Balvarine Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 [attachment=9777]I need you to immidietly rate this card to check something please.Rate it from 1-10 and maybe i`ll make set of machine cards.I need proffessional advices.About grammar,I said only Summoned to have meaning for ALL summons.I already knew how would i write it correctly.Apologies. I made a little change in the last sentence(It refers to Your turn,Not your opponent`s.)Still I`ll listen to DARK KALE and split up this card in two.I already have a vision of that card.The Creator sometimes doesn`t see his mistakes as others.Something so simple-to split in two cards....I didn`t see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jugador Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Really nice. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rholowie Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 it's good,but I think it has too many effects. Try to tone it down a bit. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Too many effects, as well as grammar issues. You should have: "When a non Machine-Type monster is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, that monster cannot destroy a Machine-Type Monster as a result of battle." That alone would make it a good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Kool, but a bit komplicated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 and i thought i had grammer problems, at least thats what they tell me. maybe you should turn this card into two cards, each with half the effect of this one. i like the effects though, its around the machines. 7/10, just for the grammer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 uh, it's hard to understand a bit so, 4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Change to Machine-Type monster and take out the last 2 or 3 effects to make it a little more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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