Well, here goes.

[Adama.]

I don't particularly like finding images, and I haven't had much time lately anyways, so I think I'll try to do a written card off the top of my head. I'm just gonna start typing and go.

 

Winged Paradox

DARK

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Spellcaster/Effect

When this card is Normal Summoned, destroy it during the End Phase. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. If this card is destroyed by battle it is removed from play. Every time this card is Summoned, flip a coin and roll a six sided die. If the result of the coin flip is heads, your opponent takes damage equal to the result of the die roll x100. If the result of the coin flip is tails, you take damage equal to the result of the die roll x100.

ATK:1500/DEF: 1700

I would appreciate rates and comments.

[Shadow Mir]

I think the dice is a bad idea, but the coin could do th same thing. Just say, "Flip a coin. If heads, your opponent takes damage equal to the amount of cards they have in their hand. If tails, you take damage equal to the amount of cards out of play."

Especially devestating against slipher the sky dragon!

 

8.75/10

[Adama.]

I agree with Shadow Mir's suggestion, and I also see your point. I will make it so it is also removed from play when Tributed. However, you are incorrect with your OCG correction. Using "may" is only acceptable in older OCG, the newer OCG always uses can. Please do not spread bad advice like this throughout the forum, I would hate for someone to follow it :{. Otherwise, thanks for the tips everyone :}.

[Ilias Residen]

Good idea, but omit the die and say "inflict damage equal to original ATK of this monster." or something similar. i like the idea, and i bet a really cool picture would come with this.

9/10

[Adama.]

Alright, second draft of the effect:

When this card is Normal Summoned, destroy it during the End Phase. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. If this card is destroyed by battle or Tributed it is removed from play. Every time this card is Summoned, flip a coin. If the result is heads, your opponent takes damage equal to the number of cards in their hand x100. If the result is tails, you take damage equal to the number of cards in your hand x100.

 

Is that better? :}

{Adama}

[Adama.]

Yes but I don't want to keep it in play for too long. Remember, it's only a level 4, and not all the created cards have to be super powerful. It's just supposed to give you a shot at life points and then die.

{Adama}