ryan_rowbotham Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 this is my first set go easy on me ok :P lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 The first is slightly overpowered, the second shouldbe 5 stars, and the 3rd should be a Normal Monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 You're getting better. Still, the same issues we all face though. A bit over powered on the first card, and you need to work on writing a Flip Effect card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Austinspencerman Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 Don't worry. I'm new, too. Just started today and I ain't made my first card yet. You'll get better. We all do. I like the Guardian. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 26, 2007 Report Share Posted October 26, 2007 In the first one, tyron should be in quotations and capitalized ---> "Tyron" rofl...Angel of the sun is a sailor moon.....XD OCG is off on that one, not 100% sure, but I don't think "please note" is a phrased used... And beast shouldn't be effect. 5.5/10 <---you get .5 for using a sailor moon character...still laughing at that XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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