Speed Drift[/SIG] I may be improving...V2 added!

[Durandamon]

V1:

V2:

CnC...

[Catman25]

That looks nice! Of course I can't cnc much though it looks like you have good smudging/blending or whatever you call it. :o

[Durandamon]

Well, Thank you, Viva La Catman!!!

[Skyfi]

Lack Blending

Add at least a Black Layer behind all that

Focal is bad

Make Render smaller

[Catman25]

I tried, looks like someone else has contradicted my cnc.

[CrazyKev]

^Render size is fine

Blending's fine imo =/

I see the depth and flow.

But lightning is poor.

[Tefached]

lighting is bad

focal is bad

render size is fine

white left corner needs more...

blending needs work, buts decent

little cube/boxes are random...

[Durandamon]

Thanks to everybody for the CnC...I'll give 1 rep to all of you but you are 4...I'll give 10 points to you, Tefached...

[Tefached]

it doesn't matter, i can do without any of both.

But one question:

Are the cubes meant to draw you into that spot?

if so, find a better placement for them, or remove the little light thing.

[Durandamon]

it doesn't matter' date=' i can do without any of both.[b']I did anyways[/b]

But one question: *drums roll*

Are the cubes meant to draw you into that spot? Yes

if so, find a better placement for them, or remove the little light thing. I will

 

:P

[Prada]

I see the depth and flow.

 

Actually, it's pretty flat and has somewhat poor flow. =P

 

Blending is okay, but you need to work on the colors.

The squares are horrible and a focal stealer.

Lighting is pretty bad.

Work on some compo.

[Brendano Harns]

I like it. Great work.

 

I like the fog, but make sure the placement is just right. ;)

 

Maybe make the hand pooping out, and the fog swirling around him?

 

IDK, I just thought that that might look cool. :)

[Durandamon]

added V2...

[Tefached]

V.2 is better. though depth is barely there.

[Brendano Harns]

^That.

 

I like how you brought out the color on the second, but don't bring out the color too much. ;)

[Smeg]

V.2 is better. though depth is barely there.

 

I see it a bit.

 

Maybe put a perspective free transform on the building' date=' just a bit.

 

You are getting better. ;']