~Makaveli~ Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Well I made this and it is not very good but I though I would post it anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 WellIt's too simpleIt lacks flowThere's a little blendingNot much depthseems a little overbright or too white or somthing There's potential here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 I like your effects.What'd you do to the render though? It almost looks like you either repasted it after you moved it a bit or you motion blurred it. Not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Makaveli~ Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 I like your effects.What'd you do to the render though? It almost looks like you either repasted it after you moved it a bit or you motion blurred it. Not bad. I actually did both. but thanks ^_^WellIt's too simpleIt lacks flowThere's a little blendingNot much depthseems a little overbright or too white or somthing There's potential here OK thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 yeah. Thats what I thought. Try to keep it either stationary, or just don't move it as far next time. Some parts are oversharpened and some are too blurry. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Makaveli~ Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 yeah. Thats what I thought. Try to keep it either stationary' date=' or just don't move it as far next time. Some parts are oversharpened and some are too blurry. =/[/quote'] OK thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Nice conceptIt's too bright at some points.Add a C4D on 'screen' or 'lighten' to give it some flow.Blur some of the render's outlines to help blending.Add some effects to make it more interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Makaveli~ Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 OK thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 it hink its blurry, but it may be the fact that its over bright try darkening a bit and re post it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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