Need advise on my JPads.. :D

[Kale]

.....what are JPads? It is short for Japanese Ads, something that i have been recently doing for my threads in Realistic Cards. In Japan they have preview ads that show off a pack before it is released, and i took the idea and did some of my own.

 

Below is a JPad that i made today for a set that i bumped. something seems off, like it is too cluttered. Part of that is the cards on the bottom, i know that. i want you to tell me what i should change/remove from the pic.

 

all CnCs are appreciated, just no flaming or insulting of any members. especially me. ;)

 

 

thank you for viewing, and i hold all of your opinions highly. ;)

 

if this JPad makes you interested in the set, please view it. that is what it is made for, ironically. XD

 

NOTE: i know the Japanese grammar is wrong. dont tell me that... it is meant for show. ;)

[-Lightray Daedalus-]

Thats Smex I like it I wanna Have one of those sometime....I'll Gotta do a Super set first Good work

[Kale]

Thats Smex

 

i stopped reading for a moment after that statement... :D thanks! i thought this was a good idea...

 

i would do some for people, and starting thursday i can have a bunch of time to do them. ;)

 

all i ask for is a render, a color scheme, a title, and 4 or fewer cards and i will make it happen. ;)

 

thank you for the comment.

[~ Chidori-Kun]

I'm gonna have to make one of these because of peer pressure lol

 

The text cirlce is blurry...

 

This is still awesome...

 

All your stroking is smexy (pun intended)

[Neo Fugario]

Add a paper box and sparkles plz!

Fill the tech circle with a metal pattern so it'll fix the blurry part.

Glow up the card preview!

Each big line of the text should haz 2 small lines.

That's all ;)