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New SSBB Fanfic. BRAWL WIRED!

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Hey whats up. This is a Fanfic about Brawl being an online game. People can join and choose a character. They talk, battle, and fight bosses from the subspace emissary. Its told from the point of view of Axel, a young boy who just might be the savior the Smash World needs as Tabuu tries to take over. BTW I know the link is down. Just think about Tabuu as an actual figure with his wings spread.

 

Part 1-The Band

[spoiler=Part 1-Chapter 1]I gasped. I was confused and dazed. I was just sitting at my computer desk when I just got warped right into this very game! BRAWL WIRED! I was now sitting in a stool with the brawl roster in front of me. I browsed the characters.

Bowser? No way he's to slow. Poke'mon Trainer? To hard. Ness? HELL NO! Than I saw it, the person I always dreamed of being. Ike.

I immediately picked Ike. I selected Server 790, the only one that didn't have anyone as Ike. I looked around. I saw people socializing and just talking. It looked like a mall. But then I saw a sign it read"BRAWL CAFE. ENTRANCE TO COLOSSEUM TO THE RIGHT."

I walked to the right until I saw a R.O.B sitting by the door. I went up to him and said "Hey dude how do I get to be Ike. He's my character and I'm still me. Boring old Axel."

When I said my name (Axel) , his eyes lit up. "Axel? You just said 'Axel' right?"

"Yeah."

"I'm Rob, the R.O.B. I run this place here. I'm not a player, just an employee. If you're really Axel then I think you'd better follow me."

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Part 1-Chapter 2] "Wow, uh it's kind of heavy." I said.

"Well, um, DUH! It's a god damn sword not a cream puff." replied Rob.

"Now listen that thing over there is a Jigglypuff. If you've played regular ssbb than you would know it's a pretty average opponent. With that sword you could easily kick it's butt!"

"Great idea Rob."

I hesitantly walked over to the Jigglypuff. "Hi I'm Ike. How are you?"

Just than it started to sing. it was kinda weird. I all of a sudden felt tired and drowsy. I dropped to the floor and fell asleep. Next thing I know I'm about 20,000 feet in the air because that Jiggly-thingy hit me with a rollout attack.

"Yeah, that could use some work." Rob chuckled

"You haven't even told me why I'm training like this." I replied.

"Okay listen, a vicious dictator named Tabuu captured our world and now we're all in grave danger. Our masters Master Hand and his brother Crazy Hand tried to stop him. Unfortunately Crazy Hand was killed and Master Hand was possessed by Tabuu. YOU, Axel, are a hero of a great prophecy that is destined to defeat Master Hand and destroy Tabuu and his minions. Also it's very unfortunate that you suck as Ike and also suck absolute ASS at wielding a sword. Are you happy now."

"What exactly does this Tabuu guy look like any way?"

"Like this!"

A hyperlink appeared. I touched it.

OMG

(here's the link)

http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs44/f/2009/143/b/6/Tabuu_by_nintenerd.jpg

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Part 1-Chapter 3]

"T-th-t-that's Tabuu?" I asked.

"Yup" a voice said, and it was not Rob.

"I'm Simon but most people refer to me as Mario. I challenge you to a battle!"

"Hell yeah!!!!" I replied.

Rob sighed.

 

 

 

Jake laughed. Another noob down. Jake was a hacker. He used his hacks to make it look like he was a noob when he should be over level 100 by now. He hustled people and took their points. He was known as "The Hustler of 790." He enjoyed his title. He earned it. Just then a Lucario walked up to him.

"Sir," he said "I'm with the SSBBW security team. I understand you've been hacking in the past several months. I'm afraid I'll have to take you in."

Damn, a moderator. Just what I needed!

Jake ran like hell.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Part 1-Chapter 3.5]

Simon threw a couple of fire balls. I easily dodged them and ran up to him. I tried to use aether but he swung his cape, which turned me in the opposite direction, and hit me at point blank range with a super jump punch.

I didn't even notice the spectators that filled the Colosseum. I did after Rob screamed "Now lets shake things up a bit!" A smash ball appeared in front of me.

 

 

 

Jake and the Lucario ran right past Wulf a user who played as Sonic. He screamed "You guys think you can out run me?" and he began running after them. All three of them ran into the Colosseum where Axel and Simon were fighting.

 

 

 

I grabbed the smash ball and blacked out. The last thing I saw was Sonic chasing Lucario and Link into the Colosseum. I opened my eyes and everything was swirling. I got the smash ball! i ran towards Mario and went to use it but just then time ran out and we were normal people again.

Then Rob said "Good, I gathered all the heroes from the prophecy. We're back on the road. To the real SMASH WORLD!"

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Part 1-Chapter 4]

I was Ike again but this time I felt it. I knew I was Ike. The ground felt real. The sword was cold and the hilt was warm. It was real. The game, it all felt REAL.

I looked around, I was in the stadium. It was me, Rob, Simon, the Lucario who told everyone his name was Fredrik. The sonic, who held up a sign that said "I AM WULF AND UR 2 SLOW jabroni!" and Link who was muttering to himself "Jake Is not the one you want. No way. Jake no hacky. JAKE NO HACKY."

"Shut it Jake." screamed Fredrik. "I won't ban you if you help us wherever we are. Oh and Robert. WHERE THE HELL ARE WE???"

"In the Smash World. You guys are gonna help Axel fight Tabuu.

It was at that exact moment a gigantic flower in fruit of the looms with it's leaves holding people jumped out at us.

 

 

This may sound a little repetitive but

OMG.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Part 1-Chapter 5]

"I'm Petey Piranha King of the Piranha Plants!" the thing sneered. "I serve Tabuu as his dungeon master and no one has ever defeated me."

"If you want to see these people survive I suggest you try to free them now!"

We were sucked into a brawl with that thing. One thing I find weird is that the game is PvP not CPU established. He most be a moderator.

We all tried to brake the cages but they wouldn't even move. I knew we were not in the game. I knew we were in the real Smash World. My lip was bleeding, my legs hurt and I think a rib was broken. We were ready to give up hope when a figure flew out of the sky.

It blasted Petey Piranha with a laser gun and fell down. Petey was dead. The cages broke and the people were free.

I realized who the figure was. It was Wolf. Not my new friend Wulf the Brawl character Wolf O'Donnell.

"Well are yous users or characters?" it asked.

I stepped up "Users."

"Me toos. I can't give you my gender, age or name because Is must remain secret. You never know who's out theres."

I realized that this user had a mic hack were their voice sounds all deep and monotone. They also had a thick Leet accent. Leet was the hacker language. It made no sense and was hard to understand. They add zors and random letters and sometimes use symbols.

Jake stepped up. He spoke in the complex form of Leet with the symbols. I knew they understood each other because they smiled and nodded every now and then.

"Okay," Jake said "Kerry is joining our group."

He turned to Kerry and spoke some Leet.

"Kerry will be referred to as a he. He is a hacker, like me. Kerry knows this world and will guide us to wherever Rob wants us to go."

Fredrik scowled. "TWO hackers. This will not do. We have two hackers too many. When we return you have to give up on your hacks."

Kerry laughed "Gives up haxorz. Hells no. I like haxing. Its my lifes."

Wulf chuckled "C'mon Freddy haxing is his lifes. Ha-ha. Lighten up man. I mean, have you ever kissed a girl? Went to a college party? GET DRUNK? DO YOU LIVE WITH YOUR FRIKIN MOM??? GET A LIFE...s"

Everyone laughed, even Fredrik.

"I have a fun life. I just like being a mod. It's really fun."

Rob spoke this time "Alright, this is our band. We're the ones that are going to stop Tabuu from hacking into the real world!"

"Yeah!!!" everyone cheered.

 

PART 1 END.

Okay so we gathered the band and all made friends. Me and my friends are working hard on this and hope to have Part 2-Chapter 1 up tomorrow. Have a good Brooklyn Day!

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can i be in it? i wanna be link. my real name is jake.

Gotcha. You'll be in chapter 3 and will be introduced as a guy who tricks people into thinking you're a total noob and get major points. Fredrik the Lucario (had to put the names in it just sounds wicked together.) will try to stop you and then you'll run into the middle of Axel and Simon's battle.

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Hey' date=' can you put me in it? I'll be Mario, real name Simon.

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Definitely you'll be Axel's first opponent.

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Okay. You'll be a mod like Rob the R.O.B.

lol can i join? I could be sonic real name WULF(I just like WULF)

Alright you'll be Sonic. You'll just be the average social player. The clown of the group.

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is the "smash ball" reffering to the final smash item?

 

Yup. The official name is smash ball.

Yeah. And I'm liking where this story's going.

 

Yeah. It has a similar idea to the Subspace Emissary except it takes place about 10 years after that. It's not Tabuu's first time in the real Smash World.

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