Ezio Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 [align=center]Okay another guess:[spoiler=My newest guess]Is it snow white and the seven dwarves?[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 [align=center]Okay another guess:[spoiler=My newest guess]Is it snow white and the seven dwarves?[/align] Lol, i was thinking Noo noo and the tellytubbys but yours is more excact ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 In order of appearance, the seven cloaked people would be: AltairRavenUmbra~JG~AlucardTeen GohanCecil Harvey [spoiler=also known as]The Awards Council! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 [align=center]Oh noez. Nitton got it :shock:[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 In order of appearance' date=' the seven cloaked people would be: AltairRavenUmbra~JG~AlucardTeen GohanCecil Harvey [spoiler=also known as']The Awards Council! I'm sorry but we don't comment on speculations and rumors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 I'll just wait and see, then. But I'm pretty sure I'm onto something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Will organization XIII appear in this fic? It's not a rumor or speculation, it's a direct question so you do comment on those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Members of the organization as well as a mention may appear but the existence of Organization XIII will not likely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 26, 2009 Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 I like the second chapter. It's mysterious. =o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 =] Thanks for reading it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 3rd Chapter is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 [align=center]Woah awesomeness, you brought Larxene, Zeaxeon and Roxas in![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 I planned to from the beginning, just pushed Chapter 3 (what happens in the mountain) back for more dramatic effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Alpha Wolf is definitely Father Wolf. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 More intriuging questions but probably lest specific to the plot Why does Nexis sound so similar to Nexev?Why is Fenir seem to be in charge of the most powerful Organization next to the Government?When will Nexev start becoming vain enough to demand a cameo?Why does a noob like Nexis have super powers?Does the above question make Nexis a Mary Sue?How long will this go on until I am labeled a over critical jerk?Why does the recent chapter never use spoiler tags?How is Alpha Wolf if he is not Fenir?Will Alucard appear in the story?Will Cyber Altair?When did a schemer like Zexaeon become a overly muscular person? Some of those questions I actually want to ask. Serious about the Mary Sue thing, Nexis seems to have gained powers in 15 minutes what takes an average super non-mod member months or years to accomplish. Try to avoid this path if possible. Also try not to be offended, I am overly critical, you get much more accomplished pointing out flaws than pointing out what you did right. Aly, why Father Wolf? Roxas doesn't even like him, (I think) why should Roxas play second fiddle then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 I knew people would notice how he got all powerful. You'll understand everything in the future chapters. Oh and I am putting the previous chapters in spoiler so it isn't cluttered. Alpha Wolf is definitely Father Wolf. I'm sorry but we don't comment on speculations and rumors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Encalade Shinamisu Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Why am I not in this? ^That's a good question... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Aly' date=' why Father Wolf? Roxas doesn't even like him, (I think) why should Roxas play second fiddle then.[/quote'] Because he's one of the biggest, if not biggest, trolls in the General Section. And it was stated that General was ruled by trolls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 You need to have questions in italics Mineku. Also Altair my point is why don't you do that with the new chapters as well? Wait, forgot the italics. Also Altair my point is why don't you do that with the new chapters as well? Also Alucard, wouldn't that point be vague since Roxas still hates Wolf. Also why isn't Nexis even surprised he is suddenly Mary Sue himself? He acts like he always had Mary Sue powers, he was afraid of going to the upper levels and yet defeats two legendary members as if they were nothing, then he accepts it as if he was always this powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Encalade Shinamisu Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 I don't need Italics. I'm too good for that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 You don't appreciate your power until you use it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Love chapter 3, Larxene now offically owns the fic :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Except that she lost, thus making her OOC. She never loses, reality bends to make sure she wins all the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 The only thing that was in character was in away the sexy girl description, but Altiar only write that because of the bewbs O.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zexaeon Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 I like chapter 2, and to some extent, chapter 3. ^^; But at this point, I'd rather you change that character's name from Zexaeon to something else. Sorry, but it's a bit misrepresenting of me. =o Both in real life and in the internet personas I use, I've never been a big, muscley person. I also don't care for swords. Lastly, that character seems like your typical, brawny, bumbling, idiot (especially with how he talks. I never talk like that, and hardly ever raise my voice). =p So I'm fine and all, but if that's what my character is like, I'd rather not be in it. Good read,though, and it's a vast improvement from chapter 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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