Correct Grammar

[cantstaystill]

I need help with the wording of this cards effect.

 

Here is what I came up with, and i need it revised.

 

"Once per turn, during each players' respective Standby Phase, flip 1 face-down card on that player's side of the field face-up. If you cannot, your opponent chooses one card from your hand, and looks at it."

 

 

Thanks in advance

[Boss Z]

that sounds correct to me

[Guest Saboooom]

The "and looks at it" part doesnt sound right. Perhaps it should be "If you cannot, your opponent may look at 1 card in your hand."

[cantstaystill]

thanks

[Serrenox]

Revised Edition: "Once per turn, during each players' respective Standby Phase, flip 1 face-down card on that player's side of the field face-up. If you cannot, your opponent's selects one card. Reveal the selected card.

 

Revised Edition #2: "Once per turn, during each players' respective Standby Phase, flip 1 face-down card on that player's side of the field face-up. If you cannot, you must reveal 1 card from your hand to your opponent.

 

The second one sounds a bit better.