Yu-gi-oh! - Trails of Starlight...CHAPTER 3 - Kidnapped

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So this is my first attempt for a Fan Fic. Comment and critics are welcome.

My english is not good. I have to say that jjackv2 and legendhiro helped me a lot. So big mention goes to jjackv2 and legendhiro.:D

 

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[spoiler=The Prologue] Six cards scatter around the city called Neo Domino. Each card correspond to a certain constellation; Pegasus (Light), Taurus (Earth), Sagittarius (Dark), Aquarius (Water), Leo (Pyro) and Aquila (Wind).

 

They have chosen their masters, known as Pathfinders. Pathfinders are destined to fight an evil organization, known as The Enlighters. For thousands of years the Pathfinders and the Enlighters continued to fight for the six Zodiac Cards, until the cards suddenly disappeared in the year when the crusader wars stopped.

 

After the disappearance of the Zodiac Cards, the Earth found peace. Now after a thousand years the Zodiac Cards have appeared again, searching for a new generation of Pathfinders to resume the battle started so long ago.

 

 

[spoiler= Chapter 1, The Beginning] “Riiiiing, riiiing…” my cell phone rang “No… Who is it now?!”

 

“Hey, Martin it’s Nick. Do you know what time it is?” said the guy on the other side of the phone

 

“Mhm…I don’t know…” I replied.

 

“IT’S 10 TO 8!!! Hurry the teacher will be here any minute.” yelled Nick.

 

“Oh, s***!!! I can’t be late again. The teacher is gone kill me. I have to hurry.”

 

I jumped out of my bed, and put on a black shirt, jeans and sneakers. I ran from his room and jumped over the stairs. I almost tripped, but I landed gracefully. In the kitchen was my mom, Mrs. Gilford. She was a very nice woman for her age. She has blue hair and is very tall.

 

I passed quickly through the kitchen.

 

"Martin, do you want something to eat?” asked Mom

 

“No, mom. I have to hurry. I will be late at school.” replied Martin

 

“Okay, then just buy something to eat. Do you have some money?”

 

“Yes, mom, But I really have to go now.”

 

“Okay. Bye and good luck at school.”

 

I closed the door and ran to the main street. I was running about 10 minutes then someone passed on a motorcycle. He or she took off the helmet. It was a guy.

 

“Hey, kid. I see that you are also late. Do you need a ride?” said the rider.

 

“Sure, why not. I don’t have anything against late to school” I said sarcastically.

 

I jumped on the motorcycle and the guy started the motor. The wind blew strongly in my face. When we were riding, I couldn’t see anything. I saw only silhouettes from the buildings. Finally we came to the school. I jumped off from the motorcycle and felt a little bit dizzy; the building in front of me is my school, 'Neo Domino Duel Academy'.

 

“Thank you for the ride. What’s your name?” I said.

 

“My name is Benjamin but my friends call me Ben. Glad to meet you.” replied the rider

 

“My name is Martin. Glad to meet you to.” Ben was a head taller than me. I thought “He must be a senior.” Then I ran to the school doors but they were closed. “Oh no. I am late again. They will throw me out of Duel Academy.”

 

I sat next to the doors and thought about how my mother would punish me but even worse, I didn't know what to do if I couldn't go to Duel Academy anymore. Then someone opened the doors. It was my teacher, Mr. Artillery. He teaches duel strategies.

 

“Martin, you are late again! You are such a shame for this school. You will be expelled from the Duel Academy.” said Mr. Artillery

 

“Please, Mr. Artillery don’t expel me from the Duel Academy. I love to go to Duel Academy. My best friends are here. Dueling is the only thing in what I am good.” I replied.

 

“Hmm… Then you got to prove it." he said "Lets make a deal, We are going to duel. If you win, you can stay. But if you lose you are expelled from the Duel Academy.”

 

“Hmm…Ok. I will duel you.” said Martin

 

“Let’s duel!” we both shouted.

 

Both 4000 LP

 

“I'll start first.” sad Mr. Artillery. He drew a card. “I activate Scapegoat”. Four little plushy goats appeared. They looked so harmless. “And I Summon Green Gadget. The effect of Green Gadget allows me to add 1 Red Gadget to my hand. To end I set two cards and it’s your turn. Show me what you got.”

 

“Ok. Let’s go.” I drew and said “I activate Pot of Greed.” I drew two more cards. “Come here! Show yourself, Fiend Megacyber.”

 

“I see you used my advantage because I have more monsters, to summon a Level 6 monster in your first turn. That’s good. I see you paid attention on the class.” said Mr. Artillery probably amazed.

 

“Yes, I don’t sleep every time on your class. But let’s continue with the duel. I summon Armed Samurai Ben Kei in attack position and equip it with Big Bang Shot, Axe of Despair and Sword of Deep Seated."

 

Now my Armed Samurai Ben Kei has 2400 ATK. Fiend Megacyber attack his Goat Token.”

 

 

Mr. Artillery: “Not so fast. I activate my face-down card, Sakuretsu Armor. Your Fiend Megacyber is destroyed.”

 

Martin: “But I still have my Armored Samurai Ben Kei. Attack his Goat Token. The effect of Big Bang Shot makes you lose 2400 Life Points!

 

Mr. Artillery: “Uhh…That hurt little bit.” (LP 4000-2400=1600)

 

Martin: “I activate also Monster Reborn to Special Summon my Fiend Megacyber! For end I set face-down 2 cards.” (LP 4000)

Mr. Artillery: “It’s my turn!” He drew a card. “I summon Red Gadget and I can add 1 Yellow Gadget to my hand. I activate my face-down card, Dust Tornado and I will destroy your right card.”

 

Martin: “I activate my Mystical Space Typhoon and destroy your Dust Tornado!”

 

Mr. Artillery: “Alright, then I just set 3 cards and I end my turn.”(LP 1600)

 

Martin: He drew a card. “I sacrifice my Megacyber to summon Summoned Skull! (ATK 2500/DEF 1200) Attack his Goat Token!”

 

Mr. Artillery: “I activate Mirror Force! That will destroy all your monster in attack position.”

 

Martin: “Unless I activate my Malfunction. I must pay 500 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card. Summoned Skull continue with your attack!” (LP 3500)

Mr. Artillery: “I will redirect his attack to you by activating my card Magic Cylinder.”

 

Martin: “Aaaa!!!” I fell on my knees. (LP 1000)

 

Mr. Artillery: “Martin are you okay? Can you continue with the duel?”

I stood up. “Ok, I am alright. It’s still my turn. Ben Kei, attack!!!”

 

Mr. Artillery: “I have to disappoint you. I activate Draining Shield.” (LP 4000)

Martin: “I end my turn.” (LP 1000)

 

Mr. Artillery: “I draw. I think it’s time to end this duel. I sacrifice my Red and Green Gadget to Special Summon, Ancient Gear Gadjiltron Dragon (ATK 3000/DEF2000)! The most powerful monster in my deck! He also gets a Piercing effect.”

 

Martin. “Ok, but I will still not lose.”

 

Mr. Artillery: “Sorry Martin, but you are wrong. I activate Book of Moon. Your Ben Kei changes into face-down position and destroy all your Equip Cards. Ancient Gear Gadjiltron Dragon destroy his face-down card and finish the duel. Attack with Ancient Hurricane!”

 

Martin: “Nooo!!! His Life Points reduces to 0. “How could I lose?”

 

Mr. Artillery: “I’ve got to say that you are a great a duelist and you could be one of the bests, but you have one problem…”

 

Martin: “What problem? Are my cards not strong enough?”

 

Mr. Artillery: “No. The problem isn’t in your cards then in you. You are to busy with winning that you forgot to play with your heart and that isn’t always important to win. You should have fun. Do you get it?”

 

Martin: “I think I know what are trying to say. Here is my Duel Disk and I will go for my stuffs. That was the deal.”

 

Mr. Artillery: “ There's a mistake you've made." he said "'Ben Kei can attack once foeach equip spell on him. You won't need to. I think that you learned from your mistakes. That is the main thing that we are trying to learn you all in the Duel Academy. So I decided to forget this last time that you are late. But…”

 

“Oh, thank you Mr. Artillery!” He ran to Mr. Artillery and hugged him.

 

“You don’t need to be so emotional. But if you late one more time you will be expelled for real. Is that clear?”

 

Martin stopped hugging Mr. Artillery and stood up like a soldier. “Clear, sir!”

 

“Now go to your class. I will explain it to the teacher why you're late.”

 

Martin ran through the door and finally came to his class.

 

“Sorry because I am late. I…” I stuttered.

 

“You don’t need to explain. Mr. Artillery already told me how the duel went.” said my teacher.

 

“Thank you.”

 

“Sit there and pay attention now.”

 

She is such nice woman. She is about 60 years old. She is my chemistry teacher.

 

(I will skip the next two hours of class and go to the lunch)

 

I walked through the canteen searching for my friends. Then just one guy pushed me. He was almost 2 meters high. You could see that he was going to the fitness-room.

 

“Watch where you go, kid!” said the taller kid.

 

“Hey, you are the one who pushed me. I was just trying to find my friends.” I said a bit angered.

 

“I don’t care for who were you looking for." the kid said "My name is John. I challenge you to a duel. Then you will feel my wrath!.”

 

“Ok, I don’t have anything against a duel.” I said

 

We shouted “Duel!”

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2, Lights Comming]

John: 4000 LP

Martin: 4000 LP

 

“I will start first” yelled John. “First I draw a card. Then I summon Sabersaurus(ATK 1900/ DEF 500) and equip him with Raise Body Heat. So my Sabersaurus has now 2200 ATK. I set two more cards and it’s your turn.” LP 4000

 

“Ok” I drew a card. “Hmmm… My hand isn’t very good but I have to find a way to win this duel” thought I. “I set a monster face-down and one more down. I end my turn.” LP 4000

 

“Just that? Hahaha! This will end soon. I Special Summon my Gilasaurus by it’s effect. Finally I tribute my Sabersaurus and Gilasaurus to summon my, Ultimate Tyranno(ATK 3000/ DEF 2200)!”

A big black-red dinosaur appeared on the field. It was enormous.

 

“Huh! I am in big trouble now.” said Martin.

 

“Ultimate Tyranno attack his face-down card.” jelled John.

 

“My face-down card is Sangan now I can add one monster whose ATK is lower then 1500.”

I searched for my deck and I found my card.

 

“I set two cards and I end my turn. Soon will you feel my real power!” LP 4000

 

“Ok!” I drew a card. “I summon my Dark Effigy in attack position and set one card.”

 

“Hh…” I said. “It’s your turn.” LP 4000

 

 

“I draw! First I discard my Destroyersaurus so I can add a Jurassic World from my deck to hand. Now I activate it. It increase the ATK of all my Dinosaur monster by 300. Also I activate my Big Evolution Pill. This card allows me to Special Summon a Dinosaur without a tribute but I must tribute one Dinosaur. I tribute my Ultimate Tyranno. Come here and show yourself, Super Conductor Tyranno (ATK 3300/ DEF 1400)! Attack with Lightning Slash!”

 

 

“Not so fast! I activate my Mirror Force. So your Tyranno is extinct!”

 

“Urrgh.... my plan, you will be done sooner or later! I set one card and end my turn!” he said, angered.

 

“I draw. I tribute my Dark Effigy to summon Great Maju Garzett! Now its ATK is 3000! I equip him with Axe of Despair. It gives him 1000 ATK. Attack him directly!” I yelled.

 

“I activate my Draining Shield. So now I get 4000 LP.”

 

“No, I don’t think so. I activate Malfunction. I must pay 500 LP but your card is destroyed. Garzett continue with your attack!”

 

“Argh!!!” he screamed, covering his face with his hand.

 

Smoke poured over the field. I couldn’t see anything.

 

“It is over.”

 

The smoke disappeared but he was still standing.

 

“What? How? You should be done!” said me.

 

“I activated my Emergency Provisions and used my Big Evolution Pill as a medicine. So I get 1000 LP.” LP 1000

 

“Dang…I set a card and it’s your turn.” LP 3500

 

“It’s my turn.” He drew a card. “I activate my face-down card, Survival Instinct! I remove four Dinosaur monsters in my Graveyard from play and I get for each 400 LP. I have 2600 LP. Now I summon my Tyranno Infinty! For each removed Dinosaur it gets 1000 ATK. So its ATK is 4000. Attack Garzett!”

 

Both monster collided, energy blossomed outwards, engulfing both of them.

 

"I end!" he declared

 

"I set 3 cards and end!"

 

"What, guess you're already running scared!" he said "I start with Hyper Hammerhead (ATK 1500), Jurassic Battery Ram!"

 

My Life Points fell (LP 2000) "You fell into my trap! I now Special summon Gorz the Emissary of Darkness and 2 tokens!"(Gorz 2700)(Tokens 1500 each)

 

"Right I set 1 card and end!"

 

"My turn!" I said "I activate my set Mystical Space Typhoon! Attack his dinosaur now, token number 1, Hades strike, and my monsters will hit ya' with a direct attack!"

 

All monsters clashed, in a split second, John's Life Points fell to 0.

 

“Huh… This was a good duel. I am little bit sweaty. I’ve got to say that you are a great duelist, maybe one of the bests that I met.” He said that in a smirk.

 

“Thanks. But I think that I am not so good. I was just lucky.”

 

“Ok, if you say so. And I want to apologize to you because of my behavior. I am quick tempered.” said John.

 

“No problem. I understand. I see you are a good duelist.”

 

“Maybe I am ,but I don’t like to show it.”

 

“Hh…Ok. I have to go to class now. Bye. See you soon.” I said that while I was running.

 

“Bye.” He said. But I barely hear it.

 

(I will skip the school.)

 

“Ah…” I relieved. “Finally I am done with school today. Now I must wait for Nick, Joe and Tanya.”

 

“Hey Martin!” someone yelled. It was Tanya. Behind her were Nick and Joe. Joe is her brother. He is one year older then her. They look very alike.

 

They both have black bushy hair and both are little bit dark-skinned. Tanya has a long hair and Joe is close-cropped. They both have dark blue eyes.

 

“Hey Tanya, Joe, Nick.”

 

“Hey!” said Joe and Nick same time.

 

“How's your day?” said I with a big grin on my face.

 

“The teacher enervated me today. So I am in not good mood.” Said Nick.

 

"Nothing special.” Said Joe.

 

“Ok then lets go home. Enough school for today.”

 

So we were walking home and talking about today and other stuff. We came to Joe and Tanya's house. We said goodbye to each other. Nick and me continued our way back home.

 

“So why weren’t you expelled?” asked Nick.

 

“Hh… I dueled with Mr. Artillery and lost. He teached me an important lesson and forgave me. Yes and I can’t be anymore late. If I do I will be expelled for real.”

 

“What was the lesson?”

 

“Ah… I am too tired to explain it to you.”

 

“Ok. Oh we are by your house. Then bye and see you tomorrow. And don’t be late or you now what will happen.”

 

“Hh…Ok. Bye. See you tomorrow.”

 

I opened the door and walked in. My mom and dad were watching TV and talking.

 

“Mom! I'm home! Hey dad.”

 

Mr. Gilford: “Hello son. How was it in school?”

 

Martin: “Nothing special. Just a same old boring day”

 

Mrs. Gilford: “Are you hungry?”

 

Martin: “Yes. Like a wolf.”

 

Mrs. Gilford: “Lunch's in the fridge.”

 

Martin: “Ok.”

 

I went to the kitchen and reheated my lunch --lasagnas. I love lasagnas, my favorite food.

 

I ate the lasagnas and went to my room. There I was playing video games on my PC for 2 hours. I lied down on my bed and fell asleep. Then I suddenly saw a light. I woke up. The light was coming from my Deck. I took my deck and searched for the card that was lightning. It was my Fiend Megacyber. I looked at my card for few minutes and then the card suddenly became blank.

 

“Oh crap! What the heck is happening?!”

 

The card flew out from my hand and flew through my window. I jumped outside chased my card. I think that it’s trying to take me somewhere.

 

I ran into a forest. It was so dark there and the only light source was the card. It has such a bright glow.

 

It flew into a cave. I stopped in front of the cage. I don’t know if this is a good idea to follow. What if I don’t come back?! No, I have to trust my cards and so I will go in there.

 

I went into the cave. It was dark but I can see my card. It was floating there in front of the wall. I came closer to the wall. Something is written on the wall but I can’t read it. I don’t recognize the script. Then I noticed a slot on the wall. It has just the same size as my card. What will happen if I place the card there? The only way to find out is to place it. I took my card and carefully placed it there. Suddenly the wall became white. Small tunnels on the wall became white and combined in one point. The light from my card blossomed outwards and threw me aside. I woke up and came to the wall. My card was there but it isn’t mine. I don’t have that card and where is my Fiend Megacyber? I had so much questions in my head.

 

“You don’t have be afraid.” said a mysterious voice.

 

“Who said that? Is anyone here?” I said scared.

 

“I am. Your card.” said the mysterious voice.

 

“How? It can’t be. Cards cannot talk.” I took the card. It was a shining horse with wings.

 

“Yes we can. But only few people can hear us.” Said my card.

 

“Ok. This is little bit weird. I am talking to my card. But fine, maybe I am dreaming.”

 

“No you are not dreaming. My name is Pegasus, one of the Zodiac Cards.”

 

“What cards?”

 

“Zodiac Cards!”

 

“Zodiac Cards?”

 

“Zodiac Cards are very strong cards and only 6 are in the whole universe, we scattered in the universe until we end up on earth. We appeared when human existed. Wars were held because of us. For thousand of years ,we disappeared but now we finally came back to choose new Pathfinders. And you my friend are one of them.”

 

“Ok. So I am a chosen Pathfinder and what should I do now?”

 

“When the time comes you will now. Now you must go home.”

 

“Wait, wait! I don’t know what to do now. I am very confused.” The card emitted a strong light, the next thing I knew is I'm back home, in my bed.

 

“But how? I was in the cave. Maybe I was just dreaming. But to be sure.” I stood up took my deck and searched for the Pegasus card."It isn't a dream."

 

I went to the bathroom and showered. I jumped over the stairs and went to the kitchen. No one was in the kitchen, like usual ,my mom and dad are at work. I made myself a sandwich, took my backpack and rushed outside. I was surprised. Tanya was in front of me.

 

She looked upset.

 

“What’s going on Tanya?”

 

“J…Joe...” She started crying.

 

„What happened with him?“ said I angered.

 

What happened with Joe? What are these Zodiac Cards? All that you will discover in next chapter.

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 3, Kidnapped] “He is kidnapped.”

 

At the same time somewhere in Neo Domino City

 

Two figures in white passed through the door and they were carrying someone. It was pretty dark in the room so their faces couldn’t be seen. There were just one big window ,in front of it stood someone in a white overcoat. He or she was looking in the window. The weather outside was rainy. The rain taped on the window. Then one of the appearances step out.

 

“My master.” said one of them

 

“Yes?” said the figure. He or she has a sonorous voice.

 

“We brought you the boy you wanted.”

 

The master turned round and began walking. He walked very slowly and gracefully to the young man they brought. He was unconsciousness. It was a young black haired boy, about 16 years old. The master came near his face.

 

“Hmm…So this is one of them. Where is the card?”

 

The other white appearance answered “We don’t know. We couldn’t find it.”

 

The master turned to the man, took him and raised him up

“What did you say? You couldn’t find the card?”

 

“Pease forgive me, my master. We will search for it. But please forgive me.” He almost start crying.

 

“Fine. I will give you one more chance. Find me the card or I won’t be so merciful next time.” The master throws him away. He has the strength of four men.

 

The master walked again to the young man. The young man woke up.

“Where am I? What’s going on? Who the hell are you?” said the boy.

 

“We're an old organization called The Enlighters. We fought thousands of years with the Pathfinders for the Zodiac Cards.”

 

“Wait! What do I have to do with it?” said the boy confused.

 

“Hahaha!” laughed the master. ”You see, we kidnapped you because you should be the one of the Pathfinders but you don’t have a Zodiac Card.”

 

“No, I am not a Pathfinder. This is first time I hear that. You have the wrong guy.” Suddenly the boy put his hand on his left shoulder. He was in pain.

 

“Hah, I don’t agree with you. Perhaps you don’t have the card but you have something else. You have a Starmark.” He came to him and rip off his t-shirt where he felt pain.

 

“Aaaa!” he screamed

 

His shoulder glows green. It was some kind of a mark and glow green. It has a shape similar to an eagle.

 

“This is a Starmark.”

 

Neo Domino City, Martin and Tanya

 

“What?! Who kidnapped him?” I said, angered.

 

“Some guys in white overcoats came and took him away. I couldn’t do anything. I was to scared. He tried to fight them, but they were stronger and…” She started to cry.

 

I put my finger on her lips.

 

“Calm down. I will find them and make them pay!”

 

Tanya jumped on me and hugged me for few minutes. Then I pushed her aside, embarrassed.

 

“Ok, ok. I understand that you are happy now but calm down. I have to find out where they are.”

 

“Hmm… I think that will be easy to find out.”

 

“Why do you think so?”

 

“Because they left this piece of paper.” She gave me the paper.

 

“Come to the harbor with your Zodiac Cards if you want to see your brother alive…So we have to go to the harbor?”

 

“What are Zodiac Cards? I don’t have such card.” said her, confused.

 

“But I know. I have one of them.” I took my deck, take my Pegasus card and showed it to her.

 

“So that is a Zodiac Card?”

 

“Yes, I think so.”

 

“So are we gone give them the card or?”

 

“No! This card is special and I don’t think that they would let him go. This could be a trap.”

 

“If you say so. So are we gone go there?”

 

“Yes, but not we, just I. It’s too dangerous.”

 

“No! He is my brother and I am foul for this.” she yelled.

 

“Fine. You can come with me but prepare your Deck.”

 

“Ok. I will go home for my deck and you wait me here.”

 

She started running. For a girl she is very fast. Now I have to find my Duel Disk. I went into my house, run up the stairs and get in my room. On my table was my black Duel Disk. I took it and put it on my hand. I get out of my house and went to the garage. There was my bike. I started riding. I tried to be more faster as I can.

 

I passed away some houses then just some white suit jumped in front of me. I hastily brake but I fell from the bike. I thought that I hit the person but I didn’t. I crashed in some trash cans and spilled the garbage over the street. I stood up and tried to collect the garbage from the street and then the man in white came to me.

 

“Are you nuts? Why did you jump in front of me?” I said angered.

 

“Hahaha…I know where are you going and I have to stop you!” said the man.

 

“Fine. Let’s duel.”

 

“My name is Luther. Let’s duel!”

 

Both 4000 LP

 

“I will start first!” said Luther and drew a card. “I summon my Batteryman Charger (ATK 1800/DEF 1200) and its effect allows me to Special Summon 1 Batteryman from my Deck and I choose Batteryman AA (ATK 0/DEF 0). I place it in Defense Position. Now my Charger gets 300 ATK and DEF (2100/1500). I set one card(Draining Shield) and it’s your turn.” LP 4000

 

“Ok. Here we go” I drew a card. “I set a monster face-down and set two cards. It’s your turn.”

<> LP 4000

 

“I draw card. I tribute my Baterryman AA to summon Super-Electromagnetic Voltech Dragon!(2400/1000)”

A big machine dragon appeared on the field. It absorbed the Batteryman.

“Now I activate effect of my dragon. Because I tribute Batteryman AA it gets 1000 ATK.(ATK 3400).”

<>

“Now my Voltech Dragon attack his face-down monster!”

The machine dragon ran and almost smashed my card.

“Stop! I activate my card, Sakuretsu Armor and your Voltech Dragon is dead.”

<>

“Hm…Ok. Now my Battery Charger attack his face-down monster.”

A thunder bolt hit my face-down card.

 

“Huh…My face-down monster is Dark Resonator and it cannot be destroyed by battle.”

 

“I set a card and it’s your turn.”

 

“My turn.” I drew a card. I smiled. <> “I summon my Light Effigy in Attack Position (1500/0). I discard my Noisy Gnat and its effect allows me to increase the Level of my monster by 1. I choose Dark Resonator. Now its Level is 4. I tune my Dark Resonator and Light Effigy and Synchro Summon, Light End Dragon (2600/2100)!”

 

A shining light appeared in the sky. Suddenly a dragon came out from the hole. It looks so amazing.

 

“Also I equip it with Axe of Despair.” (ATK 3600)

 

“Heh, I don’t think so. I activate my Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy your Axe of Despair.”

 

“Then I activate the effect of my Light End Dragon. By decreasing its ATK by 500 your Charger loses 1500 ATK and now it has 300 and my Dragon has 2100. Attack my Light End Dragon!”

 

The white dragon rushed on his Charger but something stopped him, something like a shield.

 

“Why didn’t my Dragon destroyed your Charger?” I said confused.

 

“Because I activated my Draining Shield and now I have 6100 LP.”

 

<>

 

“I set two cards and it’s your turn.” 4000 LP

 

“I draw a card. I set one monster face-down, one card in Spell & Trap Zone and change my Charger to Defense Position. My turn is over.” 6100 LP

 

“My turn.” I drew a card. “Now I summon my Dark Effigy and activate my face-down card, Blast with Chain. I equip it to my Light End Dragon (ATK 3100). Dark Effigy attack his Charger!”

 

Bum!!! The Charger disappeared. “Now my Light End Dragon attack his face-down card.”

 

“You destroyed my Batteryman Micro-Cell and now I can summon one Batteryman from my deck. I summon my Baterryman AA. And I can draw a card.”

 

“I end my turn.” 4000 LP

 

“I draw. I activate my Portable Battery Pack. I can summon two Batteryman monsters from my Graveyard. I choose two Batteryman AA’s. Now their ATK is 2000. I summon my Batteryman C in Attack Position. I activate my Short Circuit. If I have 3 Batteryman monsters on the field I can destroy all your cards on the field.”

 

A big shock wave crushed on my monsters and they disappeared.

<>

 

“Now my Batteryman AA’s attack him directly. You are done!”

 

“No! I discard my Kuriboh so I just lose 2000 LP.” 2000 LP

 

“Fine, it’s your turn.” LP 6100

 

<> “I draw.” <>

“I Special Summon my Trap Eater but I must destroy your Portable Battery Pack.”

 

A small black monster appeared on the field and ate his trap.

 

“Also I summon Armed Samurai Ben-Kai. Now tune Trap Eater and Armed Samurai Ben-Kai, Synchro Summon, Dark End Dragon!”

 

Big black dragon appeared on the field. It has a scary face on his stomach.

 

“That still will be not enough.” Said he confident.

 

“But I am not over yet. I activate Monster Reborn and summon my Light End Dragon.!”

 

Again came the white dragon from the sky.

 

“First I activate the effect of my Dark End Dragon. By decreasing its ATK and DEF by 500 I can destroy 1 your monster and I choose Batteryman D. Then I activate the effect of Light End Dragon. I decrease its ATK by 500 and decrease the ATK of your Batteryman AA by 1500. Now my Light End Dragon attack his Bateryman AA!”

 

“Aaaa! That hurted!” said Luther. LP 4600

 

“And my Dark End Dragon attack his other Batteryman AA!”

 

Luther LP 3500

 

“I set a card and it’s your turn.” LP 2000

 

“I set a monster face-down and one card face-down. Your turn.” LP 3500

 

I drew a card. “First I tribute my two dragons to summon my Light and Darkness Dragon! (2800/2400)”

 

An enormous dragon flew to the field. Half of him was black and the other half was white.

The dragon screamed.

 

“I equip him with Big Bang Shot (ATK 3300). My dragon, fly to the sky and destroy his monster with Chaos Breath!”

 

The dragon flew to the sky and nobody could see him. Then suddenly he crushed on his monster.

 

“I activate my Sakuretsu Armor and now your dragon is destroyed!” yelled Luther.

 

“Just you think so. The effect of my dragon allows me to negate the effect but its ATK and DEF are decreased by 500. (2800/1900)

 

The face-down card reveled and it was a bug. The bug jumped on my dragon and bit him. My dragon just disappeared.

 

“What happened? Where is my dragon?” said I confused.

 

“Heh. My card was Ally Bomb. Thanks to my bombs effect I can destroy your dragon and one other card. I choose your face-down card.”

 

<>

 

Suddenly Luther fell on the ground.

 

“Huh…What happened? Why am I so weak?”

 

“You forgot my Big Bang Shot. Thanks to its effect you take Piercing Damage.”

 

Luther LP 1300

 

“Hahaha! That isn’t enough. I am still standing and you have no cards on the field.” He laughed.

 

“Yes, you are right. You are still standing but not for long. I summon my Light End Dragon.!”

 

“How? It can’t be.”

 

“When my dragon is destroyed I can special summon one monster from my graveyard and destroy all your cards you control.”

 

“No! How? I cannot lose!”

 

“It seems you can. Now my Light End Dragon, attack him directly with Pure Light!”

 

My dragon flew in the sky and absorbed the sunlight. He got an enormous power in his mouth. Then he fire it off on Luther. He fell on the ground. I came to him to see if he is all right. He wasn’t moving. Then he became a white bolt. It looks like life energy. I wanted to touch it but it just flew away. I just stare. <>

 

I continue running to her house. I finally came. I knock on the door, No one was responding.

 

I knock one more time and same thing. I came in the house. On the wall next to me was a note.

 

"Hi, Martin. Sorry but I couldn’t any more wait for you. I went to the harbor.

Tanya.

 

<>

 

I ran from the house and continued running to the harbor.

 

[Stigma_Horrizone]

Nice one, Also, If you need a signer's chant, just gimme a call

[.:Traceur:.]

bump...please comm..^^

[lugia61617]

maybe more peoplw will post when you add chapters.

[.:Traceur:.]

i will add them soon...^^

[legendhiro]

i'm looking forward to this for one.

 

oh and by the way...

...his friend...

 

this is me ^_^

 

if you ever need any more help, let me know.

[ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ]

OoOoO! I hope the first chapter is released soon.

[.:Traceur:.]

..o it's you legendhiro...^^

thank you...ok...

the 1st chapter will come soon...

[Stigma_Horrizone]

Take your time

[.:Traceur:.]

chapter 1 is finally up...replay...^^

[Stigma_Horrizone]

good one!

[.:Traceur:.]

tnx...bump...replay guys...

[RyanAtlus]

Don't post images of RL Cards. If you do: spoiler tag.

Other than that: not bad.

[Zeaux]

Pretty cool

BUT i think that Duel is over on the second turn

because of the effect of Ben Kei

It can attacks 4 times cuz it is equipped with 3 equip cards

so if its attack all monsters on the field it is over

Scapegoat 0 DEF - Ben Kei equipped with Big Bang Shot inflicts piercing damage

2400 - 0 x 4 = 9600

The duel is over

[legendhiro]

its good so far. i'm looking forward to what comes next.

[.:Traceur:.]

Pretty cool

BUT i think that Duel is over on the second turn

because of the effect of Ben Kei

It can attacks 4 times cuz it is equipped with 3 equip cards

so if its attack all monsters on the field it is over

Scapegoat 0 DEF - Ben Kei equipped with Big Bang Shot inflicts piercing damage

2400 - 0 x 4 = 9600

The duel is over

 

yes i know...after that in the conversation between Mr. artillery and martin' date=' mr artillery told martin that he made mistakes...^^[hr']

thank you all for the rates...

chapter 2 is coming soon...

[.:Traceur:.]

bump

[Stigma_Horrizone]

you should PM the others when the new chapter is up

[.:Traceur:.]

bump

[.:Traceur:.]

[new] chapter 2 is up

[Mysty]

It looks pretty good so far. I like the Zodiac Cards idea. There are a lot of mistakes in the dueling though. Here are a few:

-You cannot Summon the turn you activate Scapegoat.

-Malfunction doesn't destroy the Trap it negates, it flips it face-down again.

-Malfunction only works on Traps.

-Gorz can be summoned when you take damage only if you have no cards on the field. Also, he only summons 1 token.

-Don't post images of real cards. It doesn't help very much.

 

Other than that you did okay. I'll have to check this fan-fic out again when you have a few more chapters up.

[.:Traceur:.]

thanks for your help...you really helped me...^^

[Stigma_Horrizone]

about the title, it's reply, not replay

 

the chapter rocks!

 

also need anymore quotes?

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It looks pretty good so far. I like the Zodiac Cards idea. There are a lot of mistakes in the dueling though. Here are a few:

-You cannot Summon the turn you activate Scapegoat.

-Malfunction doesn't destroy the Trap it negates' date=' it flips it face-down again.

-Malfunction only works on Traps.

-Gorz can be summoned when you take damage only if you have no cards on the field. Also, he only summons 1 token.

-Don't post images of real cards. It doesn't help very much.

 

Other than that you did okay. I'll have to check this fan-fic out again when you have a few more chapters up.

[/quote']

 

you know, sometimes the writers make some rules oposing to the real ones, and also in anime, joey summoned panther warrior and used scapegoat at the same time.

[.:Traceur:.]

yes i will PM you the card...^^thanks...

[ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ]

I like the effort, well done pal 8).