Magic Jammer! (Magic Jammer|Counter Trap|Discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to negate the activation of a Magic Card and destroy it.) And now, by discarding a card from my hand *discards a Harvest Angel of Wisdom* I can negate the effect of your spell card! Drakeon: Grr! These annoying counter traps! Anyways, I attack your sister's harvest angel with my Luster Dragon!Silvia: (Yes!) Drakeon's LP: 2700Silvia's LP: 4000Drakeon: Huh?! Why don't you get any damage?!Silvia: It's because of my Sanctuary! I do not get damage if you destroy my fairies, simply! And my harvest angel's effect will now activate! When it's destroyed by battle, I can add 1 counter trap from my graveyard to my hand, and I surely choose my Negate Attack! *adds her Negate Attack back to her hand* Drakeon: Grr, you and your counter traps! I end my turn!Silvia: It's my turn then! *draws a card and looks at it* Alright, I set 2 face-down cards, then I summon my Zeradias, Herald of Heaven! (Zeradias, Herald of Heaven|4|2100|800|You can discard this card to the Graveyard to add 1 "The Sanctuary in the Sky" from your Deck to your hand. If this card is on the field and "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is not on the field, destroy this card. Zeradias, attack Danzald's Luster Dragon!Danzald's LP: 3800Silvia's LP: 4000Danzald: Hmph! You will not win this! Drakeon: If you don't improve yourself, brother, we might lose this duel!Danzald: Who asked you to share your opinion already?! Silvia: Calm down already. I end my turn.Danzald: My turn! *draws a card and looks at it* Alright, I'll set 1 face-down monster, 1 face-down card, and then I'll end my turn!Drakeon: You better do something better than that, next time!Danzald: I do whatever I want to do, you loser!Mare: Back to my turn! Hehehe. Seems the brothers are quarreling. Not bad, not bad at all, hehehe. *draws a card and looks at it: Neo-Parshath* Hmm, nice. I summon Meltiel, Sage of the Sky! (Meltiel, Sage of the Sky|4|1600|1200|Each time a Counter Trap is activated, gain 1000 Life Points, and if "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is on the field, destroy 1 card your opponent controls.) And then, I'll tribute my Airknight Parshath (Cestus of Dagla destroyed) in order to Special Summon Neo-Parshath, the Sky Paladin by its own effect! (Neo-Parshath, the Sky Paladin|7|2300|2000|You can Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 "Airknight Parshath". During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower then the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, draw 1 card. While "The Sanctuary of the Sky" is on your field and your Life Points are higher then your opponent's, this card gains ATK and DEF equal to the difference in Life Points.) Go! And by its effect, thanks to my sister's sanctuary, its Attack Points will increase by the difference between my and your Life Points, making its ATK points 4100! (2300+4500-2700=4100/2300+1800=4100) Neo-Parshath, attack Luster Dragon!Drakeon: Brother! Protect me!Danzald: No!Drakeon: For the sake of our father! Danzald: Just for his sake! I reveal my face-down Trap Card, Mirror Force! (Mirror Force|Normal Trap|When an opponent's monster attacks, negate the attack and destroy all opponent's monsters in Attack Position.) Silvia: And I reveal one too, to protect my brother!Danzald, Drakeon, Mare: Huh?!Silvia: I reveal my face-down counter trap Trap Jammer! It will negate your Mirror Force, Danzald! And then, my brother's attack can continue safely! Mare: Thanks, sis, and also, Meltiel's effect activates, and with it I'll help my sister by destroying Danzald's face-down monster! This is how I return the favor, sister! ^^ And my Life Points are raised by 1000 too!Silvia: Thanks bro! ^^Mare: Go, Neo-Parshath, attack his Luster Dragon!Drakeon's LP: 1000 (-1700)Mare's LP: 5500Mare: And now my Neo-Parshath's attack will raise even more! It will raise by 1700, making it 5800! Then, Meltiel, attack Drakeon and finish him! Drakeon's LP: 0 (-1600)Mare's LP: 5500 Mare: Now that Drakeon's finished, our only target becomes Danzald! *draws a card because of Neo-Parshath's effect* And with that my Neo-Parshath's attack will go down to 3000 after Danzald became my target! (2300+700=3000)Drakeon: Young brother.. don't fail me.. don't fail our father..Danzald: I'm only dueling for his sake.. not for your sake, loser.Drakeon: *opens eyes wide* D-Danzald.. I'm your brother..Danzald: Then respect me! Drakeon: I-I respect you, bro..Danzald: No you don't! Drakeon: ... *opens his eyes wide, and tears fall from his eyes*Danzald: My turn.. *draws a card and looks at it* Excellent, hahahaha! Mare and Silvia: What?!Danzald: I activate my Spell Card! Lightning Vortex! This will destroy all of your monsters, by just discarding 1 card from my hand! *discards a Cave Dragon*(Lightning Vortex|Normal Spell|Discard 1 card from your hand. Destroy all face-up monsters on your opponent's side of the field.) Mare: Tell me, sis, you have a Magic Jammer face-down right?!Silvia: Not really..Mare: Then.. no way!Danzald: Yes way!The vortex sucks Zeradias, Neo-Parshath and Meltiel and lightning bolts in the vortex cause to destroy themMare: Neo-Parshath, Meltiel..Silvia: Zeradias...Danzald: Yes! Now, I summon my Masked Dragon! (Masked Dragon|4|1400|1100|When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster with an ATK of 1500 or less to your side of the field from your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck.) And then I'll activate my Stamping Destruction to destroy your face-down card, Silvia! And with its effect you'll get 500 points of damage!Silvia: My Negate Attack!Silvia's LP: 3500Danzald's LP: 3800Danzald: Masked Dragon, attack her life points directly!Silvia: Ugh!Silvia's LP: 2100Danzald's LP: 3800Danzald: Hehe, after that, I end my turn!Mare: Nobody ever harms my sister as long as I'm alive.. *gets angry with glowing red eyes* And you will see how! *draws a card and plays it immediately* I summon Harvest Angel of Wisdom! (1800/1200) Then I'll play Premature Burial to return back my Neo-Parshath! And it will have 3200 ATK!Mare's LP: 4700Danzald's LP: 3800 Mare: Harvest Angel, don't have mercy with his Masked Dragon!Harvest Angel: *looks back then talks to Mare in his mind* Mare, are you sure?Mare: Attack!Harvest Angel loads a lot of power and destroys Masked Dragon with itMare's LP: 4700Danzald's LP: 3400Danzald: I summon another Masked Dragon.. in defense position.Mare: My Neo-Parshath's ATK is now 3600! Neo-Parshath, attack!Neo-Parshath looks back at Mare, then flies to attack Mare's LP: 4700Danzald's LP: 900 (-2500)Danzald: Wait! My monster was in defense position, how do I get damage? Anyways I summon another Masked Dragon in defense position!Mare: Simple! It's the effect of my Neo-Parshath! And now its ATK will raise by 3800, making it 7200! Also, I'll draw 1 card from my deck, thanks to Neo-Parshath's effect. *draws a card* I end my turn! *returns back to normal*Silvia: Don't worry, brother, I have got the right card *draws a card and looks at it* I'll remove from play my Zeradias and Harvest Angel from my graveyard, in order to special summon Soul of Purity and Light! (Soul of Purity and Light|6|2000|1800|This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard from play. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, decrease the ATk of all monsters on your opponent's side of the field by 300 points during his/her Battle Phase.) And then, I'll summon Meltiel Sage of the Sky! Meltiel, attack his Masked Dragon! Meltiel destroys the Masked Dragon, and Danzald doesn't summon anythingDanzald: (I don't have any weaker dragons in my deck anymore, I seem to have 2 of them in my hand..) Silvia: You destroyed yourself! Soul of Purity and Light, attack him directly!Danzald: AHHH!Danzald's LP: 0Silvia's LP: 2100 Mare: Good work, sis. Now, you two. *looks at Drakeon and Danzald lying on the ground defeated then walks to them, picks his gun and loads it then points it at them* I know that Zaldeon was never a good leader in unity. He always wanted to be on his own, like you two, you have been acting like him well. However, you haven't experienced one thing that he has.. it's death. And now, you'll experience it! *eyes turn glowing red then Mare laughs viciously then shoots them with his gun madly* A ball of darkness then falls on Silvia but Mare quickly gets her away and they both look aboveCedrick (Same outfit and hair, but the outfit is cut and Cedrick's in a demon form): Hahaha, Silvia and Maelstrom, you betrayers, I'll get rid of you soon! *laughs then fades away, while Silvia starts to cry*Silvia (crying): Why, Maelstrom.. why is it being all bad like that all for a sudden..? Why can't we have Cedrick back? Why our dimension's truth has to be harsh like that..?Mare: *hugs Silvia* Don't worry, sis. I won't let them harm you, and I promise you this will end as soon as possible. Next time, Episode 5: Jerry vs. Jinzo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zane trusedale Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 oh man this fantic rules Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 See, I commented. Seen the film "Back to the Future?"Well, I commented this episode in the future :lol:... Good episode.... And 5 sounds bad O_O Like Zane said, this fan fic is the best on YCM....., Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted October 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 Thanks ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 nice ep man, I am guessing that OldMaster will like your next episode Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted November 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2007 Episode 5: Jerry vs. Jinzo DICC Headquarters-----------------------Mare: Hey Sophie.Silvia: Hi..?Sophie: What do you want? And who's that?Mare: Relax, Sophie, relax. It's just my sister.Sophie: You're not authorized to bring relatives or friends into the DICC. You may be fired.Mare: Oh, relax baby. My sister is an ally and a witness of my last battle.Sophie: Fine. *opens speaking machine* Mr. Ambient, Agent Octavius has came with his sister and he says she's an ally, and also a witness of his last battle and they wish to enter your office.Steven (Speaking Machine): I'm no Mr. Ambient, it's Steven damn this. Enter them to my office as they wish. Sophie: But Mr. Ambient..Steven (Speaking Machine): With no buts. Agent Octavius is a special case. And for the last time, it's Steven!Sophie: Fine. Get in already. *looks away*Silvia: By the way.. Sophie..Sophie: Hm?Silvia: Why are you too stressed like that? It was rude.Sophie: Sorry.. that's what DICC tells me to do. I work like that.Silvia: This dimension's weird.Mare: Come, sister. Sophie's always like that. She never wants to show her attraction to me so she acts like that.Silvia: Oh, stop that. *giggles then enters the office with Mare*Sophie: (I HATE these Clemons.)-----5th DimensionCedrick: Revenging for their father.. they forgot the goal. Pft. Silly. Guards, call Jinzo!Beast Guards: As you wish!The beast guards go to call JinzoCedrick: Hehehe. Since Jinzo was defeated by Jaden Yuki and sent to the shadow realm, we received his body and reprogrammed him. Since then, his only target is Maelstrom. Hehehe. Jinzo: *bows* Yes. Master. I'm here now.Cedrick: *looks back at Jinzo* Perfect. Let's begin the chaos. Muwhahahaha!-----DICC - Steven Ambient's OfficeSteven: Hello, Mare and Silvia, I guess.Silvia: Yes... that's my name.. Silvia. How did you know?Steven: We've been gathering information about the Clemons family since Cedrick started the new secret war.Silvia: I see..Mare: The past.. oh the past. It leaves the scar in us all, but the brave one is who fights it. When me and Silvia were teens and Cedrick was a child, Cedrick was bullied by rock students. We had a happy brotherhood with Cedrick but he didn't tell me about the bullies. Then, he acted on his own and used dark magic to kill them all.. brutally. He was expelled from the magic school then. When we returned home, our parents haven't talked to him and kept punishing him. He was all alone because me and Silvia didn't talk to him again. We ignored him since he made that mistake, and nobody in the town respected him. He was left alone by people, nobody talked to him and constantly ignored him. After a while with this all, he didn't love or respect any of his family, not me, Silvia or our parents. He started acting out then, using magic to demolish the house. Luckily, our parents survived it while me and Silvia were at school. When we returned, we found him doing this. Silvia couldn't stand herself but cried and looked how Cedrick has turned completely dark, and didn't apologize or realize that he's mistaken after all. Then she said she would wake him up and used white magic to hit him and making him injuried. Cedrick was even darker, and responded then with dark magic to my sister then ran away and turned back to us to tell us 'I will avenge myself!'. Steven: What happened after..? Is now the time where he returns?Mare: Not really. He returned after a few years, with new demon friends. He also brought guards from the 6th Dimension. When towns and the whole dimension seen this terror, the dimension was under his control.. I tried to spy on him, and he went to a dark gem then held it and touched it softly then said 'Now's the time!' and flew in the air with new demon wings and look, and shot a ball of darkness on me, but I quikcly opened a Dimensionhole to this dimension. I needed to help my dimension but I soonly find out that all of them has turned dark because of their selfishness and resigning and fear from any 6th Dimension force. Since then, I thought this dimension was selfish and silly, it was better to fight it than help it, because this situation in it can never be helped. Steven: I see.. so if your dimension would be awakened from its darkness maybe you can return to it?Mare: Maybe. I don't trust them anymore. They could fall in darkness anytime with their selfishness.Steven: I see. So which dimension do you support now? Mare: The 3rd Dimension.Steven: Good. It's comforting to know that you will not betray us for another dimension. Mare: Yeah. I'm no traitor.---------That's what he says, but currently in the 5th Dimension:Demonized Peopel: Kill the betrayer Maelstrom! Kill the betrayer Maelstrom! Long Live Cedrick! Long Live Cedrick!Cedrick: (Hahahaha, this dimension is completely under my control. *grins*)---------Domino Beach, Domino City - 4:30 PMMare: My Clemons sense is feeling something here. Team Maelstrom, I'll separate you. Me and Jerry and Silvia, will go straight, while Maximus and Titan will stay for backup around here, George to west and Victor to east. Basically, backup is in south, main team heading north, and George to west while Victor to east. Team Maelstrom, separate!Team Maelstrom: 1...2...3... GO!Silvia (running): So what could be this dark feeling, bro?Mare (running): It's simply another villain sent by Cedrick.. we must keep our eye on the dark forces sent here.Jerry (running): How do you feel that there's a dark force?Mare: Simply. We, the species of Clemons, have several abilities. We look like humans, but we have improved duel energy and we can load any deck into a dark duel disk that is summoned by our special bloodline dark magic by the snap of fingers. Also, whenever there is a dimension portal opened in the dimension we're in, we sense where it is. And we have improved dark magic, also females born in our species usually have light powers from heaven. Jerry: Interesting, so like females in your species are angels, and males..?Mare: A rare number of our males have demonic powers. So basically, yes, you could say some males are demons and most females are angels in our species.Jerry: Interesting.. really. I always wanted to be like that..Mare: You could be if you're bit by a Clemon vampyre.Jerry: Clemon vampyre..?Mare: I'll tell you later about them.. now let's keep searchingJerry: Yes, sir! Silvia: Brother, look at that huge guy there *points at a big guy wearing a trenchcoat and hat and all* I feel something about him!Mare: Me too, it's our Clemon sense. *stops running* Watch this, *picks his gun and loads it then fires it at the big guy* You're done!Big Guy: Wrong! *dodges the bullet with his mechanical hand then takes off the trenchcoat and hat to show himself, Jinzo*Jerry: Wait! Isn't that the monster Jinzo?!Jinzo: Yes. I'm no ordinary monster. Though. I'm Cyborg-Tech-001. Known as Jinzo.Jerry: Wow! I wonder how it is to duel you!Jinzo: My target is Maelstrom Clemons. *loads dark duel disk* Target found. Will him or any apprentice please come to duel.Mare: You can go for it, Jerry..Jerry: Really?Mare: Yeah. I know you can defeat him, you're excited about dueling a monster.. and you're my first apprentice.Jerry: Awesome! Then we'll duel!Jinzo: Duel setup. Jinzo vs. Target's Apprentice 001. *draws 5 cards* 5 cards drawn.Jerry: Halloweenish! *raises his duel disk and draws 5 cards* Let's do this!Jinzo: Hologramic-Dice 1.0 activated. A dice hologram appears and dropsJinzo: It's first my roll. The dice falls on number 2.Jerry: What a weak chance for you! Ha! Roll dice!The dice falls on number 1.Jerry: That's cheating!Jinzo: No. No cheating system found in Hologramic-Dice 1.0. Jerry: Yeah right! Jinzo: I choose to go first. *draws a card and looks at it* Set 1 face-down monster. Turn end.Jerry: Draw! *draws a card and looks at it then suddenly discards it* I'll discard this Gravekeeper's Commandant, which by its effect I can discard it to add 1 Necrovalley from my deck to hand. Then I'll activate Necrovalley! (Necrovalley|Field Spell|As long as this card remains on the field, negate the effects of Spell, Trap and Monster Cards that affect a card(s) in the Graveyard and neither player can remove cards in the Graveyards from play. Also as long as this card remains on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all monsters that includes "Gravekeeper's" in their card name by 500 points.) Then I summon my Gravekeeper's Spear Soldier! (Gravekeeper's Spear Soldier|4|1500|1000|When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your opponent's Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.) And its ATK goes up to 2000 thanks to the effect of Necrovalley! (1500+500=2000) Now, Spear Soldier, attack his face-down card!Jinzo: You've just destroyed my Cyber Phoenix. (Cyber Phoenix|4|1200|1600|While this card is in face-up Attack Position, negate the effects of any Spell or Trap Card that targets 1 Machine-Type monster you control. When this face-up card attacks or is attacked, and it is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can draw 1 card.) Activate effect of Cyber Phoenix. Draw 1 card from deck. *draws 1 card from his deck*Jerry: And now my Spear Soldier's effect activates! When it attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your Defense Position monster, it inflicts the difference as Battle Damage to your Life Points! Jinzo's LP: 3600Jerry's LP: 4000Jerry: After that I'll set 1 face-down card and end my turn! Jinzo: Turn begin. *draws a card and looks at it* Summon Proto-Cyber Dragon. (Proto-Cyber Dragon|4|1100|900|This card's name is treated as "Cyber Dragon" while it is face-up on the field.) Activate Polymerization. Discard 1 Cyber Dragon, tribute Proto-Cyber Dragon. Summon Cyber Twin Dragon. (Cyber Twin Dragon|8|2800|2100|Fusion|"Cyber Dragon" + "Cyber Dragon" "Cyber Dragon" + "Cyber Dragon" Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Material Monsters. This card can attack twice in the same Battle Phase.) Cyber Twin Dragon. Attack Gravekeeper's Spear Soldier.Jerry: Ugh! Jerry's LP: 3200Jinzo's LP: 3600Mare: *holds his cellphone then calls Sophie* Sophie, I need all of your information about Jinzo, not the card but the past of the Jinzo duelist.Sophie (cellphone): Right away, Agent Octavius.Jinzo: Next. Using Cyber Twin Dragon's effect. Attack again. Target: Opponent's LP.Cyber Twin Dragon loads energy in his mouth then fires it at JerryJerry: *covers his eyes from the light* Ahh!Jerry's LP: 400Jinzo's LP: 3600Jinzo: Turn end. Jerry: Hf.. hf... strong Cyber Twin. But Gravekeepers, don't fail me, I've hid my greatest card in this deck.. and I hope I draw it.. or I'l lose this. *draws a card and doesn't look* To Be Continued Next time, Episode 6: Lightning Vortex Miracle! Cyber Twin's end! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted November 2, 2007 Report Share Posted November 2, 2007 NICE, Mare :P You wanted it to be even more exciting to me? XD The title of the next episode says it all:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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