Careless Whisper Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 --Subtext says "Why look for love when you think you cannot cry?"Incase anyone notices the sub-text.. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Is the focal the hair, or the body, or both?I don't see any lightning.Sub-text is hardly noticeable.Good thing you posted it under your sig XD. Other than, it's nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 The subtext is supposed to be barely noticeable.. I just mentioned it because I wanted to. For that kind of picture, there wasn't supposed to be any lighting, for he is in an infinite white abyss. Kind of like the construct on the Matrix movie. (The all white room) The focal is both the hair and parts of the body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 The left side has okay flow, but the right side's attempt is distracting. Text is sort of distracting, and rather bad. D:Compo is nice, IMO.Depth is hard to see, to be honest.Blending is okay, but I think can be improved on. =]Lighting is a bit iffy. Not your best, but definitely not your worst. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adama. Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 I really like the composition. Great idea and very compelling and expressive.{Adama} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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