ryan_rowbotham Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Ive Only Made 3 So FAr But Dont Worry They Will Keep Coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Wow... they need a LOT of work. The grammar is horrible and the wording of the effects is so wrong... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 You Don't Have To Capitalize Every Word In The Card :D Its got a few grammar problems, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan_rowbotham Posted October 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Yea Soz Bout Tht Habit Im Newbie Aswell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 We can tell >.> Just try not to cap every word in your effects, and study up in the topic about making real card effects. It might help you a bit. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=6614 thats the link to the thread. As well as take a moment to look up cards by fellow members here. I recomend Remix Duelist, GAK, myself, and a few others. Take a look and see how their cards are writen, and how you can learn from it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan_rowbotham Posted October 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 thanks veinziller heres another two just for fun sorry if effects not good enough or the grammers bad made it before read your posts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 That dragon is not bad, it still needs work in the wording, but a much better job. As for the flame dragon, its ATK and DEF are way over powered. I will post a link that helps explain the ATK of monsters when compaired ot their star levels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan_rowbotham Posted October 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Thanks Again Veinziler ur the best mate i made flame dragon now its included in last post with ice dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Already commented on it. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=11696&pid=197601pid197601 Study that link as well, it will be of great help. And no problem, I like to help those whom care to listen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daxinator Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Ive Only Made 3 So FAr But Dont Worry They Will Keep Comingwow that's low.Final Rating: 7.3/10 a little to over powered and alot of work you need for the cards my friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewhantahndestroyer Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Grammar Is Really Really Bad. You Might Just Go And Look At Some Real Yugioh Cards Before You Attempt Anything Again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daxinator Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 [attachment=9788]thanks veinziller heres another two just for fun sorry if effects not good enough or the grammers bad made it before read your postsnow this my friend is good but one little mistake its not fire or pyro it a dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan_rowbotham Posted October 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Heres Another One Hope you Enjoy Because I Did Making It :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Better, but still needs a hair more work. You always capitalize at the begining of a sentence. And it should say what kind of Summon, Normal Summon, Flip Summon, Special Summon, ect... here allow me: "When this card is Normal Summoned, draw 1 card. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, draw 1 card." Something like that would be a more approaitely (sp?) written effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewhantahndestroyer Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 What the hell is that? That effect is useless and written incorrectly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Sheesh guys, at least he is trying. Unlike most other noobs that come here, post retarded cards, and leave, this guy is trying to learn and make better cards. Cut him some slack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan_rowbotham Posted October 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 i see thanks vein ill use that in my next card i owe you one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan_rowbotham Posted October 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Heres a handy spell card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Not a problem, and its Vain, not Vein. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan_rowbotham Posted October 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 oh yea sorry vainziler my apologies and gratitude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Still needs some work. Remember: Capitalize at the begining of a sentence. As well as Special Summon is capitalized. Instead of level four, say 4 star, and not attributes, but ATK and DEK points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewhantahndestroyer Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Quick Switch isn't bad at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan_rowbotham Posted October 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 i know what your gonna say but i think this card isnt two bad or overpowerd :P[attachment=9792][attachment=9791] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Ryan, try to take a break from the making of cards. Just read up a bit on the links I gave you and on the people I gave as some great card makers. You're making the same mistakes over and over again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan_rowbotham Posted October 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 ok ill take a look but even woth the mistakes pics are gud rite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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