Sonnets From the Abyss

[RickiMinaj]

Oh, you are my lost love, tell me it's true.

So I'll try forgeting you for some time.

Till now though, I can only feel sad blue.

Mad will not be a reason to stay prime.

 

All love grasps me. It slowly tares the soul.

Deny the reasons I push love away.

Give me my place in your world of cold.

The feelings I feel are my sad life and gray.

 

When your dead, I will make sure too not lose.

Oh, to wrought gears of your warm loving sale.

Such sweetness though, still makes my sad heart bruise.

My tears don't make my rolling soul turn pale.

 

Now you must show the roads of love and dread.

Live, you break my memory, so sink dead!

 

 

 

 

This is a sonnet i wrote for one of my classes. Id like to have your opinion on it ^_^

[Wuu.]

I'm not one for poetry and correct me if i'm wrong:

 

In the one thing you say your world of cold, in the other you say stuff about her 'warm' heart.

Is the person having mixed feelings then?

[RickiMinaj]

I'm not one for poetry and correct me if i'm wrong:

 

In the one thing you say your world of cold' date=' in the other you say stuff about her 'warm' heart.

Is the person having mixed feelings then?

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yes, yes he is. And im a girl =P, not a lesbo hon. Its toward a guy. But yes, it had to mae it mixed feelings. Its really hard to right sonnets due to the iambic pentameter. the unstressed stress confrontations through all 14 lines spell out Hell