302930 Posted October 22, 2007 Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 Firest card i posted i will post more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rholowie Posted October 22, 2007 Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 It's defense is WAY too high. Try lowering it to something a bit more realistic. Also, you need to capitilize words such as Normal Summon. Other than that, it's your first card so 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted October 22, 2007 Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 make it's DEF around 4200, it would be more balanced that way3.87/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caleb879 Posted October 22, 2007 Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 its defence is way to high i might give it a 5 or 6. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted October 22, 2007 Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 Like they say, caps where needed, and lower the defense a bit. All in all, not a bad card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlblack123456789 Posted October 22, 2007 Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 0/10 non relilisti Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NineTailKid Posted October 22, 2007 Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 TOo high def Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted October 22, 2007 Report Share Posted October 22, 2007 Bring it's DEF down around to 4000-5000 and it'd be okay,it's still a pretty big target for Fissure / Smashing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 lol, its all been said, so I won't say it... If it can't be set then that kills alot of the fun of it... =/ When I used to play this game, my 3rd most joyful moment was watching some idiot ram his low attack monster into my high defense monster (the first being watching his uber monster get eaten by my man eater, the second being destroying aforementioned uber monster with trap hole =D ) 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xbon Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 0/10 bring its defence down to 3500- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxMySox Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 great job for your first card, just lower the defense, keep it up! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 well, it has waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too high def. lower it. plus some letters need capitalizing. 6/10 for first effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radisciple90 Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 I think you can put it at around 4000 defense, that would be realistic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
II DEFiiNED II Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 I like it, just some capitization problems, and low the DEF to around 3800 or 4000. And i don't know what carlblack123456789 is talking about because his cards aren't realistic at all either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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